2019年高考英语大一轮层级化晋级写作练习:层级1 学案1 课时提能训练 万变不离其宗的5种基本句式
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专题1__应用文写作之建议信【写作点拨】建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。
建议信可能是写给个人,也可能是写给某个组织或机构。
信的内容要包括写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由。
建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等依次陈述建议,具体为:第一段:表明写作意图。
陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气。
第二段:应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后指出需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。
注意千万不要让对方认为是在投诉,而不是在提建议。
第三段:对提出的建议进行总结。
要注意有礼貌,使对方能容易接受。
【词句模板】1.段首常用语:(1)I am writing to express my views concerning…(2)You have asked for my advice about…and I will try to make some suggestions.2.表达建议常用语:(1)I think the most suitable…for you is…(2)I would like to suggest that…(3)You'd better…/It's better to…(4)As far as I am concerned…/In my opinion…(5)For one thing…;for another…(6)If I were you, I would…(7)It seems to me that you could…3.段尾常用语:(1)I think it would be more beneficial if you could…(2)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.(3)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.(4)I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.(5)I will be ready for discussing this matter into further details.4.建议信格式模板:Dear ________,I am ________.Your collection of suggestions on ________ is ________. As is known to all, ________. My suggestions are as follows:Firstly, ________.(People can ________.)Secondly,________. (To make economic profits, ________.)Thirdly, ________.(Many of them ________.)I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you into further details./Your kind consideration of my suggestions will be highly appreciated.Good luck with your ________.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【活学活用】假定你是李华,贵校在学生中征集意见,询问学生是否赞成开设iPad课堂(iPad classrooms)。
第15讲书写规范高考英语书面表达全国卷的评分原则:许多考生只重视书面表达内容的训练和提高,忽略了卷面书写的规范训练,影响考试分数。
要做到卷面工整、美观,考生需要注意:1.分段。
大多数文章可分为三段。
段落层次清晰,段首对齐或缩进约4个字符的距离。
2.字母饱满圆润,清晰可辨。
对于a,o;u,r,v;e,t,c;h,l等在手写体中易于混淆的字母,一定要写清楚,易于辨认。
要避免笔顺错误或随意连笔造成的字母混淆。
笔顺易错的字母是E,F,H,N,O,R,W,d,i,j,需重点模仿英语规范手写体字帖上这些字母的笔顺。
3.字母上中下比例恰当考生脱离了四线三格后,要尽量压线书写,避免所有字母悬于线上,呈波浪式前进。
严禁b,d,h,k,l,t上部过长或f,g,j,p,q,y下部过长等比例失衡现象。
4.间距均匀字母与字母之间,单词与单词之间都要间距均匀。
单词之间约为一两个字母的宽度,千万不能太拥挤或太松散。
如:I come from China.不能写成:IcomefromChina.也不能写成I come from China.5.倾斜度一致写字母时要注意倾斜度,所有的字母一律向右倾斜5度左右,要保持倾斜度一致。
6.准确运用标点英语中的标点符号与汉语标点符号基本相同,只有句号、省略号等不一样。
英语的句号不是“。
”,而是实心的“.”;省略号不是“……”,而是“...”。
连字符号不要写得太长,以免跟破折号混淆。
其长度相当于一个小写字母。
英语中没有顿号“、”,在表示句中较短的并列词语之间的停顿时,英语只能用逗号;连接一系列并列项目的“and”或“or”之前往往可以用逗号。
英语中没有书名号《》,一般用引号。
如:Yesterday she saw an English film “Gone with the Wind”.。
7.注意移行规则在书写英语时,如在一行之末无法将一个词写完,这个词的某几个字母必须写到下一行去,这种书写现象被称为单词的移行。
2019版高考英语大一轮复习层级...富有文采的状语从句[课时提能训练]Ⅰ.根据提示用状语从句补全句子1.如果我们继续污染环境,地球将不再适合我们居住。
(if)If_we_go_on_polluting_the_environment,_the earth won’t be fit for us to live in.2.无论我做什么,我都会尽全力做好。
(no matter what)No_matter_what_I_do,_I will try my best to do it well.3.他努力学习功课,结果考试取得了好成绩。
(so that)He worked hard at his lessons, so_that_he_got_high_grades_in_the_exams.4.只要我们有强大的信念,就能够克服任何困难。
(as long as) As_long_as_we_have_a_strong_will,_we’ll be ab le to get over any difficulty.5.尽管有规律的锻炼很重要,但临睡前锻炼不是个好主意。
(though/although/while)Though/Although/While_regular_exercise_is_very_important,_it ’s never a good idea to exercise too close to bedtime.6.既然你找到了一份工作,你应该学会独立不依靠父母。
(now that)Now_that_you_have_got_a_job,_you should learn to be independent of your parents.Ⅱ.请根据以下内容要点写一篇英语短文,尽可能多地使用状语从句假定你是李华,请以“An Unforgettable Sports Meeting”为标题写一篇回忆录,叙述高中时期运动会给你留下的难忘记忆。
[课时提能训练]Ⅰ.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加彩部分1.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达) S o,please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you prepare for your class.Therefore;_make_preparations_for2.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)In order to get a better understanding of Tang Poetry, I advise you to learn some brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.acquire_ 3.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot.various/a_range_of4.(2016·北京高考书面表达)Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.came_up_with5.(2016·四川高考书面表达)The reasons are the following.as_follows6.(2015·湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things ...made_up_my_mind7.As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school.are_supposed_to 8.There’s no harm in your staying up late sometimes.occasionally/once_in_a_while 9.The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.challenging10.So far as I know, everyone of them wants to be a model student.intends_toⅡ.请用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文假定你是中学生李华,家住泉州。
[课时提能训练]Ⅰ.用过渡词汇补全句子1.Besides/In_addition/What’s_more/Moreover (况且), the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless_of (不管) time and space.(2016·江苏高考书面表达)2.First_of_all/To_begin_with (首先), the most significant thing is to set a goal, work out a plan and carry out the plan step by step.3.I lost my way in the forest and to make matters worse/worse still (更糟的是), it got dark.4.On_the_one_hand (一方面), they can sweep the tombs for the dead. On_the_other_hand (另一方面), they can go for a walk in the country in spring when the grass has just turned green.5.In_a_word/In_conclusion/In_short/In_brief (总之), success is important, and so is failure, because it’s the mother of success.Ⅱ.阅读下面短文,选择适当的过渡性词语填空近来,中学生普遍缺乏自我保护意识这一问题备受关注,请你用英语写一篇短文:1.概括中学生自我保护的重要性;2.就如何保护自己谈谈你的看法(至少两点)。
Recently, it has been a great public concern that the students lack self-protection awareness.There is a lack of social experience among students and therefore learning how to protect ourselves is of great significance to us all. 1.For_one_thing,_security comes first. Without security, we can achieve nothing and cannot live up to parents’expectations.2.For_another_thing,_protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy development of the students, which is associated with the happiness of every family.3.Meanwhile,_it also helps to build a more harmonious society.4.Personally,_in order to protect us students, 5.above_all,_we should strengthen our security awareness. 6.Besides,_when accidents occur, we should calm down and turn to teachers or parents for help. The government also plays a leading role in protecting students.7.In_a_word,_only by the combined efforts of every side involved can we live and study inharmony.。
毛额市鹌鹑阳光实验学校万变不离其宗的5种基本句式[课时提能训练]Ⅰ.根据要求补全句子1.在我看来,一个没有朋友的人永远不会幸福。
(主语+系动词+表语) In my opinion, a_person_without_friends_can_never_be_happy.2.我们尚未决定什么时候再讨论这个问题。
(主语+谓语+宾语,“特殊疑问词+不定式”作宾语)We haven’t decided when_to_discuss_the_problem_again.3.每天早上我们都能听到他大声朗读英语。
(主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语)Every morning we_hear_him_read_English aloud.4.奶奶昨晚给我讲了一个很有趣的故事。
(主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语)My granny told_me_a_very_interesting_story last night.5.早睡早起是一个好习惯。
(主语+系动词+表语,动名词作主语)Going_to_bed_early_and_getting_up_early is a good habit.6.我真的很感谢你过来帮我补习数学。
(主语+谓语+宾语,动名词复合结构作宾语)I really appreciate_your_coming_over to help me with my math.7.最近,我的家乡发生了巨大变化。
(主语+谓语)Great_changes_have_taken_place in my hometown in the past ten years.8.这些照片使我想起了我的童年。
(主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语) These pictures made_me_think_of my childhood.Ⅱ.根据要求完成下列题目(Ⅰ)用简单句翻译下列各句,并写出所属的基本句式1.我是一名学生,名叫吉姆。
Unit 1 Living wellⅠ阅读理解A(2018·陕西省部分学校第一学期摸底检测)From young kids to fitness lovers,to those looking for a laugh, or to families looking for a free movie night, Atlantic Station prepares some days for them to enjoy this year.Tot Spot—Each Tuesday morning, Atlantic Station’s Central Park transforms into every child’s dream playground! From 10:00 a.m.to noon, kids can enjoy games,storytelling, toys, music and some very special things. This event begins on April 5 and lasts through September 27.Wellness Wednesday—Each Wednesday from 6:30 p.m.to 7:30 p.m., Atlantic Station’s Central Park becomes the perfect place to find quietness of the mind and body while instructors lead guests through exercises including yoga and more. Wellness Wednesday welcomes all ages and skill levels. This event begins on April 6 and lasts through September 28.Improv in the Park—Whole World Theatre, Atlanta’s premier improv group, has once again partnered with Atlantic Station to bring a familyfriendly night of comedy to the Central Park on the first Wednesday of each month until September. Bring a blanket, relax under the stars and prepare to laugh until your stomach hurts! The hourlong show begins at 8:00 p.m. This event occurs on April 5, May 4, June 1,July 6 and August 3.Movies in the Central Park—Each Thursday night at dusk, guests are invited to bring chairs, blankets, togo snacks and picnics to Atlantic Station’s Central Park. All outdoor screenings are available, weather permitting, so keep your fingers crossed for no The Wizard of Oztype storms! Be sure to arrive early to find a good seat.【解题导语】本文主要介绍了大西洋站几个可以让人们放松自己、享受生活和获得乐趣的活动。
[编写说明] 写作是考生失分的重灾区,针对这一薄弱环节,本书采用4步学习法,教考生先完成→再完美;先求稳→再求变;先仿作→再创作;先写好→再写快。
四个层级梯度设置,步步登高、级级提档。
层级一表达无误保住分——“写对句子”是基础(安排2个学案)写作中写对句子是最基本的要求,其中最重要的一点是句子结构要完整。
所以,在平时训练时一定要从掌握基本句式做起,通过观摩、背诵、仿写,最终写出准确无误的句子。
在高考中即使你的作文不能写得漂漂亮亮、洋气十足,也一定要写得像模像样,硬伤不多!所以学写作,要先从最基本的句子抓起。
学案(一) 万变不离其宗的5种基本句式句子成分构成了英语中各种各样的句子,其实英语中最基本的句式只有五种,其他各种句式都是由这五种基本句式演变而来。
一、主语+谓语(不及物动词)该句式常用来表示主语的动作或状态。
其特点为:句子的谓语动词都能表达完整的意思,这类动词叫作不及物动词,后面可以接副词、介词短语、状语从句等结构。
①The_13th_National_Gameswill take place in Tianjin at the end of August.(2017·天津高考书面表达)第十三届全运会将于8月底在天津举行。
②And Ican play outside too!(2016·四川高考书面表达)我也可以在外面玩![即时演练] 补全句子1.(2017·江苏高考书面表达)如图所示,中国电影的票房收入从2012到2015不断上升。
As is indicated in the graph, the box-office income of Chinese films increased_constantly_ from_2012_to_2015.2.(2015·北京高考书面表达)训练营将于7月20号开始。
This camp will_open_on_July_20th.3.(2014·湖南高考书面表达)因此,这种新鞋最近才问世。
第一节大胆使用高级词汇提升文章档次高考书面表达最高档次的评分标准中,要求“词汇丰富,有修辞意识,显示出较强的语言运用能力”。
因此要想在高考英语写作中取得高分,就必须使用一定的高级词汇,为文章增加闪光点,从而提高文章的档次。
试比较下列几组句子并体会划线部分的表达效果。
a. ① She is a good girl.②She is a sympathetic / warm–hearted / generous girl.b. ① The society still makes women unable to enjoy equal rights.②Women are still denied equal rights in the society.c. ① Not all the books can do good to us.② Not all the books can benefit us.d①We’ll try our best to protect the environment.②We’ll spare no effort to protect the environment.显然第②组的高级词汇更能为文章增色,这些词语的巧妙使用犹如酷暑里的冷饮,给阅卷老师带来丝丝凉意,更能吸引阅卷老师的注意力。
在平常的学习中我们可以尝试从以下三个角度提升所用词汇的档次。
1.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词以增加文采。
如用make use of替代use, 用catch sight of替代see等。
2.使用一些很有“洋味”的词语。
如:Thank you for sharing the time with us. (用share不用spend)The way he views the world is very practical. (用view而不用look at)The noise nearly drove me mad. (用drive而不用make)3.避免重复使用同一单词或短语。
彰显水平的强调句型、倒装句型和There be句型[课时提能训练]Ⅰ.用强调句型、倒装句型或There be句型补全句子1.(2016·北京高考书面表达)正是他的不懈努力使得中国逐渐发生变化。
It_was_his_continuous_efforts_that caused China to change gradually.2.(2015·天津高考满分作文)如果还有什么我可以为你做的事情,请尽快与我联系。
If_there_is_anything_else_I_can_do_for_you,_please contact me as soon as possible.3.(2015·四川高考满分作文)只有通过练习你才能发现这种语言的魅力。
Only_through_practice_can_you_find the beauty of this language.4.(2015·广东高考满分作文)毫无疑问,它能增强人们的健康意识,但更有可能引起过度焦虑。
There_is_no_doubt_that it can enhance people’s consciousness of health, but it is more likely to result in overanxiety.5.窗户旁坐着一个年轻人,手里拿着一本杂志。
By_the_window_sat a young man with a magazine in his hand.Ⅱ.请根据以下内容要点写一篇英语短文,尽可能多地使用强调句型、倒装句型和There be句型1.在我的家乡曾经有一条小河,鱼儿在河中快乐地游着。
2.每当我看见这条小河,我禁不住会想到我快乐的童年。
3.现在不仅河中没有了鱼,而且发出难闻的气味。
4.据说是附近的一家化工厂使得河水受到了如此严重的污染。
5.我认为确实到了政府采取措施制止污染的时候了。
[课时提能训练]
Ⅰ.根据要求补全句子
1.在我看来,一个没有朋友的人永远不会幸福。
(主语+系动词+表语)
In my opinion, a_person_without_friends_can_never_be_happy.
2.我们尚未决定什么时候再讨论这个问题。
(主语+谓语+宾语,“特殊疑问词+不定式”作宾语)
We haven’t decided when_to_discuss_the_problem_again.
3.每天早上我们都能听到他大声朗读英语。
(主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语)
Every morning we_hear_him_read_English aloud.
4.奶奶昨晚给我讲了一个很有趣的故事。
(主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语)
My granny told_me_a_very_interesting_story last night.
5.早睡早起是一个好习惯。
(主语+系动词+表语,动名词作主语)
Going_to_bed_early_and_getting_up_early is a good habit.
6.我真的很感谢你过来帮我补习数学。
(主语+谓语+宾语,动名词复合结构作宾语)
I really appreciate_your_coming_over to help me with my math.
7.最近10年,我的家乡发生了巨大变化。
(主语+谓语)
Great_changes_have_taken_place in my hometown in the past ten years.
8.这些照片使我想起了我的童年。
(主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语)
These pictures made_me_think_of my childhood.
Ⅱ.根据要求完成下列题目
(Ⅰ)用简单句翻译下列各句,并写出所属的基本句式
1.我是一名美国学生,名叫吉姆。
I_am_an_American_student,_Jim.(主语+系动词+表语)
2.上周我和家人去了北京,参观了许多名胜。
Last_week_I_went_to_Beijing_and_visited_many_places_of_interest_with_my_family.(主语+谓语+宾语)
3.在我参观期间,我在北京大饭店(BEIJING GRAND HOTEL)住了五天。
During_my_visit,_I_stayed_at_the_BEIJING_GRAND_HOTEL_for_five_days.(主语+谓语)
4.这个旅馆给我们提供了很好的服务。
The_hotel_offered_us_good_service.(主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语)
5.他们总是将房间保持得很整洁。
They_always_keep_the_rooms_clean_and_tidy.(主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语)
6.外国游客住在那里很方便。
It is very convenient for foreign visitors to stay there.(主语+系动词+表语,it作形式主
语)
(Ⅱ)适当添加细节将(Ⅰ)中的6个句子合并成一篇短文
I_am_an_American_student_whose_name_is_Jim._Last_week_I_went_to_Beijing_and _visited_many_places_of_interest_with_my_family._During_my_visit,_I_stayed_at_the_BEI JING_GRAND_HOTEL_for_five_days,_which_offered_us_good_service._And_they_always _keep_the_rooms_clean_and_tidy._What’s_more,_with_everything_labeled_in_both_English_and_Chinese,_it_is_very_convenient_fo r_foreign_visitors_to_stay_there._I_was_deeply_touched_by_this.。