雅思作文满分范文(5篇)
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雅思作文满分范文(5篇)
雅思作文满分范文第1篇
下面给大家讲解一下小作文的心得和训练方法:
小作文(A类)心得:
为考的是A类,这里只说A类,留学生的话也建议考A类,平时写报告其实就是在练小作文,尤其是理工科。小作文对高级词汇、高级短语的要求没那么高,表达增长下降,趋势波动的词语就那么些,熟练掌握以后灵活应用就好。
当然,为了拿八分,还是可以寻找一些更高级的单词或短语,可以把所有范文拿出来,从里面总结。注意!
在一篇文章里尽量不要使用重复的词,
(这一点在大小作文里都很重要,之后还会再提到)。小作文考的更多的是信息归类能力以及用简洁准确的语言表达这些信息的能力;
前一点尤为重要,如果能很好的归类信息,就很容易做到表达简洁。
如果你小作文字数超了很多,很可能是信息归纳不够,导致重复与啰嗦(还有可能是写了太多不是很重要的细节信息)。
大家都知道根据图表要挑出重要信息:
更进一步的信息归纳是句子层次的,更细致的归纳;
这就需要对信息进行分析,把能放在一起说的信息放在一个句子里简洁明了地描述出来。
♣举个例子
看到这个图大家差不多都会把:
这就是前面说的段落层级的归纳。但是更进一步,如何巧妙地把这些信息安排在寥寥几个句子当中(一般小作文一段也就是三四个句子)既能够包含重要信息,又不啰嗦,认为是难点所在。
比如描写第三组信息(核能太阳能那一组)
如果不加归纳,可能会把三个能源各自描述一遍。这样看到这个图大家差不多都会把petrol and oil放在一段,coal and natural gas 放在一段,剩下的放在一段,范文也是这么做的。这就是前面说的段落层级的归纳。
但是更进一步,如何巧妙地把这些信息安排在寥寥几个句子当中(一般小作文一段也就是三四个句子)既能够包含重要信息,又不啰嗦,我认为是难点所在。
比如描写第三组信息(核能太阳能那一组)如果不加归纳,我可能会把三个能源各自描述一遍。这样缺乏对比,而且会有很多重复的单词,因为他们1980年都是4q,要把4q这个数字重复三遍;要把1980,20XX,2030这几个时间点说好几遍;solar和hydropower都有fluctuation,所以这里也要重复。而如果能归纳一下,就会省掉很多不必要的啰嗦。
雅思作文满分范文第2篇
话题:The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.
The picture illustrates the process of producing electricity in a home using solar panels.
It is clear that there are five distinct stages in this process,beginning with the capture of energy from sunlight.The final two steps show how domestic electricity is connected to the eXternal power supply.
At the first stage in the process, solar panels on the roof of a normal house take energy from the sun and convert it into DC current.NeXt, this current is passed to an inverter, which changes it to AC current and regulates the supply of electricity.At stage three, electricity is supplied to the home from an electrical panel.
At the fourth step shown on the diagram, a utility meter in the home is responsible for sending any eXtra electric power outside the house into the grid.Finally, if the solar panels do not provide enough energy for the household, electricity will flow from the utility grid into the home through the meter.
雅思作文满分范文第3篇
话题:The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding.
The diagrams compare two different methods of defence for homes which are at risk of being flooded.