专题10 写人与叙事-2021年高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式集锦
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2021届全国新高考英语备考复习英语作文高分句型整理1.Only + 状语置于句首,引导倒装句。
P1: 只有这样我们才能享有平等的关系。
Only in this way can we enjoy an equal relationship.P66: 直到那时我才意识到,和他人合作是多么重要。
Only then did I realize how important it was to cooperate with others.P123: 只有静下心来观看这部电影你才能真正欣赏到它的魅力。
Only if you see the film quietly can you appreciate its charm.P161: 只有共同努力我们在将来才能过上和谐而健康的生活。
Only with joint efforts can we live a harmonious and healthy life in the future.仿写:如果你多练习,你就能提高成绩。
2.表否定意义的副词放在句首,引导倒装句。
P1: 至于我,我永远不会忘记我患传染病的日子。
As for me, never will I forget a time when I suffered from an infectious disease.仿写:我永远不会忘记我们在一起学习、生活的时光。
3.Not only... but also...引导的倒装句。
P79: We should keep a balanced diet and do exercises regularly.→ Not only should we keep a balanced diet, but also do exercises regularly.P130: We have studied in the same classroom and lived in the same dormitory.→ Not only have we studied in the same classroom but also lived in the same dormitory.P161: The job will not only earn me much money to support the family, but also satisfy the needs of the society.→ Not only will the job earn me much money to support the family, but also satisfy the needs of the society.仿写:疫情期间,我们要出门时要戴口罩、勤洗手,避免去人群密集场所。
作文必备的65个高级句型一.表达个人观点句型1.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththelatteropiniontosomeextent.就我而言,在某种程度上我同意后者的观点。
2.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iamreally/completelyinfavorofthetest/policy.就我而言,我真的/完全支持这场测试/这个政策。
3.Inconclusion/aword,Ibelievethat…总之,我相信......4.Thereissometruthinbotharguments,butIthinkthedisadvantagesof …outweighitsadvantages.这两种观点都有一定的道理,但我认为……的缺点超过了它的优点。
5.Inmyopinion/view,weshould...在我看来,我们应该......6.Asforme,I…至于我,我......7.AsIseeit,…正如我看到的,......8.Frommypointofview,….在我看来,......9.Personally,Ithink…我个人认为......10.Myviewisthat…我的观点是......11.Ithink/consider…我认为/考虑......12.Itake/holdanegative/positiveviewof…我对......采取/保持消极的/积极的看法。
二.原因分析型常用句型13.Thereareseveralreasonsfor…,butingeneral,theycomedowntothreemajorones...有一些原因,但总的来说,归结为三大原因。
14.Therearemanyfactorsthatmayaccountfor…,butthefollowingarethemosttypicalones.有很多因素可以解释...…,但以下是最典型的因素。
新高考英语应用文写作提分技能(模板+素材+策略)基础话题之写人与叙事距离高考还有一段时间,不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生,愈是临近高考,能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节,态度是否主动积极,安排是否科学合理,能不能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战,其效果往往大不一样。
以下是本人从事10多年教学经验总结出的以下学习资料,希望可以帮助大家提高答题的正确率,希望对你有所帮助,有志者事竟成!养成良好的答题习惯,是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。
做题前,要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项,并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时,切忌跟着感觉走,最好按照题目序号来做,不会的或存在疑问的,要做好标记,要善于发现,找到题目的题眼所在,规范答题,书写工整;答题完毕时,要认真检查,查漏补缺,纠正错误。
总之,在最后的复习阶段,学生们不要加大练习量。
在这个时候,学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式,最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。
英语最后的复习要树立信心,考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”,遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。
越到最后,考生越要回归基础,单词最好再梳理一遍,这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。
另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。
【素材集锦】[常用词语]diligent勤勉的,刻苦的be born in ...出生在.....humorous有幽默感的be/ come from a wealthy family来自于一个富裕家庭smart bright/ clever聪明的independent独立的be born into a peasant family出生于一个农民家庭patient 有耐心的generous慷慨的,大方的enthusiastic热情的a 1. 80-meter-tall boy一个1.8米高的男孩efficient效率高的overweight超重的intelligent有才智的slim苗条的creative创造(性)的look your age容貌与年龄相当capable有能力good-looking好看的,漂亮的qualified符合资格long- /short-sighted远近视的speak English fluently 流利地讲英语fashionable流行的,时髦的have a gift for有.....的天赋charming/ attractive迷人的,吸引人的be skilled in在....方面熟练well dressed穿着讲究的be experienced in在...方面有经验warm-hearted热心肠的,友好的be fond of/ enjoy/love喜欢absent-minded心不在焉的,健忘的be interested in对.....感兴趣bad-tempered易怒的,发脾气的lose interest in ......失去兴趣talkative爱多说话的,健谈的be crazy about ......狂热strong willed意志坚强的be tired of .对....厌倦major in sth.主修be in good health/shape身体健康win a scholarship获得奖学金energetic精力充沛的get a master's degree获得硕士学位well built 身强力壮的win a gold/silver/copper medal 获得金/银/铜牌suffer from...患.....win first prize获得一等奖graduate from...毕业于.....[常用句子]◆各介绍人物的生平1. Born into a poor family, he suffered a lot in his childhood.出生在一一个贫困的家庭,他在童年时代受了很多苦。
记叙文写人记事类记叙文要按照记叙文的六要素(时间、地点、人物、起因、经过、结果)安排内容,把事件、人物或场景交代清楚即可。
文章要言之有物,尊重事实,有中心,有重点,有逻辑。
万能模板______(人物)Among all the people I know,I admire______(人物)the most.______(人物),born in______(生平),is a(n)______(职业),who______(对人物补充说明).He/She has a talent for______(才能),always______(补充说明).Through hard work,______(人物)established______(作为),which has helped______(产生的结果).Tough,stubborn and determined,______(人物)made great contributions to______(贡献).Following his/her steps,I can______(对你的影响).That is______(人物),my most respected person______(人物)is a universal hero and a model of our time!高分句型开头1.There are a lot of respectable people around us.我们身边有很多值得尊敬的人。
anized by the Students' Union,a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmerspick peaches last weekend.上周末,由学生会组织的一群志愿者去希望农场帮助农民摘桃子。
3.We took part in the summer camp held by our school this July,which made us very excited.今年7月,我们参加了学校举办的夏令营,这让我们非常兴奋。
高考英语应用文写作常用句型全汇总(提分必备)一、感谢信1. 我写信想向你表达我对你的感激之情,因为在你的帮助下,我英语取得了很大进步。
I'm writing to extend/express/convey my gratitude to you because with your help I have made much progress in English.2. 多亏了你的慷慨帮助,否则我将一事无成。
Thanks to your generous help, or I could have gone nowhere.3. 没有你的帮助,我不可能取得这么大的进步。
If it hadn't been for your assistance, I wouldn't have made much progress.4. 是你慷慨的帮助让我得到这个好机会。
It is your generous help that enables me to obtain this splendid opportunity.5. 是你的好客和帮助让我的旅行变得很有意义和收获。
It was your hospitality and great help that made my journey fruitful and worthwhile.6. 希望你方便的时候能到中国来玩。
I really hope you can come to China for a visit when it is convenient for you.7. 对于你的关心与付出,我再次表达真挚的感谢,并永生难忘。
Thanks again. Please accept my sincere thanks for your caring and efforts, which I will never forget.二、道歉信1. 之前答应你下周末一起去北京玩,很抱歉,现在我去不了了。
高考英语读后续写:必备描写素材读后续写基本是以记叙文为主,而记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容,以叙述为主要表达方式来反映丰富多彩的现实生活的一种文体。
一般来说,完成一篇完整的记叙文写作,需要选取合适的角度、按照一定的顺序组织素材进行叙述,其中包括六个基本要素:时间、地点、人物,事情的起因、经过和结果,即我们通常所说的五个“W”(what, who, when, where, why)和一个“H”(how)。
除此之外,鲜明的主题和生动的语言,也是一篇优秀的记叙文所不可或缺的。
描写作为记叙文的一种辅助的表达方式对加强文章的表现力发挥着重要的作用,它要求我们善于捕捉细节、刻画细节,有时还可以用上比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法。
一篇好的作文往往因为一两处细节描写而出彩。
同样地,议论、抒情的表达方式对记叙文主题的展现也发挥着重要的作用。
一、情感心理描写在写作中,对人物情感的描写常常能使人物的形象显得生动鲜活。
人的情感可以分很多种,如喜悦、满意、失望、悲伤、憎恨、愤怒、惊讶、恐惧、赞赏等等。
在英语中有很多不同的词和句式来表达这些不同的情感。
喜悦1. He is very happy and sweet. 他又高兴又甜蜜。
2. They didn’t know what to do with themselves for joy. 他们高兴得不知道怎么办好。
3. He jumped for fun. 他高兴得跳了起来。
4. Her face brightened up. 她喜形于色。
More examples:1. The smile on her face shone like a diamond.2. His eyes twinkled with pleasure.3. I was wild with joy.4. I was pleased beyond description.5. She wore a shining smile on her face.6. Her smile lit up the whole room.7. She shed tears of joy.8. She was overflowing with happiness.9. Her flushed face was shining with excitement.10. I was floating on air.满意1. The result is satisfactory. 结果令人满意。
21.应用文写作(考情分析与写人记事)【题型总览】养成良好的答题习惯,是决定成败的决定性因素之一。
做题前,要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项,并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时,切忌跟着感觉走,最好按照题目序号来做,不会的或存在疑问的,要做好标记,要善于发现,找到题目的题眼所在,规范答题,书写工整;答题完毕时,要认真检查,查漏补缺,纠正错误。
【考情分析】课标解读要求考生根据提示进行书面表达考生应能: 1.清楚、连贯地传递信息, 表达意思; 2.有效运用所学语言知识考试年份试卷名称命题形式写作文体主题语境写作话题写作内容2023新高考Ⅰ卷提纲建议信人与社会学校生活针对分组存在问题提出建议2022新高考Ⅰ卷提纲邀请信人与社会学校生活邀请外教做一次访谈6月浙江卷提纲邀请信人与社会学校生活邀请同学一起前往图书馆自习室1月浙江卷提纲邮件人与社会日常生活分享文化节活动经历2021新高考Ⅰ卷提纲投稿人与社会学校生活庆祝创刊十周年6月浙江卷提纲投稿人与社会学校生活参观学校举办的学生国画作品展1月浙江卷提纲发言稿人与社会学校生活写发言稿欢迎来访学生【考向分析】选题特点体裁和题材相对稳定。
以应用文为主, 选材内容均与学生学习、生活及社会热点相关素养考查中国的传统文化仍旧是考查的重点, 借用体裁蕴含其中, 体现英语学科的核心素养, 体现人与自然、人与社会、人与自我三大主题, 体现立德树人、家国情怀、文化使命等命题特点命题形式较为稳定。
提纲类写作成为主流, 提示内容较为开放文体不再拘泥于书信体,报道、通知、发言稿等各种应用文体都有可能涉及与考生的学习和生活密切相关。
话题涵盖学校生活、社会生活、参观旅行、人物介绍、课外活动等方面话题场景性和真实性突出,体现中外交流和正能量汉语提示简洁,要点明确,任务具体,考生的可发挥性强[真题示例](2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。
高考英语作文记叙文常用句式及范文1.由于她的辛勤工作和指导,我们对她感激不尽。
2.他说他将把他的余生奉献给教育事业。
3.我被他说的话所鼓舞,并下决心长大后成为一名像李老师一样的老师。
4.看到到处都是像瓶子和香蕉皮这样的垃圾,我们感到震惊。
5.他们恭恭敬敬地向老人们赠送了鲜花和水果。
6.上午8点,我们聚集在大青山山脚下,兴高采烈地向山顶进发。
7.它不仅让我们亲近自然,让我们从繁重的课业中得到放松,而且促进了我们之间的友谊。
8.看到一排排的树木,我们都有一种成就感。
9.我们中的一些人用纸花和气球装饰我们的教室。
10.他们所做的给别人带来了快乐,也丰富了他们自己的生活。
1.We cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance.2.He said that he would devote the rest of his life to the cause o education.3.I was inspired by what he said and made up my mind to be a teacher like Mr. Li when I grow up.4.We were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.5. Respectfully,they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.6.At 8:00 am,we gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits.7. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work,it also promoted the friendship among us.8.Seeing the lines of trees,we all had a sense of achievement.9.Some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons.10.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.范文:根据下面的提示,用英语写一则80至100词的日记。
高考英语应用文写作高分必背句式一、新闻报道【写作架构】新闻报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据,对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。
写作过程中要保持事件的真实性、准确性,语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂,不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。
通常写作结构为:第一段:导语集中阐释所报道事件的来龙去脉第二段:主体详细叙述所报道事件的起因、经过和结果第三段:结语对该事件进行简要总结或评论【必背句式】1、首段常用语① In order to enrich our school life, our school organized ...为了丰富我们的校园生活,我们学校组织了......② Recently the issue/problem of ...has been brought into focus/brought into public attention/concern.最近 ......的问题已成为焦点/引起了公众的注意/关注。
2、主体部分常用语① As scheduled, the activity started at 8 o'clock on Saturday morning and it lasted for three hours.活动如期于周六上午8点举行,持续3个小时。
② The activity was so popular with ...that it attracted hundreds of them.这个活动在......中很受欢迎,吸引了数百人。
3、结尾常用语① In a word/To draw a conclusion, I believe we will ...总之,我相信我们将......② Undoubtedly, this event can not only enrich our ..., but also offer us opportunities to ...毫无疑问,这次活动不仅可以丰富我们的......,还给我们提供......的机会。
应用文是高中英语常考的文体之一,命题形式多为文字提示。
书信、通知、日记、发言稿、报道等都是常见的应用文体。
在应用文的写作中,往往需要用到特定的表达方式和比较规范的格式,所以同学们平时要注意积累一些常用的句型、习惯表达和各种应用文的正确格式(模板)。
考试的时候对英语写作一定有帮助哦!一. 普通书信开头I was delighted/glad to receive your letter. 很高兴收到你的来信。
Your letter came to me this morning. 我今天早上收到了你的来信。
I have received your letter of June the 29th. 我收到了你于6月29日的来信。
How nice to hear from you again. 很高兴再次收到你的来信。
How is it going最近怎么样You asked me about(problem,question...),now let me give you some advice. 你在来信中询问我,现在,让我给你一些建议。
It has been a long time since we met. 我们很久没见面了。
How time flies!Its three months since I saw you last time.时间过得真快!我们有三个月没见面了。
Im writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America. 我写信是为了感谢你对我在美国期间的帮助。
结尾I am looking forward to receiving your letter. 我期待你的来信。
Thank you in advance. 提前谢谢你。
Please write to me as soon as possible. 请尽快回信。
2021年年年高考英语写作指导:写人篇写人的英语作文在高考中不少见,什么样的作文更能吸引人呢?下面请看语文迷为大家带来的技巧。
写人记叙文,一般为肖像描写、行动描写、语言描写、心理描写以及对细节的描写,应根据要求,灵活掌握,突出重点。
【几点注意】1.使用正确人称和时态。
一般现在时-描写人物外貌、性格、兴趣等一般过去时-描写人物出生、教育背景、经历、事迹人称:第一人称或第三人称2.介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等,包括所给的全部信息点,不能遗漏或随意添加。
3.对所给的信息进行适当重组,安排好写作顺序,突出重点信息。
4.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。
【常见词语】外貌特征:漂亮,漂亮,好看,英俊,长相普通,有一个大鼻子,一个大鼻子微笑,矮,高,瘦,强壮,白发,1.80米高,…性格特点:心不在焉、迷人、迷人、聪明、聪明、自信、顽皮、健谈、勤奋、懒惰,友好,慷慨,乐于助人,善良,热心,耐心,幽默,脾气好/坏,独立,心胸狭窄……童年情况:作为一个15岁的男孩,出生于一个贫穷家庭的儿子,在他的童年时期过着幸福/艰辛的生活,他的童年是在,兴趣爱好:喜欢做,擅长,感兴趣,喜欢,疯狂,满意,做得好,喜欢做,有强烈的愿望去做,渴望/渴望去做),以做为乐趣,…教育背景:被北京大学录取,被录取,考试不及格,获得硕士学位学位,好好学习,出国深造,毕业,主修,获得博士学位,通过考试,积极参加……成就或事迹:成为团队中的一员,鼓励某人做某事,为某事放弃自己的生命,接受诺贝尔物理学奖,创下新的世界纪录,获得一等奖,获得一枚金/银/铜奖章,有做某事的天赋,决心做某事。
全心投入,努力工作,以极大的决心和毅力致力于某事,他人评价:一个鼓舞人心的领导者,一个劳动模范,一个先进的教师,受到尊敬,被尊为……他的努力工作给他带来了巨大的成功对我们国家的巨大贡献,为……树立了一个好榜样,你班要举办以"平凡但伟大"为题的英语主题班会。
僥氏哂囂嶄将械聞喘議噴嶽鞘塀떮煤防祥嬬鎮和互深哂囂恬猟。
匯、個延扮蓑箭The bell is ringing now. 匯違There goes the bell.蒙歩屈、個延囂蓑箭 People suggest that the conference be put off.匯違It is suggested that the conference be put off.蒙歩眉、聞喘音協塀箭 He is so kind that he can help me.匯違He is so kind as to help me. 蒙歩膨、聞喘狛肇蛍簡箭 1 She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.匯違Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.蒙歩2 Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten.匯違Once seen, it can never be forgotten. 蒙歩励、聞喘 v- ing1 When he arrives떮please give me an e-mail.匯違On arriving /his arrival ,please give me an e-mail.蒙歩2 If the weather permits ,I will come tomorrow.匯違I will come tomorrow, weather permitting. .蒙歩鎗、聞喘倡亭囂賑箭 The ship didnt sink with all on board because there were the efforts of the captain.匯違But for the efforts of the captain ,the ship would have sunk with all on board.蒙歩鈍、聞喘兆簡來貫鞘It disappointed everybody thathe didnt turn up.匯違The fact that he did n t turn updisappointed everybody.蒙歩I happened to have met him.匯違It happened that I had met him. 蒙歩To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.匯違What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 蒙歩伊、聞喘協囂貫鞘箭; The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.匯違The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. 蒙歩湘、聞喘彜囂貫鞘I wont believe what he says.匯違No matter what he says, I wont believe.蒙歩If you come back before six oclock, you can go out.匯違You can go out on condition that you come back before six oclock. 蒙歩3 If she doesnt agree, what shall we do 匯違Supposing that she doesnt agree, what shell we do 蒙歩噴、聞喘宜廾鞘侏箭Though Im weak Ill make the effort.匯違Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.蒙歩。
记人、叙事和报道1.记人、叙事和报道的写作结构2.记人、叙事和报道的常用表达(1)记人①The person I respect/love/admire most is...我最尊敬/最爱/最钦佩的人是……②She/He is a...and she/he is always kind to/strict with others.她/他是一个……她/他总是对别人很好/很严格。
③She/He is devoted/dedicated to her/his work and once she/he is determined to do something well,she/he will...她/他致力于她/他的工作,一旦她/他决定做好什么,她/他就会……④Every time I am faced with difficulties,she will come to my assistance.每次我遇到困难,她都会来帮助我。
⑤Such is...and I will...forever.这就是……,我会永远……(2)叙事①Yesterday,we went to...昨天,我们去了……②We started at...and it took us...to the...我们……出发,过了多久我们到达……③Located in/at...,the...has beautiful scenery.位于……,这个……风景优美。
④At first,we did...after which we did...首先,我们做了……,之后我们做了……⑤It was...that we headed back to our school.是在……时候我们踏上了学校的归程。
⑥Tired as we were,we felt...尽管很累,我们感到……(3)报道①To promote/improve...,a...was held in...为了提高/促进……,一场……在……举行。
2021年高考英语专题复习:应用文好词好句及范文汇编作文题目:假设你是李华,你的好友David在过去的圣诞节里体重快速增长,对此他很苦恼。
他写信给你想要了解一下中国的春节是怎么庆祝的,中国的中学生的饮食习惯是否健康,以及如何打造一个健康的体魄。
请按要求写一封100字左右的回信。
一.好词1. attach great importance to2. spare no efforts to do3. from the bottom of my heart4. think highly of5. from my point of view/from where I stand6. on the contrary7. be of great importance / significance8. be concerned about9. due to/on account of the fact(+从句)10. Not only should we do…but also we should…(部分倒装)11. a variety of12. a symbol of13. lessen the possibility of falling sick13. exercise regularly14. ignore the significance of15. be particular about food16. build up a healthy body17. various options of food18. be fundamental to19. It’s a common phenomenon that20. as a consequence,21. create an atmosphere of joy22. refuse the charm of23. propose a toast to24. refresh our mind二.好句1. Hearing that you’re worried about your increasing weight after Christmas, I’m writing to share with you about the Spring Festival in China and Chinese students’eating habit.2. Time permitting, we’ll not only share everything with each other but also express our faithful and heartfelt(衷心的、诚挚的) miss and love to our family members.3. I’ll appreciate it if you can take my advice into account.4. Most of them ignored the significance of balanced diets, being particular about food.5. You should eat on a regular basis instead of going to school without breakfast.6. As for how to build up a healthy body, a balanced diet in combination with(=together with) regular exercises is the key to keeping fit.7. I’m convinced that(insist that) if you take my suggestions into consideration you can soon strengthen your body.8. Your early reply is highly appreciated.9. The main reason why they are aching for the coming of the Spring Festival is that…范文Dear David,Knowing that you’re bothered by putting on weight after Christmas, I suppose many of us share the same problem.In China, the approaching of Spring Festival marks the reunion of family as well as the feast of food. A variety of activities will be held, ranging from dragon dancing to setting off fireworks at night, but food always comes first, which accounts for the fact that many people are gaining weight after the festival.Though an increasing number of students have already been aware of the significance of keeping a healthy diet, a minority ofthem have health problem due to overeating or ignoring the importance of breakfast. As far as I’m concerned, regular exercises and healthy eating habits are of necessity to maintain our health status.Taking all the above into account, I regard it important for youto go ona diet and be fit again.Yours,Li Hu优秀作文(一):Having heard that you have put on too much weight during the past Christmas Day, which puzzled you the most, I’m writing to tell you the eating habits of Chinese students together with helping you have a better knowledge of the Spring Festival in China.To be frank, we Chinese enjoy a variety of delicious meals during the Spring Festival. What makes us feel most comfortable is sitting with our family around the dinner table, with the excitement of getting ready to eat. With a large amount of vegetables included in the meal, on the whole, our diet remains to be relatively balanced, though during the festival. Chinese students attach greatimportance to balanced diets as well, with which they can stay healthy. What’s more, we spare no efforts to exercise as often as we can. Only by doing so will we succeed in building a strong body.From the bottom of my heart, I hope these suggestions can help you.优秀作文(二)Delighted to receive your letter, frankly speaking, I’m concerned about your increasing weight. What I want to tell you are as follows.On hearing that you are of great curiosity about our Spring Festival, I’d like to tell you that we annually have a meal with family, visit some friends who we are missing for a long period of time and give red envelop to the young. As for your confusion about whether Chinese students’eating habits are healthy, I tend to give you a positive answer. Not only do we have a great meal at home, but also the school provides a healthy diet without junk food. Last but not least, I’d also like to propose that you should build your strength by taking abundant exercises, which is of great significance to your health.Eventually, hoping you will consider my proposal above, I’ll always be by your side through sick and thin.作文题目:你的同学Tom由于未能参加介绍著名物理学家史蒂芬﹒霍金(Steven Hawking)的讲座,请求你写信转告一下讲座内容。
2021年高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式集锦10写人与叙事【真题再现】(2020年,全国卷I)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。
请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1. 人物简介;2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work,respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。
要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛。
第一步:审题体裁:应用文。
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法。
要求:1.人物简介:2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
第二步:列提纲(重点短语)As for me;spare some time;listen to me patiently;第三步:连词成句1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly.2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序:介绍人物;阐述原因2.表示并列补充关系:As for; and; but; So第五步:润色修改【范文点评】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯。
复合逻辑关系。
作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式,如定语从句:My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much;非谓语动词:He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students;时间状语从句:When I come across the problem of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely…等。
文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然。
为文章增色添彩。
【经典演练1】请以" The person who impresses me most" 为话题,描写一个给你印象最深刻的人。
要求:1.描述-件这个人做过的令你印象最深刻的事情;2.谈谈你对这个人所做的这件事的感想。
注意:1.开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.词数100左右。
The person who impresses me most_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ [高分范文]The person who impresses me most is my father, who affects me not with his words but with his common actions.As a young boy, I was impatient at almost everything. It was my father who often took me out for fishing, teaching me patiently how to hold the fishing pole, after which my patience grewlittle by little as expected. Then such activities as camping, climbing and hiking were also of great help to build me up. What's more, I have learnt the importance of paying attention to what we are doing, which is the basis of what we seek for success.My father is a silent hero setting an example to me through his actions silently but meaningfully, for which I admire him most.[句子改写]用why引导表语从句改写范文中加彩的句子....meaningfully and that is why I admire him most.[佳句临摹]佳句1 :Then such activities as camping, climbing and hiking were also of great help to build me up.临摹1:她经常上网阅读英语文章,她英语学得好得益于此。
She tends to surf the Internet for English reading, which is of great help to her excellent English study.佳句2:What's more, I have learnt the importance of paying attention to what we are doing, which is the basis of what we seek for success.临摹2:而且,由于网络是虚拟世界,人们更可能会受骗,这对那些不够谨慎的人来说是另一种损失。
What’s more, because the Internet is a virtual world, it’s more likely for people to get cheated, which is another damage to those who are not cautious enough.【经典演练2】从小到大,你读过的书一定不少。
给你留下印象最深刻的是哪本书?请以“The book that most impresses me”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:1.简要介绍这本书中的主人公;2.说明这本书使你印象深刻的原因;3.号召大家多读好书。
注意:词数100左右。
参考词汇:(女)主人公hero(ine) 情节plot[高分范文]The book that most impresses meThe books I have read are too many to count, the most impressive of which is no doubt Jane Eyre, a book written in simple English.The heroine Jane Eyre is a poor but aspiring, small in body but huge in soul , unknown but self- respecting girl. After having a long journey of the spirit, Jane Eyre, a marvelous figure with her goodness for everyone, her pursuit of justice and self-respect, her striving for life, her toughness and her confidence, has left us so much to recall and to think.Good books are indeed of benefit to our growth. Therefore, what we are urged to do is make our greatest attempt to make friends with good books to make us wise and progressive.[句子改写] 用it作形式主语改写范文中划线的句子Therefore, it is urged that we should make our greatest attempt to make friends withgood books to make us wise and progressive.【写作宝典】一、有关“转”的常用词语:用来表示不同或相反的意见after all毕竟however然而,无论如何anyway无论如何despite/in spite of尽管,虽然but但是yet然而,但是while然而whereas然而instead反而,却regardless of不管,不顾nevertheless尽管如此,不过,然而though/ although尽管even though/even if即使in/by contrast 对比之下on the contrary与此相反otherwise否则fortunately/ luckily幸运地unfortunately不幸地as a matter of fact事实上in fact/ indeed 实际上unlike不像,......不同二、有关“合”的常用词语:用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容accordingly因此,所以as a result结果in sum总之,总而言之as has been noted如前所述in summary简要地说as I have said如我所述on the whole总体来说at last/eventually/ finally最后briefly简要地to sum up总结,概括to summarize简言之to conclude总而言之in brief简言之in conclusion总之,最后in short简而言之in a word总之at length最后,终于all in all总之no doubt/ undoubtedly毫无疑问certainly当然,无疑surely无疑obviously显然hence因此consequently因此as a consequence因此therefore因此thus因此【素材集锦】[常用词语]diligent勤勉的,刻苦的be born in ...出生在.....humorous有幽默感的be/ come from a wealthy family来自于一个富裕家庭smart bright/ clever聪明的independent独立的be born into a peasant family出生于一个农民家庭patient 有耐心的generous慷慨的,大方的enthusiastic热情的a 1. 80-meter-tall boy一个1.8米高的男孩efficient效率高的overweight超重的intelligent有才智的slim苗条的creative创造(性)的look your age容貌与年龄相当capable有能力good-looking好看的,漂亮的qualified符合资格long- /short-sighted远近视的speak English fluently 流利地讲英语fashionable流行的,时髦的have a gift for有.....的天赋charming/ attractive迷人的,吸引人的be skilled in在....方面熟练well dressed穿着讲究的be experienced in在...方面有经验warm-hearted热心肠的,友好的be fond of/ enjoy/love喜欢absent-minded心不在焉的,健忘的be interested in对.....感兴趣bad-tempered易怒的,发脾气的lose interest in ......失去兴趣talkative爱多说话的,健谈的be crazy about ......狂热strong willed意志坚强的be tired of .对....厌倦major in sth.主修be in good health/shape身体健康win a scholarship获得奖学金energetic精力充沛的get a master's degree获得硕士学位well built 身强力壮的win a gold/silver/copper medal 获得金/银/铜牌suffer from...患.....win first prize获得一等奖graduate from...毕业于.....[常用句子]◆各介绍人物的生平1. Born into a poor family, he suffered a lot in his childhood.出生在一一个贫困的家庭,他在童年时代受了很多苦。