中考英语作文考前解析
中考英语作文阅卷三个标准：
1）看书写认真和结构完整
2）看内容详实和要点俱全
3）看语言优美和句式无误
中考作文审题五个步骤：
注意审题这是成功习作的前提和保障
一审主题（写什么），
二审人称（用什么人称写）
三审体裁（多为记叙文）
四审时态（现在/过去/将来时较多）
五审内容要点（一定要在试卷中画出，免得写的时候忘记，导致跑题）
结构：（总）——（分）——（总）三段式第一段：开门见山，不超过2句话，
第二段：分2-3点说明。
第三段：简短总结
初中记忆
How time flies! I have studied in my
school for three years. And I will
graduate from middle school in a month.
I want to share my happiness and
sadness with you.
I still remember, when I began to
learn English, I found it too difficult. No
matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't
do well in it and almost gave it up. As
soon as my English teacher found my
problem, she had a talk with me about
how to learn English well. Since then, she
has kept helping me. Little by little, I've
become interested in English and I'm
good at it. I think I am so lucky to
become one of her students. I've
learned a lot from her. I will try to help
others when they are in trouble. I think
it is a happy thing to help others.
处理和母亲之间的关系
As a teenager, I met the same
problem as you. But now I can get along
better with my mother. Here are some
ideas for you.
Your mother talks much, because
she cares about you. Maybe it's not a
good way, but it shows your mother's
love. So I think you should listen to her.
If your opinions are different from your
mother's, you can communicate with her,
and tell her what you are thinking about.
If your mother doesn't take your
advice, just keep silent and give her a
smile.
I hope what I say here can help you
a lot.
好朋友
My best friend
Everyone has many friends. My best friend is XX.
He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. He often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. He gets on well with us, everyone in our class likes him.
In a word, he is my best friend. What about yours?
感恩初中三年生活
The last moment held on to
How time flies! We’re leaving
you—our lovely junior high school. I have
so many words from my heart to say.
Thanks, dear junior school. You’re a
beautiful and happy home for us all. I
hope y ou’ll be better and better. Thanks,
dear teachers. You’re taught us lot of
knowledge and helped us in all ways. I’ll
remember you forever. Thanks, our staff
members. You’ve taken good care of us
and helped us grow up. I hope you are
happy all the time. Thanks, dear
classmates. You’ve got on well with me
just like sisters and brothers. Let’s
always keep in touch with each other.
Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best
to you ! Goodbye!
如何缓解压力
Pressure is a serious problem in
today’s world. I know you ar e under too
much pressure. You can’t get on well with
your classmates; you may worry about
your exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My
parents want me to be the top student in
class. So they send me to all kinds of
training classes at weekends.
Last Monday evening, I had a talk with
my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I
really felt tired. I needed time to relax.
My mother agreed with me at last. So I
think a conversation with your parents is
necessary to solve the problem.
Less pressure, better life! Best
wishes to you!
The Teacher I Like Best
Of all my teachers, I love Mrs. Li best. She taught us English in junior middle school.
She had many ways of making her classes interesting and exciting. She always taught us something new in easy ways. She helped us use English by doing interesting activities, such as, making surveys, playing games, etc.
Mrs. Li was a strict but kind teacher. When we had trouble, she often helped us out.
All in all, she is my best teacher.
感恩幸福
Happiness is important in our life. In
fact, happiness is always around you if
you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing. Once, I
had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy
and afraid to meet my parents. But when
I got back home late, my parents knew
what happened, they said to me: “It
doesn't matter, my child. Remember
we'll be always beside you when you need
help. We believe you can be better next
time. Never give up!” I was moved and
made up my mind to work harder and
harder.
I feel happy. Whenever I am in
trouble, I can feel my parents' love. I
want to be a good child for my parents.
做一个环保的人
How to Be a Greener Person?
It’s our duty to protect the
environment around us.
When we go to school, we should ride
a bike or take a bus. When we go out for
activ ities, we shouldn’t walk or sit on the
grass. We can’t draw everywhere. When
we go shopping, we’d better use a cloth
bag. At home we can save water and
electricity. When we leave a room, we
should turn off the lights. At school we
can collect wast paper and recycle
things, such as bottles, cans and plastic
bags. We shouldn’t listen to pop music
loudly in public.
All in all, let’s do something to protect
our environment.
感恩母爱
My mother is very important to me and I love her.
She is very busy and often goes to bed very late, but she always gets up early every morning to make breakfast for me. What's more, she often helps me and encourages me to solve problems by myself when I'm in trouble. With her help, I made great progress in my study.
I always want to do something for my mom. Mother's Day is coming. I'm going to make a surprise breakfast for her on that day.
All in all，I love my mother forever .
帮助让世界更美好
Helping Each Other Makes the
World Wonderful
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Zhi. It's nice
to speak about help here. In our life we
often help others and also get help from
others. When we help our classmates
with their study and other things, we can
develop our friendship. If we give a hand
to old people, we can understand the
meaning of pleasure. As we know, patient
in our life. I think we can get much when
we help the people around us. As the
saying goes, "Giving is much better than
receiving."
Remember, helping others can fill
our lives with love and sunshine.
低碳生活保护环境
My Low--carbon Life
It's our duty to protect our
environment.
The environmental pollution is worse
and worse today. Many trees are cut
down, and water and air are polluted. As
a student I try to have a low-carbon life
Firstly, I often walk to school
instead of taking bus and it can help me
to keep healthy. Secondly, I always
turn off the lights and fans when leaving
the classroom. Thirdly, I always make
full use of paper and other school things
and never waste water.
In a word, if everyone can protect
the environment, I believe the world will
become more and more beautiful.
