高中英语基础写作课件

方法三. 方法三.丰富的句式 Sentence patterns Are Always Useful
•The dog jumped into the river and pulled the girl to the bank. •It was the dog that jumped into the river and pulled the girl to safety. •The square is near the Great Wall Hotel. •Near the Great Wall Hotel is the square. •You will have to work hard for years to speak good English. •It will take years of hard work to speak good English.
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对于书面表达的要求： 对于书面表达的要求：
1.Cover all the language points and given information. 覆盖所有的语言要点 2.Avoid grammar mistakes and wrong spelling 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性 3.coherent, tight 上下文的连贯性
3，做完作业后，他回家了。 做完作业后，他回家了
Having finished his homework, he returned home.
方法三. 方法三.丰富的句式
Describe the character by using Inverted Sentence(倒装句 倒装句) 倒装句
Poor as/though he was, he was happy.
• I failed in the exam again. • What disappointed me most was that I failed in the exam again. • Miss Li will give us a report soon. • Miss Li, who has a wide knowledge of English, will give us a report soon. • We all like Jim. • We all like Jim, who is always ready to help others. • We all like Jim because of his helpfulness and kindness.
（2）To use some transitional words ）
恰当选用过渡词，使文章紧凑，流畅。 恰当选用过渡词，使文章紧凑，流畅。
(3)To use more sentence patterns such as
inverted order, emphasis, a compound sentence or a participle adverbial
方法二. 方法二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
Rewrite the sentences
（1）Most of the artists who had been invited ）
to the party were from South Africa. Most of the artists invited to the party were from South Africa. （2）Nowadays the old people often do morning exercises in the park in order that they could keep healthy. Nowadays the old people often do morning exercises in the park to keep healthy.
方法一. 方法一. 一句多译
Use different ways to describe the picture
一…就受到欢迎 就受到欢迎
方法一. 方法一. 一句多译
As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed . On arriving at the airport , Lien Chan and his wife… Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed the moment /immediately they arrived at the airport. No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were … Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were …
方法二. 方法二 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非谓语动 非谓语动 词)
1. 听到这个消息 他们变的很激动. 听到这个消息,他们变的很激动 他们变的很激动 _________the news, they got excited. Hearing 2. 尽管被告知许多遍 他仍然重复这个错 尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错 他仍然重复这个错. __________________many times, he still repeated the Having been told
1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。 1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。 面对困难时
Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up.
2，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。 引入市场后，该产品大获成功。
Introduced to the market, the product made a great success.
5.I won’t believe what he says. （使用状语从句） No matter what he says, I won’t believe. 6.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句） Study hard and you’ll make rapid progress. 7．He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句) No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.
适当使用多种句型，注意语言的丰富性，多样化，以 适当使用多种句型，注意语言的丰富性，多样化， 变化多端的形式来表现丰富多彩的内容。 变化多端的形式来表现丰富多彩的内容。
Basic writing skills
Ways of writing good sentences
方法一. 方法一. 一句多译 As soon as we arrived at the village, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers.
Practice
一句多译
这本书花了我300元 这本书花了我300元。 300 I spent 300 yuan on the book. I paid 300 yuan for the book. The price of the book is 300 yuan. It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book. The book cost me 300 yuan.
To make the article tight, graceful and clear.
(1)To avoid using repetitive words or expressions.
表达时尽量用一些较高级的词汇，避免使用重复的词语， 表达时尽量用一些较高级的词汇，避免使用重复的词语，使语 言不至于单纯和幼稚。也可以给文章增添亮点。 言不至于单纯和幼稚。也可以给文章增添亮点。
Practice
一句多译
昨天下午他才来。 昨天下午他才来。 He came here yesterday afternoon. He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon. It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here. It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.
Basic Writing
时间分配
题型 基础写作
题量 1
赋分 15
时间（分钟） 时间（分钟） 10
基础写作的命题特点： 基础写作的命题特点： 考生按所给的内容及要求， 考生按所给的内容及要求，用5个规范的英语句子描述所 个规范的英语句子描述所 给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。 给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。 简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。 简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。
On arriving at the village，we were ， warmly….
The moment we arrived at the village, we were…
We were warmly welcomed by the villagers immediately we arrived at the village. No sooner had we arrived at the village than we …… Hardly had we arrived at the village when we….