四六级漫画类作文

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首段:

◆As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above+图片描述

◆The cartoon subtly and symbolically depicts a thought-provoking

scenario in which+图片描述

◆What is clearly described in the drawing above is that+图片描述

◆The above picture reflects a universal social phenomenon in China

that+图片描述

由浅入深之句:

◆Simple and funny as the cartoon is, it reflects that……

◆The picture implicitly raise the question of the importance of……

◆The picture seems to be humorous at the first glance, but on second

thoughts, you can find the fact that……

过渡句(原因如下)的表述:

◆Several factors, could account for this phenomenon.

◆The reasons for the phenomenon may be complicated, but we can, to

a large extent, attribute it to the following factors.

第一个原因

✧Among the most important reasons cited by people is

✧One of the most popular reason is

第二个原因

✧Another important reason is

✧Also playing the part is

第三个原因

✧The third reason, which can not be neglect, is that

✧In addition,……is also responsible for the phenomenon

最简单的写法:The reason may be as follows. Firstly……Secondly……Last but not least

主旨句:

◆What can be inferred in this picture is virtually a prevalent social

issue and the significance of

◆The purpose of the picture is to remind us of the fact that we should

not neglect the significance of

范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on Square Dancing. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

Square Dancing

The cartoon above shows a group of Chinese old ladies (also called dama) are doing a square dancing in front of a residential building. The noise coming from their amplifier has made the

man crazy. Although he has complained to the government, it seems to be meaningless and ends up with the dama's complete victory.

In fact, it is the freedom of senior citizens to dance together. Square dancing is beneficial to them since it can maintain their health both physically and psychologically. Meanwhile, it helps to enrich their spare time. However, every coin has two sides. Such dancing can easily disturb the peaceful lives of residents in its neighborhood. Nowadays, noisy square dancing has become a common social concern.

To cope with the problem, effective steps must be taken. Firstly, dancing groups should control the sound volume so as not to disturb the everyday lives of other people. Secondly, the government also needs to provide the public with alternative spaces in which they can do group dancing. What’s more, rules and restrictions on noisy recreation and activities should be made while there is no need to ban square dancing in public places.

【点评】

第一段对图画内容进行了解释;第二段谈及广场舞正反面影响,指出广场舞的噪音引起了社会的广泛关注;第三段结合作者的观点,提出三点解决建议。

第一段中ends up with意为“以……结尾”,complete victory意为“大获全胜”;第二段中is beneficial to意为“对……有益”,maintain their health both physically and psychologically意为“保持他们的身心健康”;第三段中Firstly,...Secondly,... What’s more,表示列举,意为“首先……其次……再次”,control the sound volume意为“控制声音音量”。