2002年1月份四级作文范文KK版
Directions:For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内
容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表
扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。
分析：这篇作文为典型的信件应用文，中文提示部分指出可
以写成表扬，也可以写成批评建议，也可以兼而有之。这里
建议大家在写作时以批评建议为主，加上少部分的赞扬来写
作，因为对于食堂服务这种大众经常诟病的话题写批评建议
更加有话可说。因此这篇文章可以当成投诉建议信来处理。
文章格式：正文三段式。但是请注意英文信件的格式，首先
在信件左上角写上收信人是谁，这篇文章的收信人是校长，
所以写Dear Mr. President。如果当你不知道收信人是谁的时候，
可以写Dear Sir or Madam，或者写成To whom it may concern。在正文结束之后，请在右下角写上落款Yours sincerely，
Li Ming（注意要写成两行）
正文部分：
第一段：信件作文的第一段可以写成2句。第一句表明身份，说明自己是谁，第二句说明自己的写信目的。
第二段：提出你认为的餐厅不好的地方和好的地方。在写作
时可以就食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等方面构思。
第三段：希望对方重视你提出的问题，并且期待对方回信。
Dear Mr. President,
My name is Li Ming and I major in Economics.I venture to write
this letter because I am not content with the canteen service on campus.
(注：这里是学生写给校长可以用I venture to write this letter，口气比较谦卑，也可以直接使用I am wrting to来表示写作目的)
Although the canteen workers are very patient and always friendly，students are complaining about the unsatisdying service of
it.(注：此句为二段主题句)To begiin with, the quality of the dishes should
be improved due to the fact that all the dishes available are the same
all the year round.What is more, the price is always too high so we
hope that the canteen can provide us with not only deletable but also
cheaper food.Finally, the environment is so noisy that we can’t enjoy our meals in good mood. I suggest that there should be some soft
music to help us relax.
These suggestions are not just of my own, but also of many other
students. We hope our respectable president will pay attention to our
suggestions at your earliest convenience.I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Liming
