写作导学课
六级写作要求考生根据所规定的题目以及所给出的提示写出一篇短文，长度不少于150词。写作部分的分值比例为15%。考试时间30分钟。
根据全国大学英语四、六级考试委员会公布的《全国大学英语四、六级考试大纲（2016年修订版）》，六级写作考核的语言技能及要求如下：
1. 考核的要求
要求考生能用英语就一般性主题发表个人观点；能描述图表和图画；能根据提纲、图表或图画等提示性信息作较为深入的讨论、解释和说明。观点明确，结构清晰完整，用词贴切，语言表达流畅，语意连贯，较好地运用写作策略。能在半小时内写出不少于150词的短文。
2. 考核的技能
写作部分考核学生就熟悉话题和情景用英语进行书面表达的能力，要求考生在规定时间内根据所给提示用英语写出一篇短文。
A. 思想表达
1) 表达中心思想
2) 表达重要或特定的信息
3) 表达观点、态度等
B. 篇章组织
4) 围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，重点突出
5) 连贯地组句成段，组段成篇
C. 语言运用
6) 运用恰当的词汇
7) 运用正确的语法
8) 运用合适的句子结构
9) 使用正确的标点符号
10) 运用衔接手段表达句间关系（如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等）
D. 运用写作策略
11) 运用合适的写作策略帮助表达
为了帮助大家更直观地了解六级写作评分标准，现将《全国大学英语四、六级考试大纲（2016年修订版）》附录中的评分样卷提供给大家参考，并且对各主要分数档的范文作简要点评，大家可以据此进行分析，看看自己目前处于一个什么样的水平。
全国大学英语六级考试作文评分样卷
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.
【14分档范文】
We all remember a time when we spoke proudly about becoming the next Bill Gates, or Stephen Hawking, and it’s never wrong to dream big. As time passes by, we gradually realize that most of us are bound to stay ordinary. Yet there’s still a way of achieving excellency. As the saying goes, “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way.”
A perfect life doesn’t have to be so glorious or sparkling as grand plays performed in theatres. The true value lies in our attitude towards tiny daily issues, of which the repairman working in our community is an ideal example. Bicycle-repairing is certainly not the brightest or best-paid profession to many, but this man puts his heart and soul into it and views it as his way of serving for people in the community, which is why he earns high reputation.
As a generation about to step into the fiercely competitive society, we are haunted by the feeling of worry and helplessness. If we strive for accomplishing remarkable success and becoming world-renowned, we’ll probably feel frustrated and disappointed. Only by realizing “Excellency derives from small matters” can we survive and thrive.
【范文点评】
范文紧扣主题，思维清晰，结构严谨，分段合理，并且能够恰当地运用举例论证的方法让文章的内容更加充实。在语言表达方面，选词用词贴切，句式灵活多变，基本上没有错误。
【11分档范文】
“If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way” is the greatest saying I’ve ever heard. I admire many people. Some of them are heroes who do great things, but some of them are ordinary people. They do small things which seems simple and boring.
To illustrate it, I show an example first. My Chinese teacher, Miss Chen, is an ordinary senior high school teacher. She teaches everyday. However, in my eyes, she’s a great teacher. She really loves her students and h er courses are wonderful. She will spend her spare time to prepare a good class. She’s always willing to help students. As a result, she’s a very popular teacher in our school.
Miss Chen doesn’t do great things, but she tries to make her job great. When you do things wholeheartedly, you are great person. Obviously, not everyone has the chance to be a hero, but when we do our small things in great way, we succeed.
This is an amazi ng quality. So we shouldn’t complain that we can’t do great things. Let’s do small things in a great way to be our own hero.
【范文点评】
范文能做到基本的切题与扣题，文字较为通顺、连贯，但是在句与句之间的连接上有时候并不是很紧凑，而且还伴随有少量的语言错误。注：红色标记的地方即为错误或不恰当之所在。
【8分档范文】
A successful great man said: “a s oldier who don’t want to be a general is not a good soldier”. We can find that most of men want to become great man, and do great things! But an army has only one general, most of soldiers can only be a normal soldier. So should the soldiers all go back ho me, just because they can’t become a general? Of course not!
Everyone has his value in his position. An army can’t win battle if has only a general but no soldiers. If you are a soldier, just do your best, stay in your position and everyone will respect you include the general. As my father, although he’s working in the government as a normal public servant not an officer, but he did his best in work. He solved lots of questions for his department, and served for hundreds of people a week to help them, he feels that he’s successful because his leader and all the people he served said to him: “you are a great man”.
