写作课件

does he speak about his own family →Never__________________________________________
A picture is on the wall saying “ save water” . On the wall _____________________________ is a picture saying “ save water”.
Join the 2 sentences below in different ways.
Mr Xiong teaches physics. It is known to us all.
1.It is known to us all that Mr Xiong teaches physics. 2. What is known to us all is that Mr Xiong teaches physics. 3. As is known to us all, Mr Xiong teaches physics. 4. Mr Xiong teaches physics, which is known to us all . 5. Mr Xiong teaches physics and it is known to us all.
影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅
上下贯通、一气呵成
正确而巧妙地使用好连接词
1.表递进
and,then,also,besides,morever,what's more furthermore,in addition,more than that... but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand... because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of...
of school. The reasons can be listed as follows. To ____________, most families are too poor to send begin with As __________, they have no choice but their children to school.a result to stay at home and make money. In__________, some parents think there is no need for addition their daughters to go to school. Therefore, they don’t let them go to school. Finally _________, some children are not interested in their To make matters worse studies. ______________________, some wouldn’t like to go to school. as a result; In addition ; To begin with ; However In my opinion; Finally ; To make matters worse ; In addition
影响给分的因素之四：
文章的思想； -----独到 的见解
William Shakespeare (2008高考湖南卷书面表达) Do you know Hamlet? Have you read The Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favorite English writer and the man of all ages! Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ over the world, I like him because his comedies and ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ language; I admire him because his keen sights set me ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿___________________________ thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! Since “Life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone had his own role to play. and I will try my best to play my role well.
A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了. I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.
Your letter of August 15th reached/got to me this morning
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影响给分的因素之二：
文中所采用的语言材料
人靠衣装，文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；
B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
Practice
Find some similar words or phrases of the followings
1. good 2. think
பைடு நூலகம்
perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent
Which one attracts you more?
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点
Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?
使用强势句式，增强语句表现力
1.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well. 2. Radio broadcasts didn’t begin until 1920. 3.He never speaks about his own family. 4.Though he is a child, he knows a lot. Child though/as he is, he knows a lot →___________________________________.
改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化
1.He got excited when he heard the news. Hearing news, he got excited. →___ the 2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty. Hungry and thirsty →_________________, the girl went home. 3.I studied Chinese, English and physics at school. The main subjects I studied at school →______________________________include Chinese, English and physics . 4.It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers. →_________________, Mr. Smith was watering flowers Early in the morning in the garden _________________.
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1.The character of this gala is that it relates to people’s life. 2.The most striking feature of this gala is its _______ traditionally close link with ordinary people’s life. ____________________________
２.表转折
３.表因果
４.表目的
５.表归纳
in order that,so that,for the purpose of... in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion, in a word,on the whole...
Now in the country areas, there are many children out
in one's opinion/view
hold the view that …
As far as sb is concerned
3.clever
wise bright smart intelligent cute
1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。
A strong/big earthquake happened in Tangshan in the 1980 There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
How glad →_______we were to see crops and vegetables growing well!
→It was_________________________________________ not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began
小结： 1. 作文的卷面； -----整洁的卷面 2. 文章的语言； -----丰富的词汇
3. 行文的流畅； -----流畅的结构 4. 文章的思想； -----独到的见解
Writing task: To make the Yulin River a better river, please write a letter to the government, listing the current problems the river is facing and giving suggestions. • Current situation • Causes of the situation • Measures to be taken
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3.Young people don’t want to watch TV ,so they pay attention to other forms of celebration. 4.Young people focus their attention on other forms of __________________________ _________________________ celebration instead of losing themselves in TV.