2019年高考英语考纲解读与热点难点突破专题19去伪存真短文改错热点难点突破

专题19 去伪存真 短文改错
一、
One day when I was on my way to home from school ，I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.
Several minutes lately ，the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire.With the help of the firefighters ，a lot of peoples left the building safely.Sudden a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters everything.But they can't understand what she said.I went to the woman and asked her that was happening.She told me that his daughter was still in the building.I told the firefighters about it at once.They immediately run into the building and rescued little girl.
文章大意：本文主要讲述作者在回家的路上看到一栋建筑物着火了，打电话报警后，消防员很快扑灭了大火。

但突然一名外国妇女跑来说她女儿还在建筑物里，但消防员们听不懂，最后，作者将这些告诉了消防员，他们救出了那个小女孩。

答案：
One day when I was on my way to home from school ，I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.
Several minutes lately later
，the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire.With the help of the firefighters ，a lot of peoples people left the building safely. Sudden Suddenly a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighterseverything something .But they can't couldn't understand what she said.I went to the woman and asked her that what
was happening.She told me that his her
daughter was still in the building.I told the firefighters about it at once.They immediately run ran into the building and rescued ∧the little girl.
4. 解析：考查副词。

修饰句子要用副词，形容词sudden 的副词是suddenly 。

5. 解析：根据句意：告诉消防员一些事情。

用something 。

6. 解析：考查动词时态。

全文讲述的是过去的事情，用一般过去时态。

二、
Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I take part in several days ago ，I have a lot to share to you.
Firstly ，I feel real delighted that I've won the first prize in the competition ，which makes me to understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains，no gains”．Besides ，I've established the friendship with students from all over our country ，from which I've learned a lot.More importantly ，participate in this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public ，thus developing my self-confidence.Additionally ，I owe much thanks to my teachers and judges.Without his help ，I couldn't have done such excellent job.
To sum up ，I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experiences.
文章大意：作者回顾自己参加英语演讲比赛后的一些体会。

答案：
Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I take took
part in several days ago ，I have a lot to share to with
you. Firstly ，I feel real really
delighted that I've won the first prize in the competition ，which makes me to understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains，no gains”．Besides ，I've established the friendship with students from all over our country ，from which whom
I've learned a lot.More importantly ，participate participating
in this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public ，thus devel ，I owe much many thanks to my teachers and judges.Without his their help ，I couldn't have done such ∧an excellent job.
To sum up ，I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experiences experience
. 1. 解析：考查时态。

根据本句中的时间状语several days ago 可知用过去时，故take 改为took 。

2. 解析：考查介词。

此处为固定搭配：share with sb.和某人分享。

3. 解析：考查副词。

此处为副词修饰形容词delighted ，故用really 。

4. 解析：考查动词。

此处为make 的固定用法：make sb do sth ：让某人做某事，故去掉to 。

三、
In my mind ，I could never fancy how ten second of life could change a person's view for his whole existence.A few years ago I experience the worst moment in my life.I was driving home that afternoon.Unfortunately ，I didn't make it home as usually because I had a car accident.While I was driving ，all of a sudden ，but the car in front of me stopped.My car immediately ran into it.Luckily ，I wasn't serious hurt.That accident changed way I drive and they taught me a valuable lesson.I also came to the conclusion which life needs to be treasuring.
答案：
In my mind ，I could never fancy how ten second seconds
of life could change a person's view for on/about his whole existence.A few years ago I experience experienced
the worst moment in my life.I was driving home that afternoon.Unfortunately ，I didn't make it home as usually usual
because I had a car accident.While I was driving ，all of a sudden ，but the car in front of me stopped.My car immediately ran into it.Luckily ，I wasn't serious seriously
hurt.That accident changed ∧the way I drive and they it
taught me a valuable lesson.I also came to the conclusi on which that life needs to be treasuring treasured
. 1. 解析：句意：在我心中，我无法想象生活的十秒能怎样改变一个人对于他整个存在的观点。

second 表示“秒”是可数名词，前面有ten 修饰，故要用复数形式。

故second 改为seconds 。

2.解析：考查介词。

表示某人关于某一事物的态度、观点，或者关于哪个方面的课题、论文、演讲等用on 或about 。

故for 改为on/ about 。

3. 解析：考查时态。

句意：几年前我经历了生命中最困难的时刻。

根据时间状语a few years ago 可知，用一般过去时，故experience 改为exp erienced 。

4. 解析：句意：我并没有按时回到家，因为我发生了一场车祸。

本题考查词组as usual ，
表示“像往常一样”。

故usually 改为usual 。

8. 解析：考查代词。

句意：那次事故改变了我开车的方法，它也给我上了宝贵的一课。

这里用it 指代上文出现的名词单数that accident ，故they 改为it 。

9. 解析：考查同位语从句。

句意：我也得出了生命需要被珍视的结论。

名词the conclusion 后接从句表示the conclusion 的内容，构造了同位语从句，引导词在句中只起连接作用，无意义，不作成分，故要用that 。

10. 解析：句意：我也得出了生命需要被珍视的结论。

根据句意可知，动词treasure 要用被动语态的形式，故treasuring 改为treasured 。

四、
When I was a kid ，my father and mother were made me join a tennis club in the center of our city.Every day both my parent would take me to club after school.I played tennis ，ate snacks and did my homework here.It was basically my second family.A woman whose name was Li Li ，my first private coach ，was as a mother to us.She not only taught me everything that I know about what to play tennis ，but treats me well.She was kind or always trained me with great patient.In my heart ，she was the best coach in our city.
文章大意：本文讲述了作者幼时的网球教练对于自己的帮助。

爸爸妈妈让我参加了一个网球俱乐部，放学后我会在那里打球，吃饭和做作业。

那里就像我的另一个家。

我的教练对我很好，她不仅教我打球而且对我很好，在我心里她是我市最好的教练。

答案：
When I was a kid ，my father and mother were made me join a tennis club in the center of our city.Every day both my parent parents would take me to ∧the
club after school.I played tennis ，ate snacks and did my homework here there
.It was basically my second family.A woman whose name was Li Li ，my first private coach ，was as like a mother to us me
.She not only taught me everything that I know about what how to play tennis ，but treats treated me well.She was kind or and
always trained me with great patient patience
.In my heart ，she was the best coach in our city. 1. 解析：考查谓语动词的语态。

主语my father and mother 和谓语动词made 之间是主动关系，表示“爸爸妈妈让我参加了一个网球俱乐部”，所以去掉were 。

6. 解析：考查代词。

根据下文She not only taught me everything 可知教练就像我的妈妈，所以用代词me 。

7. 解析：考查疑问词。

根据本句表示“她教我怎样打网球”，所以what 改为how 。

8. 解析：考查谓语动词的时态。

根据上文可知谓语动词用过去式treated 。

9. 解析：考查连词。

She was kind 表示“她很和蔼”； always trained me with great __patient__ 表示“她耐心的培训我”，所以两句之间是并列关系，所以or 改为and 。

10. 解析：考查词性。

with 后用名词patience ，表示“耐心地”，相当于副词patiently 。

五、
Last Sunday ，I joined the voluntary group to help keep the traffic in good order at a big crossing near our school.At 8∶00 a．m.，we arrived there ，wore red vests with the word VOLUNTEER on the back.We helped with the police remind the passers-by to obey traffic rule.To our delighted ，they all waited for the green light patient except one motor-biker.We
，for that many people
praised us.About 4 hours later ，they said good-bye to the police and left.Tired as we were ，we all felt an honor to do our parts.
答案：
Last Sunday ，I joined the a voluntary group to help keep the traffic in good order at a b ig crossing near our school.At 8∶00 a．m.，we arrived there ，wore wearing
red vests with the word VOLUNTEER on the back.We helped with the police remind the passers-by to obey traffic rule rules .To our delighted delight ，they all waited for the green light patient patiently
except one motor-biker.We also give gave
out some hand-made brochures about traffic regulations ，for that which many people praised us.About 4 hours later ，they we
said good-bye to the police and left.Tired as we were ，we all felt ∧it
an honor to do our parts. 1. 解析：在全文中是第一次出现，不能用特指，而应用泛指。

故将the 改为a 。

六、
One day a rich man took his son on a trip to the country in order to show his son if the poor lived ，so he could be thankful to his wealth.They spent a couple of days and nights on the farm of that would be considered a very poor family.On their return back ，the father asked his son to explain what he had learnt.The boy ，who had remained silent and deep in thought on the journey home ，replying in a way that shocked his father.
The boy said he wanted to become farmer.He envied the farmers who had the beautiful night star to give them light while her family had only expensive lanterns.His wish was to have a farm where he could go swimming in an endless river instead of the garden pool in their home.Finally the boy finished by saying ，“Before the trip I thought we were rich but today I have learnt who is true rich.”
With this ，the boy got up and walked away ，leaving his father sat on their comfortable sofa ，totally speechless.
文章大意：一天，一位富人为了让儿子对他的财富充满“感激”，便带着儿子来到乡村去体验农民的生活，没想到结果却令富人“无语”，因为他的儿子想当农民。

答案：
One day a rich man took his son on a trip to the country in order to show his son if how the poor lived ，so he could be thankful to for
his wealth.They spent a couple of days and nights on the farm of that what
would be considered a very poor family.On their return back ，the father asked his son to explain what he had learnt.The boy ，who had remained silent and deep in thought on the journey home ，replying replied
in a way that shocked his father. The boy said he wanted to become ∧a
farmer.He envied the farmers who had the beautiful night star stars to give them light while her his
family had only expensive lanterns.His wish was
to have a farm where he could go swimming in an endless river instead of the garden pool in their home.Finally the boy finished by saying，“Before the trip I thought we were rich
rich.”
but today I have learnt who is true
truly
With this，the boy got up and walked away，leaving his father sat
on th eir
sitting comfortable sofa，totally speechless.
3. 解析：考查连接代词。

此处用来引导宾语从句，由于该从句中缺少主语，故用连接代词what。

4. 解析：考查return的含义。

由于return“返回”相当于“go back/get back/come back”，即它本身就含有back的意思，其后不能再跟back；故去掉return之后的back。

5. 解析：考查谓语动词。

此处在句中作谓语，根据上文可知，此处讲述的是发生在过去某一天的事情，应使用一般过去时；故用replied。

6. 解析：考查不定冠词。

此处用来修饰单数名词farmer，表示泛指一位农民，故在farmer 前加a。

7. 解析：考查名词的单复数。

此处指的是：许多美丽的夜星；由于star为可数名词；故用stars。

8. 解析：考查人称代词。

此处用来修饰名词family，指代的是男孩的家；故用his。

9. 解析：考查副词。

此处用来修饰形容词rich，故用truly。

10. 解析：考查固定搭配。

leave sb doing 指让某人保持某动作或状态，留下某人…；此处指的是：男孩站起来走开了，留下了他的父亲坐在他们舒适的沙发上，完全说不出话来；故用sitting。

七、
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Ming，monitor of Class One，Senior One.I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as exchange student next term.I feel it an honor of us to study with you.Now I have something to tell you about.Firstly，with the climate changing，you should prepared enough clothes.Then there are different kind of foods and snacks which will give you a chance to experiencing rich Chinese food culture.In addition，every student is friendly to foreign friends，that will make it easy for you to get along good with them.
Last but not least，we can do what we can to help you，and you must get prepared to meet trouble.During your stay here，I h ope you can tell us more about American culture.Only
by understanding and learn from each other can we spend these days together happily.
Yours ，
Li Ming.
文章大意：短文为李明写给交换生Chris 的一封信，表示在他来我校交换期间会帮助他适应环境，以及互相学习。

答案：
Dear Chris ，
I'm Li Ming ，monitor of Class One ，Senior One.I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as ∧an exchange student next term.I feel it an honor of for
us to study with you.Now I have something to tell you about.Firstly ，with the climate changing ，
you should prepared prepare enough clothes.Then there are different kind kinds
of foods and snacks which will give you a chance to experiencing experience
rich Chinese food culture.In addition ，every student is friendly to foreign friends ，that which will make it easy for you to get along good well with st but not least ，we can do what we can to help you ，and but
you must get prepared to meet trouble.During your stay here ，I hope you can tell us more about American culture.Only by understanding and learnc learning
from each other can we spend these days together happily.
5. 解析：考查名词的复数形式，kind“种类”是可数名词，表示“不同的种类”，different 后接其复数形式。

6. 解析：考查动词的用法，a chance to do sth.“做某事的机会”，to 为动词不定式，后接动词原形，因此使用experience 。

7. 解析：考查定语从句引导词，考查非限制性定语从句的引导词，使用which 。

8. 解析：考查固定搭配，表达“与某人相处融洽”使用动词短语get along well with sb.，因此good 改为well 。

9. 解析：考查连词的用法，前后句子为转折的关系，and 为并列的关系，因此改为but 。

10. 解析：考查动名词形式，此处and 连接两个并列的结构，by 后接动名词，因此learn 使用其动名词形式learning 。

八、
A survey (调查)has recently carried out among the students in our school about whether they would like it if their parents gave birth to a second child.Opinions vary wide from one to another.
Most of the students supported the idea.They think that it would be amazing to have a brother and a sister to keep the company and share secrets with.Besides ，we believe a second child would bring lots of funs to the family.
However ，the rest of the students interviewing hold the opposite view.To start with ，raising one child is already a difficult thing and the parents would have to work twice as hard if they had a second child.What's more ，they argue whether they have been accustomed to enjoy the whole love from their parents.
答案：
A survey (调查)has recently ∧been
carried out among the students in our school about whether they would like it if their parents gave birth to a second child.Opinions vary wide widely
from one to another. Most of the students supported support
the idea.They think that it would be amazing to have a brother and or a sister to keep the company and share secrets with.Besides ，we they
believe a second child would bring lots of funs fun
to the family. However ，the rest of the students interviewing interviewed
hold the opposite view.To start with ，raising one child is already a difficult thing and the parents would have to work twice as hard if they had a second child.What's more ，they argue whether that
they have been accustomed to enjoy enjoying the whole love from their parents.
6. 解析：由句意得此处主语为students ，所以为they 。

九、
One day ，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time ，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later ，Tony saw parents.Mom said ，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
文章大意：本文讲述了小男孩Tony 和父母上街购物，街上人多，Tony 没有告诉父母就独自进了一家商店，结果和父母走散，后来在街上又得以相见的故事。

答案：
One day ，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent parents
.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on in
a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks looking at the toy for some time ，he turned around and found where that 或where
his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun began to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling told him to wait outside a the shop.Five minutes later ，Tony saw ∧his
parents.Mom said ，“How nice to see you again ！Dad and I were terrible terribly
worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
1. 解析：parent 改为parents 。

看下文可知，是父母两个，所以用parents 。

2. 解析：on 改为in 。

Tony 走进商店，说明玩具在橱窗里面，用in 。

3. 解析：very 去掉。

这里是“如此喜欢以至于”的意思，应该是like so much that...
4. 解析：looks 改为looking 。

after 之后跟从句或v －ing 形式，故looks 改为looking 。

5. 解析：where 改为that 或者去掉 where 。

found 后面的宾语从句是陈述句，故where 改为that 或者去掉where 。

6. 解析：begun 改为began 。

and 前后的谓语动词时态要一致，故begun 改为began 。

7. 解析：telling 改为told 。

and 前后的谓语动词时态要一致，see 和tell 是并列谓语，故telling 改为told 。

十、
Hi Janice ，
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time ，I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time －wasting activity! In fact ，I don't like to go anymore ，so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me ，would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
文章大意：文章主要通过一封求助信，写出了写信人的困扰。

作者交了三个新朋友，经常一起去卡拉OK 唱歌，但其实作者并不喜欢这样，她想知道自己该怎么做才不会失去这段友谊。

答案：
Hi ，Janice ，
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want ∧to
share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing. As I tell told you last time ，I made three new friend friends
here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing singing
in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many much
.And I started to see this as a time －wasting activity ！In fact ，I don't like to go anymore ，so but
I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How What do you think I should do ？If you are were me ，would you talk to him them
？ Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
1. 解析：加上to 。

考查动词want 的用法。

want 用不定式担当状语，故加上to 。

句意为：我真的很想和你分享一下我经历的问题。

4. sing改为singing。

考查动名词做宾语。

本句考查句型spend...(in)doing sth.结构，故把sing改成singing。

5. many改为much。

考查代词。

根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。

句意为：那真的花费很多。

6. so改为but。

考查连词。

上一分句意为：我不想再去；下一分句意为：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。

7. How改为What。

考查疑问词。

本句中do之后缺少宾语，表示事情，故用what而非how。

注意首字母要大写。

8. are改为were。

考查虚拟语气。

根据句子可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不相符，故把are改成were。

句意为：如果你是我……。

9. him改为them。

考查代词。

根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them而非him。

句意为：你会和她们说吗？
10. 去掉with。

考查动词。

动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。

句意为：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。

十一、
I took the Harvard Summer School program in my vacation.During my stay there，I spend
a lot of time studying in the main library Widener.I enjoyed myself in the ocean of knowledges，either doing research for my papers or read special edition books.The library，which it is named after its donor Harry Widener，stands right next to the Emerson building of philosophy.Opening a pair of heavy yet elegant metal doors，I was immediate bathed in warm light.I wandered around the library，fascinating to find one treasure after other.
The library is a amazing place.One can fully experience the academic atmosphere only he visits the library.For me，the library as well as the courses explain Harvard's place as the home of devoted scholars.
文章大意：本文为一篇记叙文主要讲述了作者去哈佛夏季学校度假时的所见所感，讲述作者对于哈佛这学校自己的看法，以及对哈佛各景物的介绍。

答案：
I took the Harvard Summer School program in my vacation.During my stay there，I spend
spent a lot of time studying in the main library Widener.I enjoyed myself in the ocean of
knowledges knowledge ，either doing research for my papers or read
reading
special edition books.The
library，which it is named after its donor Harry Widener，stands right next to the Emerson
building of philosophy.Opening a pair of heavy yet elegant metal doors，I was immediate
immediately
bathed in warm light.I wandered around the library，fascinating
fascinated
to find one treasure after
other
another
.
The library is a
an
amazing place.One can fully experience the academic atmosphere only
∧if he visits the library.For me，the library as well as the courses explain
explains
Harvard's place
as the home of devoted scholars.
3. 解析：根据前后时态一致的原则故将either doing research for my papers or read special edition books.中的read改成reading。

4. 解析：在非限制性定语从句那根据中which 指代句子中的主语或宾语在which it is named after its donor Harry Widener，中which在本句中作主语若加上it的话则成分有所多余，故删掉it。

5. 解析：在immediate bathed 中immediate 作状语来修饰bath故此处immediate应当为副词的形式故将是改为immediately。

6. 解析：在I wandered around the library，fascinating to find one treasure after other.fascinating用来修饰人故应当将其改成fascinated。

7. 解析：After another为固定搭配意为一个接着一个，故将other改成another。

8. 解析：Amazing为元音字母开头故前面不定冠词要用an。

9. 解析：Only if 固定搭配“只有．..”故在only后面加上if。

10. 解析：当as well as 链接两个名词作主语时要以前面的名词为准进行单双数的变化故将explain改为explains。

十二、
Recently，a famous basketball player has caused public angry by writing on the Great wall.In the fact，this happens in many place of interest.I had some suggestions to solve this problem.
First，make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti(涂鸦)．Besides，punishments，such as a fine，is necessary to tourists with so bad behaviors.Also，I think it's helpfully to put up some boards along the tourist attractions that tourists can leave
I'm sure with our efforts ，more and more people will become concerning about protecting cultural relics.
文章大意：作者提出了一些防止游客在旅游景点乱涂鸦的建议。

答案：
Recently ，a famous basketball player has caused public angry anger
by writing on the Great wall.In the fact ，this happens in many place places of interest.I had have
some suggestions to solve this problem.
First ，make more posters to inform the public ∧of
the damage of graffiti(涂鸦)．Besides ，punishments ，such as a fine ，is are necessary to tourists with so such
bad behaviors.Also ，I think it's helpfully helpful to put up some boards along the tourist attractions that where
tourists can leave messages.
I'm sure with our efforts ，more and more people will become concerning concerned
about protecting cultural relics.
4. 解析：had→have；考查时态。

本文用一般现在时描述，故此句也用一般现在时，主语是第一人称，故用have 。

5. 解析：在public 后面加of ；考查介词。

此处为固定短语：inform sb of sth“通知某人某事”。

6. 解析：is→are；考查主谓一致。

此句的主语是punishments ，是复数，故谓语也要用复数。

7. 解析：so→such；考查副词。

so 修饰形容词或者副词，such 修饰名词，虽然此处有bad 这个形容词，但是bad 也是来修饰后面这个名词behaviors 的，也就是说此处的中心词是behaviors ，故用such 来修饰。

8. 解析：helpfully→helpful；考查形容词。

此处为系表结构，形容词作表语，故用helpful 。

9. 解析：that→where；考查关系词。

此处为定语从句，先行词是boards ，从句缺少状语，而且根据意思可理解为表地点的状语。

故用关系副词where 。

10. 解析：concerning→concerned 考查形容词。

此处为固定短语：be concerned about“关
十三、
Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student at a ordinary school.Although I felt disappointed at the shabby campus and my poorly-equipped classroom ，but I found the teachers impatient and considerate.Beside ，I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best it.I worked hard and got along good with my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties ，they are always available.Soon ，I became one of the top student in my class ，that greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who we are.
文章大意：本文通过自己从考试不及格到成为一个尖子生的转变告诉我们：态度决定高度。

答案：
Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student at a an ordinary school.Although I felt disappointed at the shabby campus and my poorly-equipped classroom ，but I found the teachers impatient patient and considerate.Beside Besides
，I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best ∧of
it.I worked hard and got along good well with my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties ，they are were
always available.Soon ，I became one of the top student students in my class ，that which
greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who we you are.
6. 解析：考查副词。

此处是副词修饰动词短语get along well ，意为“相处融洽”。

7. 解析：考查时态。

根据从句谓语用过去式，可知主句也用过去式，故改成were 。

8. 解析：考查名词。

one of…“……中的一个”，后跟复数名词，所以student 改成students 。

9. 解析：考查连词。

此处为非限制性定语从句，不能用that ，根据指代前面一整句话的内容，故应用which 作从句的主语。

10. 解析：考查代词。

此处根据意思“决定你是什么样的人”，故用you 。

十四、
Dear Peter ，
I have received your e-mail.I am very exciting at the good news that you have admitted into Harvard.First I'd like to offer my congratulation to you on your great success.
Since you know ，I'm busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination.Day after day I work very hard but have to stay up later doing piles of papers.Therefore ，I'm always feeling stressed out because of my efforts seem to be fruitless ，which had made me upset and tired.Will you be kind enough to give some advice on how to do?
I would appreciate that if you could write back to me as soon as possible.
Yours ，
Li Hua
答案：
Dear Peter ， I have received your e-mail.I am very exciting excited at the good news that you have ∧been admitted into Harvard.First I'd like to offer my congratulation congratulations
to you on your great success. Since As
you know ，I'm busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination.Day after day I work very hard but and have to stay up later late
doing piles of papers.Therefore ，I'm always feeling stressed out because of my efforts seem to be fruitless ，which had has
made me upset and tired.Will you be kind enough to give some advice on how what
to do? I would appreciate that it
if you could write back to me as soon as possible. Yours ， Li Hua
6. 解析： later 后来的；late 副词，晚地，时间不早地。

这里指晚上熬夜到很晚，所以改为late 。

7. 解析：because of 后面跟名词或动名词等，because 后面跟句子。

这里后面是句子，所以
把of 去掉。

十五、
短文改错
One day when I was on my way to home from school.I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.
Several minutes late ，the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire.With the help of the firefighters ，a lot of peoples left the building safely.Sudden a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters everything.But they can ’t understand what she said.I went to the woman and asked her that was happening.She told me that his daughter was still in the building.I told the firefighters about it at once ，but they immediately ran into the building and rescued little girl.
答案：
One day when I was on my way to home from school.I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.
Several minutes late later
， the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire.With the help of the firefighters, a lot of peoples people left the building safely.Sudden Suddenly a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters everything something .But they can't couldn't understand what she said.I went to the woman and asked her that what
was happening.She told me that his her
daughter was still in the building.I told the firefighters about it at once, but and they immediately ran into the building and rescued ∧the
little girl. 1. 解析：删除to 。

考查固定搭配。

on one ’s way home 意为“在某人回家的路上”。

2. 解析：late 改为later 。

考查副词。

根据语境可知，此处表示几分钟之后。

late 意为“迟到的”；later 意为“后来，随后”，故将late 改为later 。

3. 解析：peoples 改为people 。

考查名词。

people 意为“人”，为集体名词。

作“民族”讲时为可数名词，其复数形式为peoples 。

根据语境可知，此处指很多人，故将peoples 改为people 。

4. 解析：Sudden 改为Suddenly 。

考查副词。

此处应用副词修饰整个句子，作状语。

8. 解析：his 改为her 。

考查人称代词。

句子的主语为She ，故将his 改为her 。

9. 解析：but 改为and 。

考查连词。

根据语境可知，此处表顺承关系，故将but 改为and 。

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10 解析：little 前加the 。

考查冠词。

此处特指上文中提到的那个小女孩儿，故在little 前加定冠词the 。

十六、
短文改错
It was in a hot summer holiday which I visited Qingdao ，port city in Shandong Province.My favourite sport is swimming ，so I decide to go swimming in the sea one afternoon with my friend ，Wang Fei and Li Lei.
It was the first time that I had swum in the sea ，with waves come one after another to the shore and making great noises.Facing the rough sea ，I felt a bit worrying and nearly gave up at first.And when I saw many people enjoying myself in the water ，my fear was reducing.At last I joined in the swimmers.Now I still remember how wonderful I was swimming in the sea. It was in a hot summer holiday which that I visited Qingdao, ∧a
port city in Shandong Province.My favourite sport is swimming, so I decide decided
to go swimming in the sea one afternoon with my friend friends
， Wang Fei and Li Lei. It was the first time that I had swum in the sea, with waves come coming
one after another to the shore and making great noises.Facing the rough sea, I felt a bit worrying worried
and nearly gave up at first.And But when I saw many people enjoying myself themselves
in the water, my fear was reducing.At last I joined in the swimmers.Now I still remember how wonderful wonderfully I was swimming in the sea.
1. 解析：which 改为that 。

考查强调句型。

分析该句结构可知，该句使用于强调句结构“It is/was ＋被强调部分＋that/who ＋句子的其他成分”；该句被强调的部分是时间状语“in a ho t summer holiday”，故此处用that 。