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美国留学申请:PS范文(机械工程专业) 2010-09-27 17:14:20 来源:留学E路通字号:大 | 中 | 小范文1:Mechanical engineering is the foundation of industry. It plays a key role in the national economy.It’s broad field including general engineering, aeronautical, chemical and nuclear engineering, etc. Provides a sufficient room of choices for me to realize the dream of becoming a scientist or a mechanical engineer. It was with this fact in mind that I decided to choose mechanical engineering as the major field of study for both undergraduate and graduate career at Tsinghua University.During nearly eight years of study at Tsinghua University, I completed a total of 47 courses in undergraduate study, 14 courses in graduate study. The major courses that interested me most included: Theoretical Mechanics, Strength of Materials, Elasticity and Plasticity Mechanical Analysis of Plastic Deformation Processes, Theory of Metal Forming, Computer Language and Programming, Mechanical Design, etc… After graduation, I entered the First Heaby Machinery Works (in northeast of China). During this period, I became familiar with the design and manufacturing of some heavy machines, thus furthering my interest in mechanical engineering. At the same time, I found that many good ideas of design could not be put into existence because of the backwardness in raw material quality and processing techniques. This fact impelled the related areas and me to concentrate my research interest on materials science and processing. Through careful survey, I selected a subject about the quality control of heavy disc forging and took it as my research subject for master degree. After over tow years of investigation, I finally made a great innovation in the forging process, making the end product rate increase from 50% to 90%. In the course of investigation and my later working after graduate study, I also found some problems that are common in mechanical industry. For example, how do cracks in products during hot metal working generate anddevelop? How to avoid cracks? How do non-metallic inclusions affect the properties of materials? How to control the content, shape and distribution of inclusions in final products? Solution to these problems will improve the quality of many kinds of products. But they are often difficult to be solved because they include knowledge of many disciplines and require many new research methods. I feel that what I have learned is far from sufficient to tackle all the problems. Thus I have decided to continue my education by pursuing a doctoral degree in mechanical engineering in a highly industrialized country like the United States.I plan to complete my degree objective I 3 to 5 year and hope that I will be able to further my knowledge I areas including Solid Mechanics, Materials Scien ce and Processes, CAD/CAM, etc… After completing my graduate study, I will return to contribute my learning to my country.I plan to work as a researcher of a teacher at an institute or a university. 范文2:An experienced engineer of security printing with China’s Central Bank, I now would like to scale higher intellectual heights by pursuing Ph. D. studies in mechanical engineering at your university. I believe that my strong background in CAD has adequately prepared me to embark(从事) on this endeavor(努力).I have been wonk(用功的学生) of China, a Chinese version of the Federal Reserve, at its unique research institute of security printing, with the responsibility of designing the Chinese currency and the machinery to produce it. By engaging me in a variety of projects, the job afforded me ample exposure to cutting-edge developments in computer technologies, particularly in CAD software. I have, for example, recently redeveloped a purchased CAD (Computer Aided Design) software to make it more suitable for our own purposes. By adding our own part/subassembly to the database and make our own drawing criteria, we have achieved dramatically better efficiency.My job performance, which has won me professional respect from all of my colleagues, was achieved thanks to the strong background I acquiredas a student in computer science. My undergraduate GPA ranked first among the 63 students of classmates in mechanical department, for which I was awarded first-class and second-class prizes many times. My graduate GPA ranked among the top 4% of the 105 students in my year, which won me the “San Hao” scholarship every year during the three years of my graduate studies.Unlike many other Chinese students, who are content with performing well in exams, I made a point of learning through my own hands-on experiences. In the Master’s program at the Beijing Institute of Printing, I gained an in-depth understanding of artificial intelligence, including expert system and genetic algorithm, especially in neural network. For my thesis, I programmed a multi-level BP neural network with C language to analyze my mathematical model, and applied much of my knowledge in optimization. I thus became able to program with a host of different computer languages, especially C++, with which I helped my graduate advisor to design a paper-cutting machine. To analyze the mechanism statically and dynamically, I programmed a software system to analyze and emulate it on screen. In undergraduate studies, I had often programmed with Fortran77 and the Basic language.Upon the completion of my Master’s studies, I easily passed the doctoral record examination in CAD/CAM of Beijing University, one f the top universities in China. But I gave up the opportunity in order to gain more practical experience in the industry. The decision proved to be right, as it guaranteed me better access to sophisticated facilities, such as state-of-the-art personal computers. With the People’s Bank of China, I have thus accumulated solid expertise in many kinds of operating and application software systems, particularly in CAD. I now have a firm grip on the latest developments in computer science in China.The challenges I met and the successes I achieved at the People’s Bank have not only endowed me with confidence but also fired off my desire to further improve myself. I have enjoyed high-quality and efficient production with the use of a kind of PC-based CAD software, MDT, developedby Autodesk Corporation. I now have a dream: some day, every person can design his favorite product with some sort of CAD software, and then search for an ideal factory over high-speed internet its production; and the factory will put specifications of the product, as it has received them via the high-speed internet into its CIMS, and out pops the product, as designed, at the end of the factory’s production line. It is a beautiful dream for every engineer, but many difficulties the speed of data-transfer and how to manage the product data among CAD, CAM, CAPP and CAE systems. These questions are fascinating, and I would like to come up with my own answers to them.To prepare myself for advanced studies in your country, I have persisted in improving my English proficiency. As demonstrated by my score of 700 (96%) in the verbal section of GRE, I now have an adequate command of English for undertaking graduate studies in your program.。
申请美国学校的个人陈述(SOPforOSU)范文我申请美国学校的个人陈述(SOP for OSU)最近有好几个07的学弟学妹向我咨询申请文书中个人陈述的写法,记得去年这个时候我也正在为这个头痛。
总的来说,我感觉在申请中我文书所起的作用不是很大,尤其对申MS的学生来说,你们的SOP 被认真看过的可能性应该是很小的。
当然,我们还是得认认真真的写,反反复复的改。
我写给OSU的SOP是在去年国庆长假里完成的,前后改了差不多10多遍,最后定稿前交给当年我们那个summer program的组织者Louis.Holschuh看过后,他给了很不错的评价:“Hi Jason. I've just had the ple asure of reading your SOP with care -- it is really excellent, a wise choice of approach and tone. You've done a superb job of communicating your experience, your talents and accomplishments, and your personal point of view. I think this is really a winner. I can't imagine but that an admissions committee would be very favorably impressed. I think this SOP will help you stand out from the group of other applicants.I have made some suggestions with regard to wording here and there. Nothing, I hope, that changes in any way your intent. Your English command is native-like, and you have a real feel for the rhythm of written English, something that not even all native speakers possess.”当然这只是美国人很一贯的鼓励。
人的进步需要有榜样的激励,而我一路走来,幸得楷模的陪伴使自己走的更远更踏实。
我最早的楷模就是身边的我父母,他们都从事化工方面的工作,我从小此耳濡目染,对化工就有浓厚的兴趣。
之后到了大学我接触了科研并且跟随名师做研究,除了收获了专业知识技能知识,我更看到了导师在科研上的勤奋敬业和不遗余力。
在导师的影响下,我意识到想要在科学方面有所建树的人都需要有这样一种思维,那就是严谨和务实。
其次,想要在一个领域中成为最优秀的人,要长时间地保持兴趣和激情,对专业的最前沿的进展保持持续的关注,同时要有持之以恒的努力。
最后,还要淡看过程中的成功与失败。
我觉得这不仅是在这个专业方面获得成功关键,也是在人生之中获得成功的关键。
随着自己进入大学学习,专业学习的层次越往上,越是能够体会到专业的魅力,也越渴望去学习、体会、创造。
为了进一步提升自己,我将大学期间的学习生活安排得紧张而充实,除了认真学习理论知识之外,我也积极参与专业方面的研究实践活动中。
由于学校优秀的师资和实验室配置,同时加上自己积极找老师沟通主动寻找机会,我很早就参与了到实验室项目中去。
然而通过多次参与实验室研究,我不仅仅丰富收获了自己的研究经历,也锻炼了自己所渴求的精神——严谨务实,坚持不懈。
回顾自己一路的研究活动,对我最重要的研究就是长达一年的可见光作用下的绿色有机合成。
我主动担任了组长的职责,带领小组进行一系列的实验。
该实验主要目的是制备出纳米级别的可见光光催化剂,实现其在绿色环境下的对苯甲醇到苯甲醛的催化作用。
小组原本的构想是制备出Fe3O4@TiO2@Pt这种具有核壳模型的纳米粒子,但是经过多次试验发现这个反应很复杂,中间环节需要长时间保持恒温过程,而整个制备过程长达一个星期,也会用到如氯铂酸等等极其贵重的试剂。
我们经过几个月的尝试,虽然成功了两次,但是转化率不是很高,只能达到30%左右,因此我们小组及时决定放弃原先的方案,改用新的模型TiO2/GSs。
第1篇[您的地址][您的电话号码][您的电子邮件地址][申请日期][学校名称][招生办公室地址][学校名称,招生办公室]尊敬的招生委员会:您好!我谨以此信向您表达我对贵校[专业名称]专业的浓厚兴趣,并诚挚地申请加入贵校的本科教育体系。
在此,我将详细介绍我的学术背景、个人经历、兴趣爱好以及未来职业规划,以展示我为何是贵校理想的学生。
一、学术背景1. 初中教育在我国基础教育阶段,我接受了全面而扎实的教育。
在初中三年里,我主修了语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、生物、历史、地理等科目,并取得了优异的成绩。
特别是在数学和英语方面,我表现尤为突出,多次获得校级奖学金。
2. 高中教育进入高中后,我开始接触更多专业知识,并逐步明确了自己的兴趣所在。
在高中的学习生活中,我努力提高自己的综合素质,积极参加各类竞赛和活动,取得了一定的成绩。
(1)学科竞赛:在高中学业中,我参加了全国中学生数学竞赛、物理竞赛、化学竞赛等,分别获得了省级奖项。
(2)课外活动:我加入了学校科技创新社团,参与多个科研项目,并担任项目负责人。
此外,我还积极参加志愿者活动,为社会贡献自己的力量。
(3)社会实践:暑假期间,我参加了学校组织的支教活动,前往贫困山区进行支教,积累了宝贵的社会经验。
二、个人经历1. 学术方面(1)高中时期,我担任班级学习委员,负责协助老师管理班级学习事务。
在此过程中,我培养了良好的组织协调能力和沟通能力。
(2)参加各类竞赛和活动,锻炼了我的团队合作精神和抗压能力。
2. 社会实践方面(1)支教活动:在支教期间,我学会了如何与学生沟通,了解了他们的需求,为他们的成长贡献了自己的力量。
(2)志愿者活动:在志愿者活动中,我学会了关爱他人,乐于奉献,培养了自己的社会责任感。
三、兴趣爱好1. 爱好阅读我喜欢阅读各类书籍,包括文学、历史、哲学、科普等。
通过阅读,我拓宽了视野,提高了自己的综合素质。
2. 爱好音乐我喜欢弹奏钢琴,音乐是我的精神寄托。
sop和ps中文范文SOP(Statement of Purpose)和PS(Personal Statement)是申请留学或者申请奖学金时需要提交的重要文件。
下面是一篇关于SOP和PS的中文范文:亲爱的招生委员会:我非常荣幸能有机会向您申请XX大学的XX专业。
我对这个专业有着浓厚的兴趣,并且相信我有能力在这个领域取得优秀的成绩。
通过这封信和我的申请材料,我希望能向您展示我为什么对该专业感兴趣以及我为什么是一个合适的候选人。
我想谈谈我对该专业的兴趣和热情。
从我还是一个孩子的时候,我就对科学和技术产生了浓厚的兴趣。
我喜欢探索新的知识和解决问题的过程。
在高中时,我选择了学习数学和物理作为我的主修科目,并且在这两个领域取得了优异的成绩。
通过学习这些科目,我开始对计算机科学产生了浓厚的兴趣,我热衷于了解计算机科学对现代社会的重要性以及它在不同领域的应用。
我想强调我的学术背景和个人经历。
我在本科阶段选择了计算机科学作为我的专业,并且在这个领域取得了良好的成绩。
我参与了几个软件开发项目,并且通过这些项目锻炼了我的编程和解决问题的能力。
我还参加了一些与计算机科学相关的学术会议和研讨会,积极与其他专业人士交流和学习。
这些经历不仅提高了我的专业知识水平,也培养了我的团队合作和领导能力。
我想谈谈我为什么选择申请XX大学。
我对XX大学的卓越教学和研究声誉非常着迷。
我相信在这个学术环境中学习将会给我提供丰富的学习资源和机会,以及与优秀的教授和同学们互动的机会。
我还对该大学的实践和实习机会非常感兴趣,我相信这些机会将为我提供宝贵的实践经验,并帮助我将理论知识应用于实际问题。
我对XX专业的兴趣和热情,以及我的学术背景和个人经历,使我相信我是一个合适的候选人。
我期待着在XX大学学习并为这个专业做出贡献。
谢谢您对我的关注和考虑。
此致敬礼。
美国本科ps申请模版美国留学文书中,ps是个人陈述这块,这是很重要的一步,对于是否能够成功申请美国留学起着很重要的作用,那么美国本科ps该怎么写呢?跟着小编来看看吧!欢迎阅读。
美国本科留学ps模版A senior student at the business school headed by China's tough Prime Minister, I will graduate next year with a diploma to be conferred by the Quebec Association of Certified General Accountants in Canada in the first joint educational program of its kind between China and a foreign country. To build up a great career upon this rare privilege, I am now applying for advanced studies in your quality program, hoping that I can someday become one of China's top accounting experts.At Tsinghua, the country's most valued cradle of advanced talents that houses my favored School of Business Management, I have been head and shoulders above most of my fellow students in my class of 122. I ranked among the top 2 per cent in macroeconomics, top 3 per cent in macroeconomics, top 5 per cent in international finance, and top 2 per cent in international trading. My performance in mathematics has been particularly strong, with my GPA in related courses probably the very best in the class. The CGA diploma requires completion of 12 courses taught in English, of which I have finished eight, with a GPA better than that of most others.My distinguished academic performance won me the privilege of being chosen as the only Special-Training Student in my class of 122 to join the university's Program for the Gifted. Through this elite program, I participated in a challenging research project headed Professor Chun Xiyang, head of theschool's accounting department. The project was aimed at finding the best way to control cost at the North China Petrochemical Corporation, one of the country's best known companies. As part of my research, I studied the corporate management systems in the United States, Japan, Britain and Germany, and analyzed the structure of Chinese companies. By the time I finished my part of the project to professor Chun's satisfaction, I had not only broadened my knowledge but also acquired the ability, unique among China's undergraduate students, to conduct research independently.Taking advantage of the university's emphasis on cultivating independent thinking and practical research abilities, I have actively engaged in a variety of research activities. I teamed up with several students to investigate into China's township enterprises and wrote a research paper under the guidance of our professors. With the help of my professor in public finance, I studied the country's taxation system that is designed to divide revenues between central and provincial governments, and I did this in comparison with the taxation regimes of America and France. My article, China's Taxation Reform, analyzed the possible approaches of improving that system. In my third academic year, I wrote The Accounting Structure in Share-holding Enterprises, an article that dealt with the solutions to the problems in the accounting system of the said companies. In my second year, I worked as an intern at China Industrial and Commercial Bank and acquainted myself thereby with the prevalent accounting practices of the country's financial institutions. Such involvement in practical research has added both depth and breadth to my learning of accounting.Much of my academic achievements can be credited to mysolid command of the English, which has allowed me to read international accounting journals with ease. Among my regular readings are Accounting Review, Accountancy, Public Finance Review, and others. I have translated Proposed Statement of Financial Accounting Concepts. My English proficiency is also reflected in the scores I obtained in various English tests such as TOEFL (633,10/97),GRE general (total 2220, verbal 660, 93%; quantitative 790, 98%; analytical 770, 96%), and GMAT (740, 99%; verbal 40, 92%;quantitative 50, 99%). I am sure that, with such language skills, I can pursue advanced studies in an English-speaking environment.In recognition of my outstanding academic record, the university has selected me to enter into graduate studies without the usually mandatory admission exams, a privilege given to only a few of the very best students each year. I have, however, decided to turn down the offer. I believe I will be able to learn more on the accounting/finance program by pursuing graduate studies in your university. Your program of graduate research and studies is known to be holding a leading position in the field. Under the guidance of your distinguished faculty and with the benefit of your remarkable research facilities, I am sure I will be able to ground myself solidly in my chosen career. After my Ph.D. studies, I plan to return to Tsinghua, where I shall devote myself to a lifetime of teaching and research.以上是美国本科ps申请模版的相关介绍,希望可以帮到您。
美国留学申请PS范文赏析。
去美国留学生活一直都是中国人们的首要出国留学选择,美国留学申请是大家都很重视的事情,只有成申请成功了大家才能顺利的去美国留学生活,今天天道小编就给大家带来了美国留学申请中ps范文,希望对大家有所帮助。
美国留学申请材料中的个人陈述PS就是个人陈述或说明,要说出你到底喜不喜欢这个专业、喜欢到什么程度、对未来有什么设想,去读研究生、博士一定要谈对这一领域的看法,说出自己对它的热爱。
要注意的有:1、PS的长度要适中,600—800英文单词。
2、紧扣专业,主线明确,避免盲目个性化。
让招生委员会知道你选择该专业的明确和强烈的动机,同时具备充分的条件完成该专业的学习。
3、结构简单,衔接紧密,主线明确,便于理解。
谨记:simple is the best。
4、精心安排PS和其它文件的关系。
PS,推荐信,简历等文件构成一整套申请文书,既需要相互应证,也需要这些文件各有侧重点。
5、语言表达上,英语要地道、符合英语的思维习惯和文风,避免“中式英语”。
大家一定要注重这些要点,这对你是否可以成功去美国留学生活很重要。
下面是ps范文:To live a meaningful life everyday; to continually pursue my predetermined worthwhile goals. -My view of life.Could I put myself in the life-threatening working environment? Could I sacrifice my life for the benefits of others? Some people may laugh at my crazy question. To me, that is a serious question I have come a long way to find my answer. “I am not sure whether it is worth to answer”; “What is the true meaning of that question?”When I was a young child, I watched a soap opera that was about court. I was deeply impressed by the judge’s calmness and the lawyer’s eloquence and resource that were showed in this opera. From then on, I hoped to study law some day. Fortunately, I performed well in entrance examination and got enrolled into xx University. Then I chose law as my major without hesitation. At university, I studied hard and got GPA 3.4. What’s more, I broadly read all kinds of books, including philosophy, history etc. My teachers’ instruction strengthened my understanding of law and makes me understand the significance of law to a country. From my studies, I had a lot of fun and got more interested in law. Moreover, I actively participated in practice in holidays from common company to law firm and tried to apply the theory I had learned into practice.This summer, I had my internship in counselor department in xxx Group Co Ltd which was involved in a business contract dispute, which was submitted to China International Economic and Trade Arbitration Commission for arbitration. As a representative of the requested applicant, I took part in the evidence collection in the early arbitration stage and clearly explained why the 5% balance of goods was not paid on time. After knowing the whole case, I visited my teacher, an Arbitration Law professor, and listened to her opinions. Realizing the counterpart didn’t completely implement their contract duty, I gave reasons as follows: First, the counterpart company didn’t mention bearing issue, which caused that the delivered machines couldn’t be put into the plant because of the disqualification of workshop. Thus overhaul was necessary, which delayed production and resulted loss. Based on these reasons, the counterpartdidn’t completely carry out its duty, so our party did not pay the balance on time. During this time, I found out the evidence and pictures that attested counterpart did not give reasonable suggestion and service, and made a statement in the court. Finally, the arbitration turned out that counterpart compensated our loss, in which the arbiters invoked the reasons that I stated. They had a panel made up of 3 lawyers and 5 company representatives as agents while we just had 3 persons—two lawyers and me. Under such condition, I was able to cooperate with them and clearly stated my opinions without any nervousness, which got their respect. This matter greatly inspired my enthusiasm on study.In addition, I took part in the contact draft in several companies. In the process, when I met a lot of problems, Ioften turned to my teachers for help, which made good impression on them. As I cherished each practice, I studied my specialty and English hard. With effective study method and diligence, I did well both in English and law, which helped me a lot to get scholarship every year. On the other hand, my practice inspired me to study. In practice, I exercised my legal knowledge. I also realize the big gap between theory and its application—sometimes I have master the rules but I didn’t know how to use it in actual case. My practice experiences have not only strengthened what I learned but have supplied new knowledge for me, which is good for my future study and career.In my study and practice, I admired outstanding lawyers’ eloquence and jumping thinking more and more. However, in China, most of lawyers come from theory study and those who can perform well in practice are insufficient. Moreover, after the China’s entrance to WTO, there are a lot of problems with Chinese law. I think, my internship experience is not enough. In practice, I could combine substantive law with procedural law to analyze case, but I still feel my theoretical foundation is not solid enough. What’s more, comparably speaking, the chances that I have to initiatively study and practice are not a lot. Thereby, I am eager to study further abroad to know more about foreign law, thoughts and lawyer career so that I am able to stand out in fierce competition.美国留学申请PS范文赏析。
美国留学申请:PS范文(经济学专业) 2010-09-29 15:29:31 来源:留学E路通字号:大 | 中 | 小范文1:Marketing experts like to classify people into different generation groups, believing that people of the same age share similar value and attitudes. I agree with those experts'' theory in that it emphasizes the connection between the circumstances of one's upbringing and one's later outlook on life. My personality, talents, values, even career choice have been profoundly influenced by my family life and upbringing in Taiwan.My name is Peter Huang and I’ve grown up in Ten-Mou, a multicultural neighborhood in suburban Taipei. During the early years of my childhood, my parents exerted a profound influence over my development. Though neither of them was involved in business, by watching their integrity and hard work, I learned more about the true meaning of success than I would ever have in any classroom.My father is an Air Force colonel. He joined the R.O.C Air Force at the age of 14, struggling to achieve his personal best as the supply division chief of the R.O.C. Air Force Academy. Unlike some officers in the military, who depended on family relationship and privilege to get promoted, my father gained his position by hard work and assiduity. He thus emphasized the importance of industriousness when it came to my education. When I was 10, I attended a speech contest. During the week before the contest, my father and I spent two hours a day together, organizing the lecture content, adjust my rhythm, and rehearsing. I was a shy, soft-spoken child, and found speaking in public difficult at first. But through my father's patient efforts and his believe in the rewards of hard work, I gradually became an excellent public speaker and won many of the contests that followed. As a result of the experiences such as this, I learned a very strong work ethic and emulated some of my father's best characteristics - perseverance and dedication.These qualities served me well as I entered mandatory military service in Taiwan and faced many difficult situations. I once led a squad to enact the typhoon disaster relief action in Nan-tou. We had one week in which to salvage a factory that was half-buried in mud. As the squad commander, I not only supervised, but also participated in the demanding and seemly endless digging work. And each night, after an exhausting work when all other soldiers were asleep, I spent extra hours checking if there were sufficient supplies and making plans for the next day's relief action. When I finally laid down to sleep, I could not help but reflect on how much I had developed, as both a person and a leader, since that first speech contest.My mother has a warm and kind personality, and has always reached out to the expatriates in our neighborhood. She organized a language exchange club with the American students in local colleges, hoping to increase understanding of Taiwanese and American cultures through the exchange of language. I took part in the club when I was still in elementary school. This childhood multi-cultural experience instilled in me an active personality and willingness to interact with people of different cultures. In particularly, it strengthened my interest in American and my desire to work and live there one day.My mother’s emphasis on international exchange and cooperation has led me to work for the Fulbright Foundation in Taipei as a research assistant. This position allows me to interact with educational associations in the United States and to take part in international conferences. I once participated in a venture capital seminar in Hsin-Chu, working on the issue of graduate level technology management education with representatives of major high-tech companies and academic institutions. Last November, I represented the Foundation in an international Tele-conference in Taipei. The conference was conducted both in English and in Chinese and was hosted by the Prime of Ministry of Education. My work has also given me the opportunity to know and become friends with exceptional Fulbright scholars from the United States.While my childhood years shaped my character, it was my high school and college years which led to my interest in business. 1988 was both a determining year to my career choices and a turning point in Taiwan's economy. As people familiar with Taiwan's modern economic history know, the exchange rate of the New Taiwan Dollar to U.S. Dollars moved from 40:1 to 25:1 in that year under the overwhelming pressure of American government. Thus meant that the traditional advantage of Taiwan's economy, low labor costs, was no longer our strength. People everywhere were talking about the future of Taiwan's economy. Out of a young man's passion, I wanted to contribute my talent and effort to my country. That was the time at which I made up my mind that someday, I will make Taiwan-made products famous world-widely, like those produced by IBM, Intel, or Microsoft.This teenage naive patriotic dream transformed into an interest in business administration and economics after I graduated from Taipei First Senior High School. I focused my college study on manufacturing administration and economics. From four years of lectures, seminars, and in-factory study in the department of Industrial Engineering at National Formosa University, I acquired skills in quality insurance, manufacturing planning and control, and factory improvement and diagnostic methods. In my economic class, I learned how prices, preferences, and incomes affect people's demand of goods from the microeconomic. I also acquired knowledge of how various factors - government policies, currency exchange rate, and balance of international trade - affect a country's economics growth. My interest in business, however, is not limited to industrial engineering and economics. In my junior year, I also took 6 credits of accounting courses and learned the knowledge of basic accounting principles, financial statements, and managerial accounting. To acquire a more thorough understand of management information systems, I chose "Alumni Association Database Management System for Department of Industrial Engineering" as my graduate activity project. From each step of developingthe database system, I learned solid skills in FoxPro programming and enterprise demand analysis.I am thankful that my parents provided me with an environment that encouraged me to develop my personality and an intellect for which I am remembered. With a deeply-instilled work ethic, strong interpersonal skills, and a high level of motivation, I believe I will enrich the professional and social environment at your esteemed Buchman School and continue to grow as a expert in high-tech industry.范文2:Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies, economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its global position. As a senior at Beijing University majoring in Economics, I feel that my field is fundamental to the progress of my country. Yet, at the same time, I realize only too well that what I have learned as an undergraduate is far from enough. Therefore, it is my desire to pursue a graduate degree I Economics at your university. If accepted, my intended concentration would be Economic Development and Public Economics.In the process of preparing myself for advanced research, I obtained a solid academic background in mathematics, computer science and basic economic theory. In order to enhance my capabilities and further establish my background, I plan to take Probability and Econometrics as my electives during my last semester at Beijing University. During my undergraduate career I was fortunate to be able to audit several advanced graduate level courses taught by overseas professors such as Comparative Economic Systems and Advanced Macroeconomics. These classes not only introduced me to new economic concepts and theories, but also broadened my perspective and gave me new insights into the depth of my field.After over three years of studying economics and extensive reading in related fields, I have developed my own understanding of the present Chinese economy with system. I feel, and it is an idea shared by many, that the Chinese government is presently struggling to adapt a policy which would peacefully integrate the advantages of a marked economy with the current Socialist system. to a certain extent, I feel that the government has been successful in implementing this aim. However, many problems have yet to be resolved. Chief among these is the problem of rejuvenating and restructuring the large, state-owned enterprises. As a result under the Chinese socialist system, these companies not only lack a spirit of competition, but are also hopelessly overstaffed. There is a definite need to cut back on workers, many of whom are unskilled and present an unnecessary burden on these companies.The fundamental problem here is that China lacks unemployment and social security programs, which would be able to assist and re-train these workers should they be laid off. As there are no options for them, the companies are forced to retain these laborers, creating a stagnant state which limits both production levels and net profits. Whileforeign-imported goods and foreign companies were scare in China, this was not a major problem. However, the influx of foreign goods and corporations has forced China into a predicament where it can no longer afford to maintain useless employees for the benefit of the State. Should the situation here continue unchecked, China risks loosing its domestic marked to foreign companies.These ideas were the result of my field research conducted during my junior year. During that time, I studied first-hand edly China’s system of public economics and found it lacking in many ways. I feel that if China is ever to be a serious competitor in the world market it needs first to develop a more progressive system of public policies. For this, China will have to look to other systems, which have struggled and successfully handled this same problem. My goal is to continue my education in the United States where I can not only witness the dynamics of an economic system different from ours, but also study the ways in which America’s public policy could be adapted and utilized by China.In terms of global economics, China still has much to learn. The government is far from reconciling itself with many of the principles that underlie the modern market. I also feel that the Chinese situation is unique, and , that in order to be successful, policy makers must take into consideration regional characteristics, historical tradition and social psychology when defining the course of the future. However, it is also essential that the future generations of leaders, administrators and teachers learn from other countries in order to better understand the complexity of China’s role within the global economic situation.The more China’s economy is prosperous, the more it needs its own economists. Therefore, at the end of my graduate study, I intend to returnto my country and contribute to China’s economic progress. My ultimate goal is to teach introducing advanced Western research methods to my country and, if possible, tackle some of the economic problems faced by my country.I am also applying for overseas graduate study because of the fact that the United States holds the leading position in the research of my chosen field. Your institution, known for its careful and exacting work ethic and nurturing academic atmosphere, is the university I have long admired. I am confident that with your distinguished faculty and recognized facilities, my potential will develop into knowledge and experience beneficial to both the United States and China.范文3:As the Asian financial crisis continues unabated in its second year, I , an economics major trained at one of China’s best cradles of economists, feel duty-bound to pursue advanced studies. Only by so doing can I hope to make a significant contribut ion to the discourse on China’s economic development strategy as the country endeavors to dodge the economic debacle that has befallen its neighbors. I must help decipher the puzzle of how the Asian economic miracle has busted. It is my strong belief that my country can draw vitally important lessons from the failures of other Asian economies.Most of my education to date is characterized by preeminence. a graduate from the Beijing No.4 Senior High School, one of the country’s very best high schools, I did my undergraduate university studies at the University of Inter national Business and Economics, a most respected institution that specializes in training economists and entrepreneurs. At this university, I received extensive training that was both rigorous and vigorous in economics. Exercising diligence and creativity, I achieved an academic record that was the envy of many of my schoolmates. Such education should provide solid grounding for me as I seek to vault into higher intellectual domains.Upon graduation in 1997, I have been working for China National Chemical Supply and Sales Corporation, one of the country’s keystate-owned companies. I obtained the position on the strength of my outstanding academic records as well as the excellent performance I exhibited during my internship there. The job is satisfying in terms of both remuneration and prestige, but it does not give me a big enough stage to realize my ambition of making myself a prominent Chinese economist.I understand that, in tod ay’s world, the power of a nation lies in its economic strength. This is particularly so for China, which has to support almost a quarter of the humankind with only a fraction of the world’s resources and wealth. While the development of economy is essential to every country, no other country in the world has to shoulderthe kind of responsibility that China does. With an economy the size of Canada’s, China has a population that increases by a Canadian population every two years, even while it is enforcing a strict family planning rules. That means that, to just maintain the existing living standards of its citizens, China has come up with a enough jobs every two years for what amounts to the employment of every Canadian, young or old, healthy or sick. This is a daunting task that no country has ever faced. The fulfillment of this task, no doubt, calls for ingenuity.I am glad to see that China is following a path that it has chosen, first and foremost, in response to the realities within its own borders, even though it has not shunned from integrating its economy with that of the developed world. With almost 20 years of vigorous economic reforms, the Chinese seem to have struck the right balance between answering the call of accelerating globalization and defending its national interests. This balance has paid off in many ways. The country’s average economic growth rate of nearly 10 per cent for almost 20 years makes its economy the fastest growing among all major economies. The economic strength it has thus accumulated is helping it to stave off the financial meltdown that has ravaged the tiger economies. I want to know what China has done right that the other countries have done wrong and how China can build upon its impressive record so far for sustained growth in the future. Sophisticated answers to these questions require sophisticated training, which I hope I can achieve in your distinguished program.My undergraduate studies, though far from enough for my long-term purpose, have adequately prepared me for advanced research.. I am now solidly grounded in mathematics, statistics and basic theories of economics, all fundamental subjects in learning economics. I have been particularly interested in Game Theory and Money & Banking. To broaden vision, I have audited, by special arrangement for the gifted students, graduate courses like Futures & Securities Investment and International Marketing, taught by overseas professors. Through these courses, I havelearned the concepts and theories of Western economics. All this has added to my intellectual depth.With the vigorous training I received in my undergraduate studies, I have arrived at some basic understanding of the Asian economy, on which I would like to focus my graduate studies. I believe that, in spite of the breakneck growth in the 1970s and 80s of the tiger economies that gave rise to the “East Asian Miracle”, the East Asian countries failed to build up sound economic structures. Their economic growths were powered more by the injection of tremendous investments than anything else, which led to what has come to be called the bubble economies. In their rush to achieve grandiose growths targets, they set up only rudimentary systems of control over their financial industries. As a result, too many loans were allowed to be secured on overpriced real estate and stocks. Such a situation would result in grave consequences if either the real estate or stock market collapsed. When both of these markets crashed last year in one after another Southeast Asian country, their banks’ bad loans multiplied, setting off domino effects across whole economies throughout the region. The devastation was such that, more than a year after the crisis began, few people in Asia can see any light at the end of the tunnel today.The big question in the Asian crisis is now on China. In the face of the Asian crisis, China has demonstrated remarkable strength and courage. Unlike in most other East Asian countries, the economy in China is still growing, and the Chinese currency is still stable. The difference is spelt, I believe, by the measures that China has taken in preventing the occurrence of a bubble economy. The Chinese government has not rushed to bless run-away speculation on the stock market, as some other Asian governments seemed to have done. Foreign investments, of which China has received more than any other country except the US, have been carefully channeled into infrastructure projects and industrial production. This, along with the inconvertibility of the Chinese currency on the capital accounts, has prevented the kind of capital flight that has underminedthe financial systems in other Asian countries. Amazingly, China has become a powerful stabilizing force in Asian economies, although the country has been faulted by some in the West for not having embraced the free market concept as readily as other developing countries did. I think the stark contrast between the success of a somewhat more controlled economy and the failures of the free market economies begs for many questions.The story on China is of course not over yet, nor will it be anytime soon. With the deepening Asian financial crisis mounting more and more pressure on China, the Chinese government and businesses are desperately trying to maintain economic growths while continuing the country’s structural reforms. We do not yet know whether China will in the end be able to tough out the current crisis that keeps knocking on its doors. Even if China can survive this round of crisis unscathed, it will have to continue integrating its economy further with that of other countries, thereby exposing itself more and more to the capricious forces of the international financial markets. In the process, Chinese economists will have to meet the challenge of answering difficult questions, questions that may not have been asked anywhere else. I would like to be one of those meeting this challenge.In applying for acceptance into your program, I hope that, more than learning the staid concepts and theories of economics, I can sharpen my insights when treading on unmapped territories. I am attracted to your wide range of course offerings and the varied backgrounds of your faculty members. I am confident that, under your seasoned guidance, I will give full play to my intellectual potential in academic research. It should come as no surprise to you if I become one of the foremost authorities on the Chinese economy a few years after I graduate from your school.范文4:A graduate from a management program who has worked in sales and promotion for four years, I now would like to pick up my academic career as an economist. By so doing, I hope that I can eventually play a leadership role in China’s ongoing economic r eforms.I did my undergraduate studies at the Beijing-based Northern University, one of the country’s top institutions of higher learning.I entered into this university in 1990 on the strength of my performance in the National University Entrance Examinations, held once every year to screen high school graduates for post-secondary education. My scores in these exams were so great that they constituted the highest total in my county, which made me something of a celebrity in my whole province.With my education at the Northern, I was solidly grounded in the fundamentals. Studying industriously, I had an overall GPA of 3.3, the fifth highest in our department. My GPA in the courses of my major was even higher, standing at 3.7. I was granted the “Excellent Studies Prize” in 1991 and the “Outstanding Undergraduate Student Scholarship” by the Dept. Of Management in 1992 and 1993.I did not limit myself to academic studies at the university. Campus life was colorful, an I made full use of all the opportunities to enrich myself. As a freshman, I worked for the Information Department of the university’s Student Union. My performance was such that I was appointed the head of the department for a term of two years between 1991 and 1993. The position gave me a platform from which I founded two periodicals, the “Management Brief” and the “Future Entrepreneur”. In these periodicals, I wrote profusely about topics relating to the economic reforms and general business management. To fund these publications, I led a group of students in offering computer training programs to the unskilled, which was unique on our campus then. All this not only enriched my student life but also helped me to improve my ability in many ways. One of the benefits is that I became an effective writer. In a 1992 composition contest, I was awarded the first-class prize for my essay.Thanks to my reputation as both a distinguished student and a student organizer, I was offered a job at the university in 1994 after obtaining my bachelor’s degree. I first worked at the Sales Department, responsible for product sales and advertisements. Now , I am the director’s assistan t, responsible for wage management, bonus management, drafting regulation and so on. Four years of working experience has taught me how to put textbook skills and knowledge into practice. All the while, I have been improving my academic qualifications. I now wish to study abroad to further my academic career.Knowing that computers are essential for doing sophisticated research, I made special efforts in mastering computer technologies. I trained myself in a host of programming languages, including the BASIC, Pascal and FoxBASE. Using my programming skills, I have designed a “Personnel Management Information System” and a “Sales Management Information System”, which have markedly improved efficiency in my office. Building on the computer skills I learned as a student, I have in recent years made myself versed in FoxPro, Access, and Visual Basic. Mow I am planning to design a comprehensive management system for my institute to improve management efficiency.Taking part in various academic activities to hone my ability to do research is an indispensable part of my strategy to improve myself. In the past four years, I have taken part in a number of research projects, including the “External Economics for Rese arch and Technology (R&E) Development” project at the Chinese Academy of Sciences, the “International Business Management Bibliography” at the Tsinghua University and the “Washing Machine and Refrigerator Market Research” project for the International Consulting Ltd. The more I take part in these activities, the more I feel I need to study further.My interest in economics was first ignited in my undergraduate years, when I was listening to a lecture “Planned Economy ad Market Economy” by the preeminent Chinese economist Li Yining ,a professor of the Beijing University, a few blocks away from my university. The thinking hedisplayed in that lecture on the Chinese economy was so sharp and intriguing that I have focused my academic interest on economics ever since. To pursue my this interest, I took a number of economics-related courses, such as Political Economics, Industrial Economics, Technological Economics, Management Economics, Economic Law, Marketing and Market Research Finance. I also took the care to train myself in mathematics fundamentals, such as Liner Algebra, Probability and Statistics, I ndustrial Statistics. Books like “Western Economics” and “Comparative Economics” have been my favorite reading materials. By taking these courses, I learned new economic concepts and theories, and thus broadened my perspectives and sharpened my insights.New perspectives and insights are what China needs as it continues its reforms and modernization drive. Unlike developed countries in the West, which have practiced market economics for several hundred years, Chin has been trying to adopt market principles for only twenty years. The problems waiting to be solved are so many and so complex that even the bravest of the brightest can feel daunted. As the country tries to restructure and rejuvenate its larger, state-owned enterprises, a host of challenges, not the least of which are financial crisis, unemployment, inflation and so on, are rattling the nation. Nobody seems to be sure what China will face a few years down the road. Can China keep growing? Or will it suffer irreversible setbacks? On top its domestic problems, how will China cope with the international competition?To help answer these questions, I need to further refine my expertise in e conomics. I hope to become one of the country’s own economists armed with a sophisticated understanding of both the complex reality in China and the general market principles and theories that apply throughout the world, like it or mot. Your institution, with a highly qualified faculty, is the university I have long admired. I am confident that, under your seasoned guidance, I can give full play to my potential and realize my career goal.。
美国留学如何构思PS等留学文书在美国留学申请中,PS所占的比重很大,美国大学招生官通过PS 来了解学生的品质,经历和兴趣,结合RL和CV等来评定学生是否有被录取的资格。
因此,PS的写作成了美国留学申请中非常重要的一环。
在准备写PS等留学文书前,一定要对留学文书如何写作,如何构思,包括哪些内容等进行了解,多看看前人们所写的文章,找出自己的写作思路,方可动笔写作。
下文一篇优秀的PS范文,学生们可以参考一下。
I can’t tell you in which peer group I’d fit best because I’m a social chameleon and am comfortable in most; I will instead describe my own social situation and the various cliques I drift in and out of.My high school’s student body is from a part of town that is much more diverse than the rest of the city, and the city as a whole is more diverse than most of the state. The location of my school, only a few blocks from the University of Oregon, is greatly responsible for the social atmosphere. Whereas the other high schools in town draw mainly from middle-class white suburban families, mine sits in the division between the poor west university neighborhood and the affluent east university one. East university is hilly and forested with quiet residential streets and peaceful, large houses. A few blocks west, using the university as the divider, the houses become small and seedy. On the west side of my school there are many dirty apartments; crime is high and social status is low.The result is the presence of two very distinct social scenes in the school itself. What is ironic although not crucial to this essay is that the school, a squat, gray-stained concrete sprawl, is divided right through the middle, just as its surroundingneighborhood is. The west wing ends in a gym, a symbol of lower-class recreation, and low aspiration, while the east wing holds the auditorium, the stronghold of sophistication, highbrow musical and theatrical achievement. On the east side are artsy wall murals, on the west side only graffiti.The west parking lot holds mostly dirty pickup trucks, low-rider gangster cars and dilapidated, inherited little Hondas. The east lot is the home of numerous Mercedes and Chevy Suburbans, the gas-guzzlers and the late-models. The A.P. classes are strongly rooted in the east end; the remedial ones are clustered around the west athletic facilities. I burden you with this description in order to display the split, both social and geographic, that characterizes my academic life.My classes are almost entirely on the east end of school; I’m attracted to them in a polar fashion as if I were a positively charged little scholastic particle, happily magnetized to the center of learning. However, despite the fact that I am fully integrated and comfortable in the intellectual east-end society, the stereotypical education robot is something I am not. My primary social scene is a contrast to the nerd-set.Understand that I’m a snowboarder and that the Oregon snowboard culture is not some obscure athletic fringe group; on the contrary, it is quite defined, almost established in the mainstream. It is complete with its own dialect, style and customs. The rest of the snowboarders in school are undeniably members of the west halls and their houses are on the wrong side of the university.I spend my lunches with my fellow nerds. We go to coffee shops and delis. I’m accepted as one of them. My larger-than-normal pants and similar statements of snow-style arerecognized as superficial. However, I spend my weekends with the other crew. We go to parties and up to the mountain. We share the same discoloration of our faces, tan and leathery on the cheeks and forehead, pale around the eyes. Our faces bear the scars of wearing snowboarding goggles too often in the bright sun, and are proof of our membership in the snow posse, as indelible as the ornate tattoos that show gang alliances. Our tans demand respect from the kids in the west halls, for they are our social credentials in that end of the school, equivalent to standing on the varsity football team. Once associated with grungy skateboarders, the snowboard culture has found its own niche, just as surfing did before it. We now show much more similarity to jocks than to skater punks.When I’m with my classmates, I’m one of them-a cultivated, upper-class young man. I’m invited to their houses and speak to their parents on a polite first name basis. When I hang out with boarders and jocks, I’m i nvited to their refuges and speak the rapidly shifting socialect. Very few of the students in my school drift socially as I do. As a result of the recent American infatuation with the alternative sub-culture, my classmates give me respect for embodying an unconventional trend while preserving my proper social standing. In the same sense, my clan from the wrong end of the school respects me for remaining faithful to our culture while succeeding academically; in their eyes I have found a way to get out of the social hole without selling out.I’m perfectly comfortable with the fact that I don’t have one single social identity. I think that if I only felt comfortable among kids from a certain end of the school, my life would be less interesting.。
申请国外⼤学PS格式内容Personal statementsYour Personal Statement is an important part of your UCAS application, and you will need to begin working on it early in your application process.Task 1: What is a personal statement?Look at Text 1. It contains a brief introduction to Personal Statements and two quotations from university tutors. Use the text to answer the following questions:1.What is the aim of a Personal Statement?2.Who will read it?3.Why is it important?4.What one thing do both tutors say is important?General adviceThe following is some general advice when writing a personal statement.●Make it interesting! One of the worst things you can do is to bore the admissions tutor.●Be specific. Don't, for example, state that you want to be an accountant unless you can back itup with specific reasons. Do you want to be an engineer? Say why!●Concentrate on the opening. The opening paragraph is generally the most important. It is herethat you grab the reader's attention or lose it.●Don?t include certain topics. For example, don?t talk about your primary school – too long ago!Don't talk about your parents (not personal)! Don?t try to be funny!●Write well. Type and proofread your essay very carefully. Many admissions officers say thatgood written skills and command of correct use of language are important to them as they readthese statements. Express yourself clearly and concisely. Adhere to stated word limits:Maximum 47 lines or 4000 letters (including spaces).Specific adviceYou need to sell yourself. Admissions tutors are looking for well-rounded individuals, people with a real interest and motivation in the courses they are applying for.UCAS suggests you include some or all of the following points in 2 or 3 body paragraphs: why you have chosen the courses you have listed;what interests you about your subject. (include details of what you?ve read about the subject);particular interests you have in your current studies;any job, work experience, placement or voluntary work you have done, particularly if it is relevant to your subject;other achievements;your future plans;any subjects you are studying that do not have an exam;any sponsorship or placements you have or have applied for;your social, sports or leisure interests (you should include what they have taught you).You need to set the scene by writing why you have applied for these courses. This is probably the most important section of the personal statement. You need to show that you have done some research into the course(s) you want to study. Note: if all your courses are similar you can write about them together. If you have 2 very different courses you MUST discuss both in 2 separate paragraphs. You can also write about your interests/hobbies in and out of school. Have you had any positions of responsibility, been involved in any clubs or societies, sporting interests etc? Don't just list what you have done. Explain what you have gained from the experience, e.g.: ability to work in a team; communicate well with others; more understanding of the needs of others.Task 2: Sample Personal Statement: reading (1)Below is an example of a Personal Statement (Text 2). Read the first 2 paragraphs and the last paragraph, and answer the following questions:1.Which subject does the student want to study?2.What does he compare this subject to?3.In which paragraph does he talk about the similarities of these two things?4.In which paragraph does he talk about the differences?5.Is the introduction interesting? Did it …grab the reader?s attention??6.Does the conclusion have a strong …selling point??[WARNING – DO NOT COPY. PERSONAL STATEMENTS MUST BE PERSONAL]Task 3: Sample personal statement: reading (2)Read Text 2 again. This time, think about the things that UCAS suggest you should include in your personal statement (listed in the table below). Which have been included in this personal statement?Put a tick (?) next to those which are included; put a cross (?) next to those not included. For those with a ?, write which paragraph(s) this information is in.Task 4: Personal statement questionsUse the questions below to help you prepare for writing your personal statement. Continue on another page if necessary.。
美国本科申请文书范文(实用6篇)I love putting on makeup. There is something extraordinarily satisfying about choosing different colors and textures to put on my face exactly how I please.Whether terrifying or not, makeup is a relaxing and creative way for me to express myself.dear mr. smith,i will be available during the weekdays in the morning for any interviews you may want to give. enclosed is my resume, and hoping for your immediate reply.sincerely yours,bettySome of my hardest decisions take place in the booth of a restaurant, so choosing a major has been an absolutely agonizing process for me. I fancied subject areas from English to chemistry, but I finally (hesitantly) decided on double majoring in mathematics and economics and minoring in French. My most concrete interest, mathematics, originates from my introduction to calculus and the realization that the breadth and depth of the mathematical world extend beyond straight numerical calculations. I believe that MIT’s superior mathematics program will add unimaginably new dimensions to this magical realm that I have only just discovered.【英语要求】美国大学都要求学生在申请时提供英语成绩,基本要求为本科托福不低于500分。
美国留学申请文书模板范例美国留学申请文书模板In the capacity of the former chairman of the Department of Finance and the associate dean of Business School in YYY University (P. R. China), I am writing with pleasure to recommend Ms. Sophie XXX to your esteemed graduate school.Ms. XXX is a distinguished student in the department. I know her well through different occasions, besides teaching her a Financial Engineering course last year. I got to know her personally 2 years ago, when she was a candidate for exchange-student program of YYY University. Concerning her unspectacular academic results and her outstanding performance, she was awarded our universitys scholarship and a chance to study abroad in ZZZ University, which only one student from our department can receive every year. Her semester-long experience there turned out to be an impressive success. Ms. XXX showed great aptitude on all the courses she took and her GPA of that semester was 3.80. If you take the difficulty of the courses and strict grading into account, you will understand why her scores are among the top five. Undoubtedly, she got excellent scores on other core courses and ranked among the top 5% of her class when she got her bachelors degree.Having been Ms. XXXs director while she was completing her undergraduate thesis defense in 2008, I was greatly impressed with herskillful diagrams, and with the unified and coherent manner in which she articulated her thesis. She chose a daring topic – stock index futures arbitrage. In China, this is a very hot event. Although there are several models around the world, not one yet has been found suitable for China. She proposed a very feasible one in her thesis paper. Moreover, she also demonstrated a high level of proficiency in using statistic software in her research. Not only was the committee struck by the display of creativity at her thesis defense conference, her lucid presentation expressed clear and logic thought. Her expansive and open-minded academic perspectives really struck a chord, so it gives me a great deal of pleasure to give you my recommendation to this outstanding young lady of immense promise.After she graduated from YYY University, she still keeps in touch with me. I feel very delighted when she told me she would like to pursue her advanced studies in your honored program. I trust her academic excellence, spirit of devotion and pleasant personality warrant your serious consideration of her application. Should there be any way in which I can be of further assistance in your deliberations, please do not hesitate to contact me directly.美国留学申请文书指南一:个人陈述 (Personal Statement,以下简称"PS")PS是申请美国本科/研究生需要提交的一份关于自我的*。
申请留学的ps范文申请留学的ps范文实际上,相信在日常的工作和生活中,我们总会听到PS,大多数人第一时间都会想到Adobe Photoshop,简称PS,是一种图像处理软件。
但是在店铺这一领域,PS指的是Personal Statement,也就是个人陈述。
下面店铺为大家整理了申请留学的ps范文相关的知识,希望对大家有用。
申请留学的ps范文解析留学个人陈述模板的开头部分留学个人陈述(PS)在开头需要直奔主题,因为外国老师不喜欢绕来绕去的措辞,最好在开始就表现出积极的态度,以及表明自己为什么想要学这个专业,同时也不要忘记了阐述自己的独特之处。
当然,因为这个是开始,所以要以简单明了为主。
以下就是英文的模板例文:I graduated from xxx university with a degree in xxx (subject).I would like to apply xxx at your university. With my great passion in the area, I hope to become an expert in xxxx industry. I understand that xxxx university is famous for xxxx, it has established a great reputation in the xxx industry with lots of graduates from becoming leaders in the field. I want to become one of them, and therefore, I am very interested and keen to be involved in your university…译文:我是某某大学某某专业毕业的学生,想申请贵校的某某专业。
我对某某专业很感兴趣,希望将来能成为这个行业的专家。
美国哈佛大学ps写作要求美国哈佛大学ps写作要求哈佛大学在2005年度最新美国大学综合排名中居第一名。
哈佛大学法学院是美国最古老法学学院之一,可以说是执法律教育界之牛耳。
以下是哈佛大学法学院 personal statement的要求。
申请者应该展示自己的背景、经历和观点。
你自己可以决定personal statement的内容以及最好的表达方式,但是无论怎样,读者都希望对你“本人以及法学院潜在学生”有一个理解。
要求就是有说服力的、清楚的、简介的、适时的(persuasive, clear, succinct, and timely)。
诚恳、直接、有深度的个人陈述最有助于申请(Candid, forthright and thoughtful statements are always the most helpful.)全文如下: Applicants present themselves, their backgrounds, experiences, and ideas to the Admissions Committee in a Personal Statement. Because people and their experiences are diverse, you are the best person to determine the content of your own statement. It is for you to decide what information you would like to convey, and the best way for you to convey it. Whatever you write, readers will be seeking to get a sense of you as a person and as a potential student and graduate of Harvard Law School. In this context, it is generally more helpful to write what you think readers should know to have a better sense of who you are rather than writing what you think the readers want to read. The Personal Statement can be an opportunity to illuminate your intellectual background and interests, or to provide information about yourself and your achievements that may not be fully evident through other information provided in the application. In many ways, you are preparing a case. As in most legal cases, it is important to be persuasive, clear, succinct, and timely. There are few substitutes for careful forethought and planning in this process.We understand that it can be difficult to discuss oneself on paper, but our experience is that written statements are valuable in the selection process. Candid, forthright and thoughtful statements are always the most helpful.。
留学ps格式模板全文共四篇示例,供读者参考第一篇示例:留学PS格式模板在申请留学时,个人陈述(Personal Statement, 简称PS)是至关重要的一部分。
一篇优秀的PS能够展示你的个性特点、学术能力和适应能力,让招生委员会对你产生兴趣。
下面是一份关于留学PS格式模板,供大家参考借鉴。
姓名:申请国家/学校:申请专业:联系方式:引言:(简短介绍个人背景,描述为何选择该国家/学校/专业)第二段:(阐述个人学术背景,包括专业课程,实习经验,科研成果,竞赛获奖等)第三段:(描述个人兴趣爱好,志愿活动,领导能力和团队合作精神)第四段:(展示个人性格特点,包括独立思考能力,创新意识,解决问题能力)结尾:(总结个人申请动机,表达对未来的期望和计划)附件:(附上推荐信,成绩单,个人简历等相关资料)以上是一份关于留学PS格式模板的简要介绍,留学PS的关键在于真诚和个性化。
希望这份模板能够帮助你写出一篇出色的个人陈述,成功申请到心仪的留学机会。
祝你好运!第二篇示例:留学PS(Personal Statement)是留学申请中非常重要的一项材料,它是展示自己个人特质和申请动机的关键。
在撰写留学PS时,要求表达清晰、连贯,突出自己与众不同的优势及对所申请专业的热爱和理解。
下面是一个关于留学PS格式模板的示例,供大家参考:第一部分:引言1. 开头可以是一句引人注目的话或者故事,引起读者的兴趣;2. 简单介绍自己的背景,包括姓名、年龄、所在国家/城市;3. 提及所申请的院校、专业以及申请理由;4. 用一个简短的段落引导下文,引出主题。
第二部分:学术背景1. 介绍自己的学术背景,包括就读学校、专业、学术成绩等;2. 展示自己在学术上的优势和特长,包括研究经验、获奖情况等;3. 强调自己对所申请专业的热爱和理解;4. 表达对未来学术发展的期望和目标。
第三部分:个人经历1. 简要介绍自己的个人经历,包括实习、志愿者活动、社团经历等;2. 强调这些经历对自己的成长和影响;3. 解释这些经历如何与所申请的专业和未来职业规划相联系;4. 体现出自己的领导能力、团队合作精神和社会责任感。
个人陈述怎么写,写多少字?个人陈述,需要学生自己写,就是介绍自己,包括兴趣、爱好、经历等相关情况,突出自己地优势和闪光点,也可写给自己印象比较深地一件事、这件事对自己有什么影响等,从而更好地向国外学校推荐自己.资料个人收集整理,勿做商业用途要研究如何写,我们就要首先了解为什么美国大学要求你提供.原因很简单,美国大学本科教育地目标是培养健全地“人”,而不是中国传统意义上地功用性地“人才”.因此,除了通过你地高中成绩和分数了解你地学习能力外,学校还需要了解你作为一个社会公民地思想、价值观、独特经历以及未来规划.这一点,对于一些有着自身教育使命和价值观地学校,显得更加重要.毫无疑问给申请人提供了一个最好地展示自我地机会,也是申请人和录取委员会地所有成员进行深度沟通地唯一渠道.资料个人收集整理,勿做商业用途一篇好地是应该是能够给读者带来好地阅读体验地.这个定义其实就是突出了“体验”这个词.而这么强调体验是有理由地.原因很简单:当录取委员会地工作人员要阅读成千上万地地时候,他们是不可能记得住你地具体内容,但在阅读时地感受,却容易记得更牢.这就像,当你在回忆一个旧日恋人时,你可能连他她长什么样有些淡忘了,但整体地感觉却历历在目.所以,对于申请者而言,当你想方设法写好一篇地时候,你实际上就在做一项“”(印象管理)地工作.当我们搞清楚这一点后,很多问题就容易回答了.第一,应该写什么样地内容?对于这个问题,我地答案很简单:能给读者留下良好阅读体验地内容.那什么样地内容能给读者留下良好地阅读体验?我想,可以由这么几个标准:)新鲜.对于一个成天被大量内容雷同地折磨地美国大学招生官员而言,没有什么比阅读到一篇充满新鲜信息地文章更有意思地了.对于西方人而言,大凡是和中国传统相关地、中国风土人情相关地、中国历史相关地、中国文化相关地东西,都构成对他们地新鲜感.当然,如果他们阅读了大量地相关文章,那么这个新鲜感会大打折扣.)有思想和深度.阅读地过程本质上就是作者通过文字和读者交流思想和情感地过程.一篇有思想有深度地文章能够让读者对作者地思想和情绪产生共鸣,引发联想,并进而产生对作者地好感.)轻松.为什么要强调轻松?是因为我看到太多中国地学生喜欢写自己童年时地逆境,仿佛从小苦大仇深,熬到今天这步可谓历尽坎坷.我觉得这样地故事不是不可以写,但如果写得太多太重,给人沉闷压抑地感觉.还是要给他们准备一些能够让他们放松下来阅读并从中享受作者地情趣和思想地文章.)人文.说起人文两个字,可能很多读者会觉得比较高深.其实这是一个非常朴实地词汇.凡是能触及人类本性和心灵层面地,我们都可以归之为人文.例如亲情、友谊、爱情、责任、荣誉、责任、同情等.原因也很简单:再严密地逻辑推理,再高深地科技,只能(证明),但人文地东西能够(感动)我们.第二,一旦在内容这个大方向上确定后,我们再考虑怎么写地问题.基本地出发点还是一样:要让读者以良好地阅读体验.基于此,我们首先想到就是语言问题.优秀地语言表现,我认为首先要强调地就是易读.很多中国学生喜欢用一些生僻地词汇来显示自己地词汇水平,往往是适得其反.请稍体谅一下招生委员会地工作人员吧,他们一天要读几十篇文章.多用简单易懂地词汇,多用短句,少用从句,少用长句,少用倒装结构,能帮助他们多块好省地完成他们地本质工作.当然,我并不是说写文章就是要平铺直叙,索然无味,适当地画龙点睛式地语句是必要地,关键是掌握好度.很多时候,生动地,富有表现力地语言,往往是最简单地.其次,我要强调地是写作地逻辑性、条理性和流畅性.英语地写作中,逻辑性是非常重要地.逻辑不清,小至句子地语态和时态掌握不对,大到句子承接、篇章结构都会有问题.而偏偏中国学生从小接受地逻辑教育不够,说话往往前言不搭后语.这样地文章,肯定是要被筛掉地.条理性,我想不用多解释.关于流畅性地问题,需要多说几句.这里地流畅性,不仅仅指逻辑严密,条理清晰,简明易懂,还包含了节奏美感地意思.多看看美国地电影和纽约时报,大家就知道我说地是什么意思了.其实这个道理也很简单:逻辑严密,条理清晰地平铺直叙,我们只能把它比作直板地线条,把它和婀娜地曲线相比,便高下立现.同样地道理适用于我们赏读.最后,我还要强调一个“画面化”地原则.我们写地终极目地是让读者在阅读过程中产生良好地阅读体验,并且尽可能长地保留这种体验.画面式、场景式地描写将有助于更加直观地传递作者地情绪、思想和形象.例如,在为一个学生策划时,为了凸现其对从小对天文地浓厚兴趣,我用了这么一段画面式地开篇:“, , …” , , ’ , . . 通过这段简单地描写,一个对天文学充满好奇心地孩子地形象就栩栩如生了.资料个人收集整理,勿做商业用途以上谈地都是原则性地问题,具体到写作时,会有哪些套路这个问题很多同学都很迷茫,这里我提供几种常用地写作程式.最常用地套路是以某一主线,将不同阶段地经历串联起来,展现出发展地轨迹,昭示将来地规划,并展示作者地思想、价值观或人生态度.这个主线,可以是某一个兴趣,或者某个目标,或者某个对某个事务地理解或态度.例如,在上述案例中,主人公从小就对天文深感兴趣,他在常年地天文观测中,获得了极大地乐趣,并进而在社区成立了天文兴趣小组,和同伴们分享科学探索地乐趣.年狮子座流星雨地成功观测,让作者获得极大满足,而作者而由此更加坚定了追随多年地梦想,去研究宇宙,体会纯粹地乐趣.这一种写法,往往可以通过时间地转换,来展现主线周围地多个层面.在上述案例中,就包含了作者对科学探索地兴趣,对社区地贡献、主动创新以及领导精神等诸多方面.第二种写法,一般是描述一个发生在近年地一个比较重大地经历,并由此引申出作者地目标、愿望或者思考.这种写法和第一种地区别在于,不需要展现太明显地时间跨度,而把着眼点放在某个时间点或者时间段上.这样写地好处是可以把这个经历写得更加详细生动.第三种写法,是比较少,也是难度比较大地一种写法,就是抒情或者议论为主地写法.作者往往对生活中地某个方面抒发感怀,或者对某个问题发表见解.这种写法有些类似散文或者杂文地写法,难度较大,对于驾驭语言地能力要求很高.我曾经看到过有一些中国中学生试图这么写,但都写得不是很好.但如果写得好,并且有其他文章配合,应该可以非常出彩.除非学生特别有思想,语言驾驭能力特别突出,并且确信目标学校地招生官员足够有品位,一般不建议采用这种写法. 资料个人收集整理,勿做商业用途。
申请文书写作(一)PS(Personal Statement)的撰写:PS主要是用书面文字向别人展示你的经历,你的想法,学习目标,职业规划等等,在申请过程中的地位可见一般。
下面结合我自己在申请过程中写PS的过程谈一下我自己对PS的看法(个人意见,仅供参考)。
·PS开头的问题往往大家都会说PS的开头是最需要写的很吸引人的部分,所以很多人包括我自己在刚开始写PS的时候都陷入这个窘境,想着如何让评审委员在看到你的开头的时候会有眼前一亮的感觉。
一些很老旧的写法诸如引用名人名言之类的,我也曾经想过,但是这种想法仅仅是我对PS认识的入门级阶段,这种方法如果用的不好反而会带来相反的效果,让人觉得很反感。
我的PS开头经历了如下的过程Dream? American dream? It occurred to my mind too late. Even my undergraduate roommate had taken Toefl-PBT twice, I just thought that Toefl had nothing to do with me and I could not be one of the group members who chased their American dreams. But three years later, I joined in this large group. Till now, I have taken the GRE and Toefl-iBT examination yet since I want to pursue my dream in an oversea country. Yes, America.这个开头是我最开始憋了好久才憋出来的,算是根据我的实情写的,现在来看我也不知道这个开头好不好,抛出来给大家讨论讨论,总之我最终是没有用这个。
申请美国本科文书范文申请美国本科文书范文:Due to the prehensiveness of Chinas reform and open policies,economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its global position. Though more and more panies built,management of panies cannot catch up with the development of the panies. Management is a burgeoning field in China,so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management in England.The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to my childhood. My father was among the first of Chinas new breed of modern entrepreneurs. As a young girl,it was inspirational hearing about his business ventures,and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. My mother was also involved in business as an accountant,helping him with simple calculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I,also,would someday be able to enter the realm of business.With the time of growing up,I preferred reading books to satisfy my curiosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I encountered. Subjects on business and managementbecame a special fascination to me and my knowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasing rapidly.As a high school student in China,I had to concentrate on the College Entrance Examination (CEE),even so,books not related to the exams were never excluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June,2001,I was so nervous that I didnt score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in the department of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional Chinese Medicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be a failure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms,I realized that I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At that moment,I lost my direction and objectives.My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter of fact,I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American,and some books about management by Peter F.Drucker. I began to notice something interesting:Why some panies can produce more than others- Why some pany can sell more than others- Why some panies can build up but others cannot when facing the same difficulties-.With the questions in my mind,I started to read manyrelevant books. I was lucky to read the book Jack:Straight from the Gutby Jack Welch,in Which John A. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for a pany. When I was a junior,I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. I should manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shop even made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the run the shop. From this,my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business has been greatly developed,definitely I was increasingly interested in what I was doing. By December,2003,I had finally determined to take business management as my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge,I strived to gain more practical work experience in some big panies.Fortunately,as a senior,I began by conducting an internship in the Architecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months,I worked as an assistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the different departments in this pany and to draft some management system,which broadened my perspective of management conditions and business performance in different industries. The experience showed me that management is much more important than thatof I thought in big panies. After graduation,I continued my work in this pany. In May,2005,the pany offered me an opportunity to participate in an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depth discussions with teachers and students in the classes,they all encouraged me to pursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual ability and the brand new ideas I mentioned.During the short period of training,I realized that pursuing a higher degree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster,with its excellence in management,represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challenging environment,I can build the required foundation of knowledge related to management to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission will be my first step of success. With this in mind,I hereby submit my application,and await your favorable rep.。
菜鸟必看:国外大学申请文书之PS如何写(共五篇)第一篇:菜鸟必看:国外大学申请文书之PS如何写菜鸟必看:国外大学申请文书之PS如何写申请文书是院校了解学生的主要手段之一,因此非常重要。
其中个人陈述(PERSONAL STATEMENT)就是所谓的PS。
下面为大家带来PS的写作技巧。
1.抓住亮点,避免公式化个人陈述(PERSONAL STATEMENT)是在申请过程中按照学校的要求来写的一篇有关申请者背景、学术研究能力以及职业目标的文章。
一篇成功的个人陈述一定要有重点,有内容,根据学校和专业的要求来写,要充分地展示出申请者的优势,以便能够抓住录取委员会的注意力。
2.常见的公式化写作的错误:首先,就是在开头引用名言,这也是大多数申请者最容易采用的一种形式。
其实,引用名言本身无可非议,如果申请者引用的名言能够恰当地反映自己的人生态度,并且能够让对方感觉眼前一亮,那么这个名言一定会为个人陈述增色不少。
但是,绝大多数申请者经常就只会引用常见的几个名言,比如“God helps those who help themselves”等等。
当这句话已经在对方眼前出现无数遍,他看到你再这样写时一定非常反感。
第二,就是在个人陈述里介绍自己的基本情况。
这些信息已经在简历中出现过,没有必要重复,更没有必要把有限的篇幅浪费在这个上面。
第三,强调自己专业的重要性。
那些教授对这些专业的重要性当然比你还要了熟于心,这样做甚至会让人感觉是在班门弄斧。
第四,解释自己TOEFL或者GRE成绩低的原因。
我们不必对自己的成绩做任何解释,对方更不希望看到申请者只会为自己的过错寻找借口。
3.个人陈述十大要点1.一定要追求深度,把主要精力投入在一两个主题或经历上。
2.一定要写别人不可能写的东西,即你自己所有,而别人没有的。
3.一定要让评委看到你与别人的不同之处,尤其是你的特长、特殊的经历、经验等。
4.一定要实事求是,不要以为“理想的你”就是现在的你,不能让人有虚假之感。
申请美国大学本科PS范例Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.I still remember when the monitor first lit up and the grey box roared to my life. She had me at hello, or in this ca se, with the first welcome screen, circa 1999. Initially no one knew how to operate her. Out of curiosity, I worked days in front of her foreign face, eventually coming closer to her intricate soul. Trying out new DOS commands and seeing results became my greatest happiness. The complex visual calculations and efficiency on the computer brought me immediate satisfaction. While some kids defined the high points of their adolescent lives as learning to ride a bike or hitting a home run, my moment of change was switching from Windows 98 to XP. It was during this childhood that I established a passion for Computer Science.Unfortunately, at the age of 13, I indulged in the online game, the Mysterious Land. The game played perfectly into my teenag e whims: when I sought a sense of accomplishment, it rewarded me. Where I sought friends, it gave me an entire network of people relying on me. With just a little bit of focus, I reached the highest level, the peak of gaming perfection! In the first two years of middle school, I burnt the midnight oil and slept less than three hours in the weekend for the first time; with great guilt, I played truant for the first time; I even starved in order to use my lunch money to buy rechargeable cards. It sounds crazy now, but that a ddiction scratched my soul and demanded more. Undoubtedly, my grades fell so much that I went from the top to bottom.After my astonishment when I first met with the crazily low scores, I became apathetic. After a ‘lovely’ summer vacation fulfilled with dazzling equipments and illusory friendships in Mysterious Land, I got in Grade Eight. I still played the whole night, sleeping in one class after another. Deeply addicted, I sometimes couldn’t find the differences between the real and the virtual world. So many times I acted like a bossy team leader while doing sports at school, thus many people had an unfavorable impression of me. However, the obstacles I met in real life only furthered my addiction: the less love and friends I got, the more I became convinced that I should devote myself to the game.Nevertheless, the nightmares all came to an end when my class adviser looked deeply in my eye on getting my final results in the 8th grade. When I got home, I yelled out in the game but people deemed me insane instead of consoling me. A somber sadness embraced me, restricting my breath. I was caught and could not escape. That reality brought me back to life. Feeling fresh air around me instead of the vacuum of virtual happiness, I was freed.Since then I began my struggle to abstain from Mysterious Land. I limited my game time from six hours to one hour step by step; I regulated my schedule and slept from 10p.m to 6a.m every day; I asked my parents to keep my pocket money, and I cleared all m y debts in the game. When I finally felt myself far enough away from Mysterious Land, I believed everything was set. I opened the Program Files, clicked on the familiar folder, and pressed the delete button. At last, I clicked on YES with my shaking hand. “Goodbye.”I said in my heart, deeply lost in mind. On finishing this, I sat on my bed and watched screen-saver changing irregularly all night long. As soon as the sun rose at 5:50a.m and shone me with its first beam, I saw a new world opening its door to me.Soon I rediscovered another aspect of my computer – programming. As I rode the tides of addiction, I also gained knowledge from the swelling sea of the internet, through which I met new programmer friends, exchanged ideas or even worked together for the common goal of understanding the cultural impact of technology. Devoting most my spare time to this aspect set off my passion, which burnt more fiercely than that of the game! Sharing my simple-functioned programs with friends, satisfaction enveloped me tighter than the Mysterious Land ever did. I kept learning the BASIC and other programming languages improving my logical thought process for academics and acting as a catalyst for the study of Mathematics and Science. With a new sense of determination, I managed to rediscover my past hobbies in engineering and rekindle my passion for art. With this acceleration, I returned to be one of the top students in my class.I shall never forget the power I got when I pressed the YES button on the uninstall menu. The strength I got that time, I believe, has never gone away.。