定语从句在写作中的应用(课堂使用版)

Iphone，苹果公司制做，深受年轻人的 欢迎。
• Iphone，a kind of cellpone which is made by Apple，is quite popular among teenagers.
二.作为插入语使用 • 众所周知 • 综上所述 • As we all know • As is mentioned above
三.非限指代整句的使用
• 我们不应该参加选秀节目，这会影响学习。 • We should not take part in the talent show， which has a bad effect on study. • 注意，此句式可以对题目中没有说明的情 况进行细节补充，丰富先行词。
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作业
• • • • • • 1.句子合并 1）Miss Zhang is our English teacher. 2）She is beautiful with big eyes. 3 ) She often plays games in her class. 4) We can learn a lot in her funny class. 2.翻译：正如我们所总结的，过度使用 （overuse）汽车会严重污染环境。 • 3.用定语从句具体化 • I would like to do some voluntary work.
• 翻译：正如我们所总结的，过度使用 （overuse）汽车会严重污染环境。 • As we have concluded，overusing cars will cause serious pollution to our environment. • 3.用定语从句具体化 • I would like to do some voluntary work. • I would like to do some voluntary work which will make contribution to our society.
• 在内容匮乏的情况下，可适当添加细节 • 1.兼顾国内外新闻 ，可使我见识广阔。 • It covers national and international news，which broadens my sight. • 2.介绍名人成功故事，这会激励我努力学习 • It introducs many stories of celebrities， which can inspire me to study hard.
Guangzhou is a beautiful city. It develops very fast Guangzhou is a beautiful city which develops very fast
2.三个句子的合并（适当运用同位语）
Jphn，my best friend，gave me a gift， shich he bought from USA
个人情况：年龄，性别，学历
• I am 16 years old. • I am a girl. • I study in Luoding Experimental Middle school. • 可适当增加细节：是我们城市重点高中之一 I,a 16 years oFra Baidu bibliotekd girl，study in Luoding Experimental Middle school，which is one of the best senior schools in our city.
• 1.罗定，盛产稻米（richly produce rice），是一座 历史名城。 • Luoding，which is richly produce rice，is a famous city with a long history. • 2.我已经到了不能忍受他的地步了（come to the point，stand）。 • I have come to the point where I can't stand him any more. • 3.正如我们预想(expect)的一样,他考试不及格（fail in）。 • As we had expected，he failed in the exam. • 4.我们昨天见的那个女孩今晚也被邀请参加今天的晚 会。 • The girl we met yesterday will be invited to the party tonight. • 5.我们班有（consist of）27个男生和52个女生，他 们大部分来自乡镇（countryside） • Our class consists of 27 boys and 52 girls， most of them are from countryside.
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1.句子合并 1）Miss Zhang is our English teacher. 2）She is beautiful with big eyes. 3 ) She often plays games in her class. 4) We can learn a lot in her funny class. Miss Zhang，our beautiful English teacher with big eyes，often plays games in her class in which we can learn a lot.
插入语位置灵活，可放在句子前中后的 位置。
• 1.众所周知，中国拥有最多的人口 • China，as we all know，has the largest population in the world. • 2.综上所述，我赞成后者的观点 • As is mentioned above，I am in favor of the latter view. • 3.正如我们所期待的，她取得了第一名 • She ，as we expected，won the first prize.
即将到来的端午节是中国的传统节日
• The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese Festival. • 定语从句可以对表达中没有说明的情况进 行细节补充，丰富先行词（Festival） • 可补充:节日的目的，节目的活动 • The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese Festival which is celebrated to honor our national hero，Qu Yuan.
3.四个句子的合并（同位语词组）
• Kate，a new student from a northen province，speaks a dialect which we find it hard to understand.
• Wangmeng，a girl of 25 who was born in Hei Longjiang Provice，began her skating training at the age of 10.
重要改革信息
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广东省2016-2019年高考 1.英语听说考试，分值15分； 2.笔试采用全国课标I卷，分值135分！ 题型为： 完形填空20题， 40分； 阅读理解4篇，15题， 30分； 阅读填空，7词选5词填空, 10分； 语法填空15分，短文改错 15分； 书面表达 25分（话题作文）
定语从句在写作中的应用
一 简单句合并
• 定语从句可将两个或两个以上的简单句进 行信息的融合。三个以上的简单句往往会 借助同位语，使句子表述变得简单自然。
1.两个句子的合并
• S1：Harry Porter is a boy. • S2：He has a scar on his forehead. • S1+S2 • Harry Porter is a boy who has a scar on his forehead.
My destmate is a very warm-hearted man.
• 用定语从句具体化：经常帮我买早餐，在 我有困难的时候帮助我，帮我提高学习成 绩等 • My destmate is a very warm-hearted man，who always lends me a hand when I am in need .