英语作文1

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Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
My Campus Life
我的大学生活
My campus life is rich and colorful. I go to attend class everyday morning excluding
weekend,in class i study and discuss all kinds of knowledge with my teacher and my classmates. After the class, ofen i go to play basketball or badminton with my friends. In the evening,i have two hours for study by oneself in scheduled time, and then go back to my dormitory and surf on the internet. At the weekend,i take part in some part-time jobs and go to the Einglish Corner sometimes. All in all,my campus life is beatiful and substanti
Music is an important part in my life,I even can't live without music.
Actually,I like many kinds of music,I'd like to talk about my favorite music here.Well,I like Irish folk music best,New age is Irish style,and it's mixes some morden melody,it sounds very nice and pure,can bring you into the never land and dream land,just relax,and forget all the problems.I like Enya,she is a very famous New age singer,her song just like the voice of heaven,her song is as nice and beautiful as herself!
很多人喜欢音乐。它有许多种类:轻柔的音乐优美,摇滚音乐快,伟大的古典音乐,轻音乐放松,和孩子们,音乐有趣。你可以挑选任何你喜欢的。现在流行的歌曲是时尚。如果你喜欢音乐,你平时喜欢唱歌,也。我也不例外。我哥哥和我喜欢的流行歌曲,和我的父母都喜欢听轻柔的音乐。我们是一个音乐世家。你喜欢音乐吗?您的家庭充满音乐,也?音乐真的很棒!我非常喜欢它
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
1、适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
我不是在美国流行歌曲热衷,他们对我太可怕了!的旋律不软,漂亮可言!这么快,强拍,太令人兴奋的,并不能清楚地听到他们的声音。我不能忍受强烈的节拍,几乎让我晕倒!
总之,音乐在我生活中非常重要的地位。至于音乐的重要性,我的生活,我想你可以猜到,它就像吃饭,睡觉,我不能没有它。有没有人想从我出去了,我要去争取他,永不放弃!
exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
3、一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替 carry out, sharpen one’’s competitive edge代替 enhance one’’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
I'm not keen on American pop songs,they are terrible for me!The melody is not soft and nice at all!So fast and strong beat,too exciting,and can't hear them clearly.I can't stand the strong beat,that nearly make me fainted!
Many people like music. It has many sorts: soft music is graceful, rock music fast, classical music GREat, light music relaxing, and children, music interesting. You can pick and choose whatever you like. Now popular songs are in fashion. If you like music, you usually like singing, too. I am no exception. My brother and I like pop songs, and my parents like to listen to soft music. We are a musical family. Do you like music? Is your family full of music, too? Music is really GREat! I like it very much.
In a word,music has an very important place in my life.As for the importance of music to my life,I think you can guess,it just like meals and sleeping,I can't live without it.Does anyone want to take it away from me,I'm gonna fight him and never give up!
什么是您最喜欢的音乐呢?你喜欢爵士乐,流行音乐,古典音乐,民谣,蓝调,等等?在高中我参加了一门课程叫音乐欣赏,我很喜欢。这不是学习如何发挥具体的手段,而是要学会如何阅读和听作为一种艺术形式的音乐。我们读到了许多作曲家和乐器本身的历史生活的故事。有时候,我们听磁带在语言实验室,或音乐会。音乐有时也被称为通用语言。作曲家谁也不能讲我们的语言一个字可以让我们感受到的喜悦和自豪感,提高和绝望,和平,并通过他的音乐之谜。
What is your favorite kind of music? Do you like jazz, popular music, classical music, folk songs, blues, and so on? In high school I took one course called music appreciation which I greatly enjoyed. This was not to learn how to play a specific instrument but to learn how to read and listen to music as an art form. We read the stories about the lives of many composers and the history of the musical instruments themselves. Sometimes we listened to tapes at the language laboratory, or concerts. Music is sometimes called a universal language. A composer who cannot speak a single word of our language can make us feel joy and pride, exaltation and despair, peace and mystery through his music.

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