高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)
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高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)短文改错(每篇文章共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(1)Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.(2)Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine(3)Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now wheneverI am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.(4)Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.(5)Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua(6)Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll meet you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John(7)Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class Six, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are notsatisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with some effectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance.Thank you.Yours,Wang Min(8)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.(9)Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may also get others confusing.(10)Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.(11)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.(12)We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!(13)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.(14)Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua(15)You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on,"Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first.I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time,I woke up and found me still in bed!(16)It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. It isso a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly,I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.(17)I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner(执业者). One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course”I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they offered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.(18)Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.(19)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(20)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.(21)When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had studied atall at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test.I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.(22)I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class.Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.(23)Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told the artist he didn’t want to any shadows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.(24)I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..(25)I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.(26)This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.”(27)Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death.As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.Nor do they care about which happens to consumers.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua(28)Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua(29)Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best.Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping(30)Dear Lucy,I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet(31)Abby,How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you.I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes,Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold towards me. Many time, I wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone!I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family.But when my cousin was born,everyone pays more attention to her.So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well with her. With time went on,I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time.I tried to find a proper time to apologize.When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago,I took my cousin to play outside.In the way to the playground.I bought much snacks for her.Then we began chat.When we talked about their childhood,suddenly,I said“sorry”gently.She was silently,so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly.But after while she said:“Don’t say that.In my memory,you are always friendly.”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popular, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)V olunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday,the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas.Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should be responsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好,常见类型要记牢。
改错1 答案及解析1. 删去 time 。
2. 第一个 a 改为 an 。
3. for 改为 of 。
4. drove 改为 drive 。
to meet 和 to drive 是平行结构,可视为 drive 前省略 to 。
5.his 改为their 。
此处为指代错误。
因为指史密斯夫妇,故用their 。
6. 此行无错。
7. have 改为had 。
综观全篇可知,此处应为一般过去时态。
8. 在eager 前加were 。
eager 是形容词,需与系动词共同构成谓语。
9. question 改为questions 。
此处为可数名词。
10. 删去in 。
含有this, last, next 等的时间状语前不加介词。
等的时间状语前不加介词。
改错2 答案及解析:答案及解析:1. learn 改为改为 learnt 或learned 。
2. to 后加后加 be 或 become 。
3. 删去more 。
第一次告诉。
第一次告诉 Bob 关于自己的一些事情,关于自己的一些事情, 此处用此处用 more 不合逻辑。
不合逻辑。
4. where 改为改为 which 。
在此非限定性定语从句中,。
在此非限定性定语从句中, 关系词在从句中作主语,关系词在从句中作主语, 故用故用 which 。
5. 此行无错。
此行无错。
6. subject 改为改为 subjects 。
quits a few 意为意为―相当多ǁ, 修饰可数名词复数。
修饰可数名词复数。
7. use 改为改为 used 。
据下文。
据下文 but now 可知,可知, 此处应用used to do 表示表示―过去常常过去常常 做某事ǁ。
8. interesting 改为改为 interested 。
be interested in…为固定短语,为固定短语, ―对……感兴趣ǁ。
9. What 后加后加 is 。
此句无谓语。
此句无谓语。
10. hear 改为改为 hearing 。
Passage 1 It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street . Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road . The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road . He fell with a cry .The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed speed heading heading heading west west . I noticed noticed the the the driver driver driver was was was young young young woman woman woman wore wore wore a a a pair pair pair of of of glasses glasses glasses and and and the the plate number was AC864. After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital . Passage 2 I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV .Passage 3 Dear sir, Last Last year year year I I I buy buy buy a a a refrigerator refrigerator refrigerator in in in your your your store store store on on on Chang Chang Chang An An An road. road. road. W e W e all all all like like like shape shape shape of of of the the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much. Customer Li Ming Passage 4 I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place.We place.We listen listen listen to to to my my my CDs together CDs together and and soon become soon become best best frie frie friends. nds. nds. Three Three Three years years years ago, ago, ago, Li Li Li Ming’s Ming’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much. But we’ve kept writing to each other. Passage 5 I feel quite sure the chemistry test that we’re going to have tomorrow. Th e teacher has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been good .In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two two hours hours review review pages pages pages 115-140 115-140 115-140 tonight. tonight. tonight. W e W e are are are going going going to to to devote devote devote another another another hour hour hour to to to practise practise practise with with some of the sample(实例) problem. Then I will ready for the test. Passage 6 Dear Susan, I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot pot restaurant restaurant restaurant for for for dinner dinner dinner and and and we'll we'll we'll talk talk talk with with with our our our plan plan plan for for for the the the weekend weekend weekend over over over dinner. dinner. dinner. Having Having Having a a pleasant trip and see you Friday. Y ours, Zhang Ming Passage 7 Some Some day day day I I I happened happened happened to to to find find find a a a chatting chatting chatting room room room in in in my my my QQ, QQ, QQ, there there there people people people were were were chatting chatting chatting in in English. English. I I I tried tried tried to to to chat chat chat with with with some some some of of of them. them. them. To To To my my my surprised, surprised, surprised, I I I found found found the the the oral oral oral English English English of of of some some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely. Passage 8 If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as much as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success. Passage 9 Dear Mary, I receive your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you you have lost interests. have lost interests. I’m afraid I couldn’t agree with you . I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. today. It It It will will will be be be important important important tool tool tool in in in our our our future future future work. work. work. Beside, Beside, Beside, it it it is is is becoming becoming becoming more more more and and and more more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I’ m looking forward to hearing good news from you. Y ours, Li Hua Passage 10 Dear Ralph, I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the streetyellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Roadthe car hit the man while she was crossing the roadand drive off at full speed heading west wore a pair After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am . But I really can’t accept her ideas.study. She also thinks it is bad for my eyeworks. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at\ Passage 3 Dear sir, Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like∧shape of the bought the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it But ∧turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter is(或去it) becomes worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask disappointed for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will ∧at home this weekend.Please man/ person be/stay call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very Thank much. Customer Li Ming Passage 4 I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my friend’’s to friend’s place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming listened parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer me a weeks holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but beautiful and had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came e ∧∧see me every day. Then his father has to ’t see each other much. but changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we havenseen we’’ve kept writing to each other. wePassage 5 ing to have tomorrow. The teacher I feel quite sure∧the chemistry test that we’re goabout/of has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been exactly have good.In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115-140 tonight. We have reviewing are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(实例) problem. practicing problems Then I will ∧ready for the test. be I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't findto the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday. Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even Olympic Games, I will at first improve my If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second,I will learn more about the Olympics as much as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Dear Mary, I receive ( received)your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my my research research research work work work in in in the the the laB laB .But But to to to my my my greatly(great)surprise greatly(great)surprise greatly(great)surprise you you you say say say you you you will will will give give give up up learn(learning) English. The reason is because (that)you have not done well in it recently and you have have lost lost lost interests( interests( interests( interest). interest). I’m I’m afraid afraid afraid I I couldn’t (can’t)agree with with you you you . . . I I I know know know it it it is is difficulty(difficult) to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be (加(加 an )important tool in our future work. Beside( Besides), it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be (去be)succeed. Do remember that where there is a will there is a way. I’ am looking forward to hearing good news from you. Passage 10 Dear Ralph, I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, a but now I ∧changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one have to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find W e happily they are not willing to be with me now. They d on’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I colder times felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this left sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t don’t I win true friendship? I win true friendship? can can’’t。
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(1)Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burs t into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.(2)Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine(3)Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.(4)Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.(5)Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua(6)Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll me et you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John(7)Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class S ix, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with someeffectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance. Thank you.Yours,Wang Min(8)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighter s will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.(9)Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may al so get others confusing.(10)Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.(11)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.(12)We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!(13)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.(14)Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua(15)You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on, "Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time,I woke up and found me still in bed!(16)It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. Itis so a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly,I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.(17)I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner(执业者). One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course” I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they of fered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.(18)Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.(19)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many home work. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(20)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.(21)When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I hadstudied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.(22)I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.(23)Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told t he artist he didn’t want to any sha dows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.(24)I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..(25)I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.(26)This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for s everal month.”(27)Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death.As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.Nor do they care about which happens to consumers.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua(28)Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua(29)Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping(30)Dear Lucy,I am very excited t o learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet(31)Abby,How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you.I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to stu dy in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes,Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold t owards me. Many time, Iwanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone!I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family.But when my cousin was born,everyone pays more attention to her.So I disliked her and could n’t get along well with her. With time went on,I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time.I tried to find a proper time to apologize.When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago,I took my cousin to play outside.In the way to the playground.I bought much snacks for her.Then we began chat.When we talked about their childhood,suddenly,I said“sorry”gently.She was silently,so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly.But after while she said:“Don’t say that.In my memory,you are always friendly.”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popu lar, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)Volunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday,the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas.Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should beresponsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好,常见类型要记牢。
高三英语短文改错试题答案及解析1.下面短文中有 10处语言错误。
请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每句不超过两个错误;2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;3. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从 11 处起)不计分。
Last summer holiday, I take a trip to Yunnan. It is in the southern part of our country. It is really the very beautiful place grand mountains, clean rivers and kind people. Trees and flowers can seen everywhere. Every year there are lots of visitors. During the trip, I found that I like the elephants and fruits best. An elephant is more taller than I! I rode the elephant, because I was very afraid at first. But the elephant was seemed very friendly. I took some photos with them.The fruits there are very fresh and taste. They are very good for our health. The trip to Yunnan impressed me great. I will never forget it.【解析】2.下面短文中有10处语言错误。
高一英语短文改错试题答案及解析1. My name is Wang Kun. Ever since middle school, my sister and I (dream) about (take)a great bike trip. When we graduated from college, we finally got the chance to do it. It (be)my sister first had the idea to cycle along Mekong River from it begins to where it ends. The Dai live near the Lancang River, the Chinese part of the river that (call) the Mekong River in other countries. Wang Wei soon got them interested in cycling too. She insisted that we (find)the source of the river. She gave me a (determine) look. Once she has made up her mind, nothing can change it. Finally, I had to give【解析】2.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday afternoon Frank Hawkins was telling me about his experience as a young man. Before he retired,Frank was a head of a very large business company,but as a boy he used to working in a small shop. It was his job to repair bicycles and at this time he used to work fourteen hours a day. He saved money for years but in 1958 he bought a small workshop of his own. In his twenties Frank used to make spare parts for aeroplanes. At that time he had two helpers. In few years the small workshop had become a large factory which had employed seven hundred and twenty-eight people. Frank smiled when he remembered his hardly early years and the long road to success. He was still smiling when the door open and his wife came in. She wanted him to repair her grandson's bicycle!【解析】3.假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
高三英语短文改错试题答案及解析1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jin Jing,Your problem is common one among middle school students.Maybe the followingadvices can help you.First in all, believe in yourself.Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence.The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word.Your smile will show that you are friendly to him.Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies.Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly.Yours,Lily【解析】Lily在信中对金晶的问题提出了建议:要相信自己,微笑面对同学,让他们相信你是友好的;先试着与一个和你同样害羞的或与你有同样爱好的同学交谈,可以问一些学习上的问题,谈谈共同的爱好;帮助学习和生活上有困难的同学。
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短文改错练习(1)Rowena and Billy Wrangler are model high schoolstudents . They study hard . They do extreme well on 76._______________achievement tests . And next year ,Rowena will attending 77._______________Harvard University . Billy , her younger brother , hoe to go 78._______________to Cornell 。
That makes Rowena and Billy different from 79._______________most students is that they don’t go to school 。
In fact ,80._______________they’ve never been to school . Since a kindergarten , they 81._______________have studied at home . Neither Rowena or Billy feels as if 82._______________they have missed out on nothing by being taught at home 。
高一英语短文改错试题答案及解析1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Having drank too much, Alfred was driving along the country road at top speed while his car ran into an old man who was walking across the road. After looking around and thinking there was not a single person see the accident, he drives off without taking the old man to the hospital. The old man was frightening but kept the car number on his mind. About one month late, they went to court. Alfred’s lawyer said:” Alfred is experienced driver of more than 20 years.” “ If experience can prove that, here, you se e, the old man had walked safe for over 60 years,” the old man’s lawyer replied.【解析】文章讲述Alfred撞了一个老人,驾车逃逸,在法庭上双方展开辩论。
高中英语短文改错专项练习Exercise 25It was Monday.Li Ming was the first come to the classroom.When he came into his seat , therefore , he found his bench was broken.Seen there was nobody around , he decided to change it with Wang Gang*s , and so he do.After a while , Wang Gang came.When he saw a broken bench , he carried it out of the classroom.Li Ming didn't know how he was going to do.So Li Ming came out of and found that Wang Gang has begun to repair the broken bench.Li Ming's face turned red.He said with Wang Gang , "Let's repair them together.^,【答案】AIt was Monday.Li Ming was the first to come to the classroom.When he came into his seat ,Seentherefore,however , he found his bench was broken. Seeing there was nobody around , he decided do ato change it with Wang Gang's , and so he did After a while , Wang Gang came.When he saw thehowbroken bench ,he carried it out of the classroom.Li Ming didn't know what he was going to do.So hasLi Ming came out of and found that Wang Gang had begun to repair the broken bench.Li with them Ming*s face turned red.He said to Wang Gang , “Let's repair it together,^,Exercise 26Dear Susan ,I am very glad to hear you are come to visit me next Friday.Unfortunately , I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon.! won't find difficult to get to the city center.The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel.My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there.I will take you together to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner.Having a pleasant trip and see you this Friday.Yours ,Zhang Ming 【答案】Dear Susan ,come .. .I am very glad to hear you are coming t0 visit me next Friday.Unfortunately , I won't be able t0 meet you at the 3昨。
高中英语短文改错专项练习及剖析〔时间: 60 分钟 ,总分值: 100 分〕短文改错〔共10 小题;每题10 分,总分值100 分〕假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换更正作文,请你更正你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或更正。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号〔∧〕,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把节余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
更正:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出更正后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其更正均仅限一词;2.只赞成更正10 处 ,多者〔从第11 处起〕不计分。
〔一〕How time flies! A week have passed before I noticed it. Looking back on the things that happening last week,I found the life here full with happiness and interests. I can still remember the first day of the summer camp. Icame to my bedroom by myself. When I opened a door, I saw a girl with short hair seating in a chair with a bookin her hand. She must be a quiet girl who liked reading, I thought myself at the time. After we said hello to each other, other girl came in with a big noise. Her name was Rose. She was so outgoing and humor that both Cherryand I couldn’ t help laughing at her words. Then we had studied and had meals together, and became good friends.I can’ t forget the day when we spent together no matter where we are in the turefu.〔二〕Dear Li Hua,I am glad to receive your letter. I can understand how sad you are as they have to transfer to other school. But everything will be fine when you adapt to your new surrounding. In your letter, you asked me about my first school.In my memory, my first school was very large with each classroom beautiful decorated. There was a bigsquare lies in the center of the schoolyard. And I could have good view of the square from my classroom windows. My favorite teacher was my English teacher which was patient with me. Besides, I had met my best friend Peter inthe school, to whom I still keep in touch even though we are in different schools now. I hope you will make new friends but enjoy your time in the new school.〔三〕In a couple of week,we will say goodbye to our school.How the time flies!I will never forget the past threeyears that I have enjoyed a wonderfully journey with all of my teachers and classmates.To make the journey fruitful,our teachers devoted his time and energy to us.Thanks so much to your help and guidance,my dear teachers!I really appreciated it.Before long,we'll start a new journey,and there may be a lot of difficulties in do everything in the future.Iknow there are no end to the things that we can accomplish,and tomorrow is the beginning of the hardest part ofour life.May you happy and successful all the time in your new life!〔四〕My grandparents live in the countryside.They keep a dog calling Ah Bao.One day my grandparents go towork in the fields,taking along my little brother and Ah Bao.My brother and Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself. My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river.Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into the water.Hearing about him barking,my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother .Ah Bao did all he could save my little brother,that moved allthe people present.Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness.〔五〕Last Friday,1 was standing near a subway exit, tried to call a taxi. But no luck.Then I thought of the taxi-booking app my friend has recommended and I booked a taxi through my cell-phone. Soon it came, and l stepped in, feeling pretty proudly of my high-tech way and satisfied with the convenience brought by the app. Solater,1 was upset to find that the driver was busy looking his cell-phone to get the next order. It was just then whenI began to worry about my safety. What’ sbad, the driver’informations might be unreliable. How can we passengers' legal rights be protecting if something bad happens? So be careful when you use the taxi-booking app the next time.〔六〕Dear Mr.Green,I ’ m very exciting to learn that you will start a magazine together.That sounds great and I definitely agree you on that.(完满版)高中英语短文改错专题练习及剖析Some of the columns you mention in the letter are really my cup of tea.“ Cultural Express〞give us a better understanding of the world.Since people from different part of the world have different values,it ’ s necessary tolearn from each another.Besides,it is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improving oralEnglish.“ Entertainment 〞 is also cool! The popular singers,actors or celebrities are so attractively that youabsolutely can ’ t miss this part.Teenagers are to fond of popular things,too.Well,I really can’ t wait to read this magazine.Yours,Li Ming〔七〕One of the most important rule of finding happiness in life is to do what you love. I remember when my momtakes me to an English class in primary school, I suddenly found that learn English was fun and I really enjoyed it.The voice at the bottom of my heart said,“ Maybe I can learn English well and become English teacher.It was not easy at first. For almost one and a half year, I didn ’dot very well in all my English exams.Disappointing and frustrated, I doubted that whether I could follow my dream. But I told me not to acceptthis reality. Gradual, my grades started to improve and I had much confidence than before.〔八〕Last weekend I visited my best friend in London , which was supposed to be excited . Melina , whom Ihave not seen for three years , offered to take me on a sighting tour by car .Unfortunate , she ended up doing everything but that ! First , she showed me around the building where shehad gotten her first job . Then she drove me to the caf where she had meté first boyfriend . Before I could sayeverything , she smiled at me and said she wanted to take me to another place where was special to her . I wasvery disappointed when we got on the place where she had bought her car ! Besides , she kept talk about herselfall day long ! I was fed up with it , but I couldn’ t make her to stop . When she finally decides to call it a day turned around and found me asleep !〔九〕A discussion about hiking had been held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations canmake people feel healthier, fresher or more harmonious with the nature. They find themselves deep attracted bythe beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers evenbegin to explore the places people have ever been to, and accidents have happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think not safe to organize such dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.〔十〕Keeping a diary in English is the effective way to improve our English writing ability.First, it takes little time to finish a diary than other writings.By keeping English diaries, we can easy formthe habit of thinking about in English.Second, we can practice use English idioms and useful structures in our diary-writing.If we have difficulty finding suitable words or phrases to express our opinion, we can turn in English dictionaries or teacher for help.This is also a kind of learning.If we can keep on doing this, we would gradually learn how express ourselvesin English freely.In a word, it was of great benefit to keep diaries in English.短文改错专题参照答案及剖析〔一〕1.have 改 has,主是 a week 故用 has.2.happening 改 happened,状是last week,用一般去。
五、短文改错部分1A few days before, I saw an interesting program on TV. It was about the problem of the traffic in our cities. It seemed that a great deal of damage had done by traffic. But now our cities are still suffered from riffs problem. Some buildings are actually falling to piece. It is often faster to walk than to go by car or bus, The problem has been getting worse for long time. This is only one problem among thousands others in our cities. All sorts of terrible things have happened with our cities. And the biggest question is “What can we do about it?” Our roads have ever been designed for such a heavy traffic.1. _______2. _______3. _______4. _______5. _______6. _______7. _______ 8. _______ 9. _______10. _______Key:1.将before改为ago。
before用于过去完成时,ago用过去时。
2.去掉traf-fic前的冠词the。
traffic指车辆。
为不可数名词。
3.had后加been。
高三英语短文改错练习试题答案及解析1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下书信。
书信中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir,Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school. As for your choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course because of this will allow me more timeto do some traveling but make a few new friends. Of all the subject I’m l earning at school, I like English best. I had been learning English for eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly. So I really hope to take this chance improve it. If possible, I’d like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in England, that I’m particularly interested in. I believe I will have wonderful time this summer.Yours truly,Li Hua【解析】这是李华写给老师的信,感谢他邀请参加暑假英语课程,信中李华对自己的英语情况做了说明,选择了适合自己的课程,对暑假的课程充满了憧憬。
改错1 答案及解析1. 删去 time 。
2. 第一个 a 改为 an 。
3. for 改为 of 。
4. drove 改为 drive 。
to meet 和 to drive 是平行结构,可视为 drive 前省略 to 。
5.his 改为their 。
此处为指代错误。
因为指史密斯夫妇,故用their 。
6. 此行无错。
7. have 改为had 。
综观全篇可知,此处应为一般过去时态。
8. 在eager 前加were 。
eager 是形容词,需与系动词共同构成谓语。
9. question 改为questions 。
此处为可数名词。
10. 删去in 。
含有this, last, next 等的时间状语前不加介词。
等的时间状语前不加介词。
改错2 答案及解析:答案及解析:1. learn 改为改为 learnt 或learned 。
2. to 后加后加 be 或 become 。
3. 删去more 。
第一次告诉。
第一次告诉 Bob 关于自己的一些事情,关于自己的一些事情, 此处用此处用 more 不合逻辑。
不合逻辑。
4. where 改为改为 which 。
在此非限定性定语从句中,。
在此非限定性定语从句中, 关系词在从句中作主语,关系词在从句中作主语, 故用故用 which 。
5. 此行无错。
此行无错。
6. subject 改为改为 subjects 。
quits a few 意为意为―相当多ǁ, 修饰可数名词复数。
修饰可数名词复数。
7. use 改为改为 used 。
据下文。
据下文 but now 可知,可知, 此处应用used to do 表示表示―过去常常过去常常 做某事ǁ。
8. interesting 改为改为 interested 。
be interested in…为固定短语,为固定短语, ―对……感兴趣ǁ。
9. What 后加后加 is 。
此句无谓语。
此句无谓语。
10. hear 改为改为 hearing 。
短文改错练习题及答案高三高三是学生们备战高考的重要阶段,而短文改错练习题是提高英语写作水平的有效方法之一。
下面是一些高三学生可以尝试的短文改错练习题,以及相应的答案供参考。
练习题一:Dear Peter,I'm write to you to tell you about my school life. I am really enjoy my time at school. The teachs in my school are nice and kindly. They always help us when we have difficulties. The student in my class are very friendly, too. We often help each other on study and have a lot of fun in our spare time.But there are a few problems in my school need to be solved. First, the library in my school is too small and there are few books in it. We need a larger library with more diverse books. Second, the school cafeteria only serve fast food, which is not healthy for us. We hope to have more nutritious food options.I hope my school can soon make some changes for the better. I'm looking forward to hear from you.Yours sincerely,Tom答案:Dear Peter,I'm writing to you to tell you about my school life. I am really enjoying my time at school. The teachers in my school are nice and kind. They always help us when we have difficulties. The students in my class are very friendly, too. We often help each other with studying and have a lot of fun in our spare time.But there are a few problems in my school that need to be solved. First, the library in my school is too small and there are few books in it. We need a larger library with more diverse books. Second, the school cafeteria only serves fast food, which is not healthy for us. We hope to have more nutritious food options.I hope my school can soon make some changes for the better. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,Tom练习题二:My family is very important for me. They gives me love and support, and I can always rely on them. I am the oldest child in my family, so my parents expects a lot from me. They want me to do well in school and set a good example for my younger siblings.However, sometimes we have disagreements. My parents often tell me what I should doing and how I should behave. I sometimes feel that they don't trust me enough. I think they should give me more freedom to make my own decisions.Despite these disagreements, I know my family loves me deeply. We always make up quickly after an argument and forgive each other. I appreciate everything they does for me and I don't know where I would be without them.答案:My family is very important to me. They give me love and support, and I can always rely on them. I am the oldest child in my family, so my parents expect a lot from me. They want me to do well in school and set a good example for my younger siblings.However, sometimes we have disagreements. My parents often tell me what I should do and how I should behave. I sometimes feel that they don't trust me enough. I think they should give me more freedom to make my own decisions.Despite these disagreements, I know my family loves me deeply. We always make up quickly after an argument and forgive each other. I appreciate everything they do for me and I don't know where I would be without them.通过以上两个练习题,可以帮助高三学生们在写作中注意常见的错误,如动词时态、主谓一致以及动词和名词的搭配等问题。
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)短文改错(每篇文章共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(1)Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burs t into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.(2)Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine(3)Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.(4)Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.(5)Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua(6)Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll me et you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John(7)Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class S ix, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with someeffectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance. Thank you.Yours,Wang Min(8)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighter s will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.(9)Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may al so get others confusing.(10)Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.(11)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.(12)We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!(13)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.(14)Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua(15)You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on, "Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time,I woke up and found me still in bed!(16)It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. Itis so a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly,I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.(17)I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner(执业者). One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course” I reply.“Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they of fered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.(18)Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.(19)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many home work. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(20)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.(21)When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I hadstudied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.(22)I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.(23)Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told t he artist he didn’t want to any sha dows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.(24)I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..(25)I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.(26)This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for s everal month.”(27)Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death.As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.Nor do they care about which happens to consumers.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua(28)Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua(29)Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping(30)Dear Lucy,I am very excited t o learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet(31)Abby,How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you.I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to stu dy in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes,Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold t owards me. Many time, Iwanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone!I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family.But when my cousin was born,everyone pays more attention to her.So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well with her. With time went on,I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time.I tried to find a proper time to apologize.When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago,I took my cousin to play outside.In the way to the playground.I bought much snacks for her.Then we began chat.When we talked about their childhood,suddenly,I said“sorry”gently.She was silently,so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly.But after while she said:“Don’t say that.In my memory,you are always friendly.”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popu lar, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)Volunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday,the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas.Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should beresponsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好,常见类型要记牢。