写作提升:名师评析满分范文 1.范文阅读 Dear Mr. Johnson, How are you doing these days? It’s almost two months since we met each otherlast time. I miss you a lot. 求助信,开头表明态度和诚意。 Thank you so much for your help with my English study. Now I am faced with some new learning problems. I have some difficulty in comprehensive reading. My English teacher often says that only if we expand the reading quantity can we be admitted into a better university. However,I feel it hard to understand English passages with the increase of vocabulary. Besides, I often feel nervous while reading English. All of the problems bring me great pressure. I am unable to remember words well and feel tired of learning English. I would be grateful/thankful if you could give me some advice/help.(By the way, please come to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you. I am looking forward to seeing you again.) 寻求帮助,期待回复;再次表明求助的诚意。 Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li hua 结尾 叙述现状,说明问题; 有however,besides等连接词; 行文中采用了倒装,宾语从句等; I really hope that you can give me some good advice on how tomake great progress in English with your help.