高考英语-概要写作-公开课

Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
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概要写作难点 1
• How to get the key points quickly and correctly? (如何快速、准确地捕捉要点)
抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息
Para 1： topic sentence Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. 忽略具体事例 detailed examplecharacteristics
Para2.
Modern industry has convinced us that products are not permanent. To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them, which has resulted in a great waste of the earth’s resources.
改变主语（形式主语）
2. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.
•To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them. 正话反说、反话正说 •It is more expensive to repair them than to throw them away.
概要写作评分标准第五档（21–25points）：
1.理解准确，涵盖所有要点 contents 2.准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇(内容)
3.
完全使用自己的语言。(60-80W)
language skills (语言)
4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使概要
结构紧凑 structure (结构)
Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.
忽略具体事例 detailed examples
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
Para 3： 过渡句
This wastefulness of trouble.
近义词替换
源自文库
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spent much money on
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use it carefully
You spent much money on it and treasure it.
Para1.
Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable You spent much money on it and treasure it.
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改变句式 result in
This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources.
which has resulted in a great waste of the earth’s resources.
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why can’t we act before this happens? Why can’t we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue? （182W）
概要写作难点 2
• How to express the key points by using
your own words properly?
(如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑)
近义词替换
1.Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever.
Step 1 . Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.
Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.
Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why can’t we act before this happens? Why can’t we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?