高中英语作文讲解 PPT

pay attention to grammar. The teacher gave us a suggestion that we should attach great importance to grammar.
二.如何使用较丰富的句式
1. 感叹句 How happy I was when I received your letter!
高中英语作文讲解
经典累积
2016高考全国I卷作文范文鉴赏。 =》用词的地道
ask for your help; apply for; make changes
=》句式的高级
我知道你很忙，但如果你能拿出些时间来浏览一下他们并 作I k出no必w要yo的u改h变av我e a会v很er感y 激bu。sy schedule , but I ‘d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes.
4. it做形式主语或宾语
It is of great benefit to keep diaries every day.
5. 定语从句
In my spare time, I regularly take part in the English corner, where I can express myself freely.
2. 弃旧取新:
There is a temple on top of the mountain.
On top of the mountain stands a temple.
There is a clean river in the city
A clean river winds through the city.
第二步：找出修饰成分， 添加修饰成分。
第一步：找出句子主干，
例句：
翻译句子主干。
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为了逃避挨骂，那个淘气的男 孩没关水龙头就跑跑了了。
The boy ran away.
注意：时态和语态
第二步：找出修饰成分，
添加修饰成分
为了逃避挨骂，那个淘气的男孩 没关水龙头就跑了。
=》That naughty boy ran away. =》That naughty boy ran away without turning off the water. =》In order to escape being scolded, the naughty boy ran away without turning off the water.
2. 倒装句 Not only can it help you to form the good habit of studying English but also it can improve your writing ability and skills.
3. 省略句 While walking the dog, I witnessed a car accident.
6. 名词性从句
What is the most important is that I often surf on an English website ---Enjoy Reading.
二、怎样使用较丰富的句式
6. To his surprise, the little girl knows so much. （使用名词性从句）
1. 短语优先： 我们想要和平。
We want peace.
We look forward to /call on peace.
她决定好好学习。
She decided to study hard.
She was determined to devote herself to studying.
一、怎样使用较高级词汇
8. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)
What surprises him is that the little girl knows so much.
7. He didn’t realize the truth until he came back. (使用强调句型) It was not until he came back that he realized the truth.
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如何写出精彩的高档句子 突破书面表达的高分？
1. 使用较高级的词汇 词汇可以衡量英语水平
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2. 使用较丰富的句式
丰富的句式可以使文章增 色生辉 。
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3. 使用恰当的连接词 恰当的连接词， 使文章有 “英语味” ，上下衔接自 然。
一、怎样使用较高级词汇
excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. 4. What we can do is to study hard.
What we can do is to devote ourselves to study. 5. The teacher suggested that we should
=》句句之间的衔接
然而，并且，但是 however--- and---; but;
Writing 写出优质句子，
突破作文高分
学习目标
1. 能够鉴赏范文，掌握文中有用 的句型和好的表达形式。
2. 通过合作讲解： 能够写出正确的简单句 能够创作出精彩高档句
3. 掌握如何评价一份作文。
第一步：找出句子主干， 翻译句子主干。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Suddenly I thought of a good idea. A good idea suddenly occurred to me.
2. You can find my house easily.
You’ll have no trouble finding my house. 3. When he spoke, he felt more and more