初二英语写作(教学课件)

• My mum was born in a small village. In her family, there were seven people: mum’s parents, mum’s two brothers and two sisters and mum. When mum was young, her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker. • At that time, for lack of TV and computer, everyday after school mum along with her brothers and sisters would go home to helped their mother with the housework. For example, they help to make supper or wash clothes. Mum told me that though the life at that time was very hard, she felt happy.
2007年上海市中考写作题：
• Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Story about My Parent(s)”. • ( 以“爸爸 / 妈妈的故事”为题写一篇不 少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) • （ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名 及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
3、It is/was +被强调部分 +that (who) +剩余部分
• 4、It happened (chanced) that +从 句=sb. Happened/chanced to do sth.= sb.did sth by chance
• 5、由as引导的非限制性定句从句/由 where, when引导的定语从句
绝对好用的替换词
• Good– wonderful, excellent, gorgeous, fabulous, amazing, magnificent; • Important– significant, essential, necessary, carry a lot of weight; • But—However, • So—therefore, hence,
• ⑦ 对比，这在中文中也是常使用的方法．如 • Failure is not a crime, but failure to learn from failure is. • When I play, I feel excited, and after it I feel relaxed.
• (3) 通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性 和表现力。 • [原文] He stopped us an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender. • [修正] He stopped us an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
我的父亲母亲
• • • • • 先中文构思 尽量避免复杂的词句 将中文翻译成英文 加入适当的连词，组成文章 注意全文用过去式写作
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关于职业的单词
• • • • • • • • • scientist 科学家 detective侦探 fisherman 渔夫 fire fighter 消防员 journalist 新闻记者 lawyer 律师 barber 理发师 singer歌手 engineer 工程师
举例
• • • • For example— For instance, to take ….as an example, to state a fact as an vivid example,
经典句型： 1、It’s said that… 2、No matter what/which/who/where/when/who se+从句
• [原文] The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.
• [修正] Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.
• (2) 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要 灵活运用诸如到装句、强调句、主从复合句、分 词状语从句等。 • ①强调句 • [原文] My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely. • [修正] My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely.
比较型作文写作
• • • • 常用词组: Prefer A to B I show my strong preference to A. Compared with A, I shed more light on B. • In comparison with A, I find that B is more..
• ② 由what等引导的从句，此处的what相当于 中文中的“所… …”，有很强的概括，如： • [原文] We had to stand here to catch offender. • [修正] What we had to do was ( to ) stand there, trying to catch the offender.
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worker工人 painter画家 writer/author 作家 businessman 商人 pilot 飞行员 dentist牙医 nurse护士 accountant 会计 waiter/waitess服务员 librarian图书管理员 surgeon 外科医生
③ 由with或 without引导的短语。如： He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand. ④ 分词短语．如： Satisfied with the result, he dicided to go on with a new experiment.
• [原文] We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. • [修正] After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.
真题举例
• 1）A Story about My Parent; • 2) In mum’s family, there were seven people: mum’s parents, mum’s two brothers and two sisters and mum. When mum was young, her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker; • 3) At that time, for lack of TV and computer, everyday after school mum along with her brothers and sisters would go home to help their mother with the housework. For example, they helped to make supper or wash clothes. Mum told me that though the life at that time was very hard, she felt happy.
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pharmacist药剂师 anesthetist 麻醉师 manager经理 governor政府官员 President总统 policeman 警察 policewoman 女警察 waiter 服务员 waitress 女服务员 driver 司机，驾驶员
• Primarily, Firstly, one of the most essential reasons, to stress first • Secondly, above from the first point, In addition • Thirdly, Last but no least, • In conclusion, to make a conclusion, to summarize…
文章层次
• 1、开启段落，指出自己的选择结果。
• 2、列出原因，将一些可比项进行比较。横 向与纵向。
• 3、总结
开启段落
• In facing the high school entrance examination, we have to make choices about which school to attend. Between the two choices, I will choose….. The reason for that is are as following.
• ⑤倒装句
• Only in this way can we achieve our goal. • Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.
• ⑥ 省略句
• If so, victory will be ours. • You can make some changes wherever necessary.
句式多变化
• 要抓住英语高考作文得高分的”关键点”, 就需要把好增加句子复杂性和使用高级词 汇这两道关。 • （1）句式要有变化。改变句子的开头方式， 不要一味地以主语开头，接着是谓语，宾 语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语放在 句首，或用分词作状语等。
• [原文] We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning. • [修正] Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.
初三英语寒假课程
第二讲：作文写作精讲
初三英语在线课程 上课老师：蔡老师 上课时间：18：45-19：45
作文写作的字、词、句、段、篇
• 字：工整、清楚； • 词：不拼写错误；能适当掌握高级词汇； • 句：不出现语法错误；句子要逐渐使用复 杂的从句句型，为文章添彩； • 段：段落内容有逻辑性； • 篇：合理安排文章布局；要有逻辑与联接；
6、It +谓语+时间段 +before +主语 + 谓语(before引导的是时间状语从句）
7、When/ So long as/ As long as/ Once +从句，+主句（从句也可放在 主句之后）
• 8、No sooner + had +主语 +done…than +主语 + did • 9、倍数表达句型 • 倍数+more than,倍数+as much as.. • 10、形容词、副词、名词 + as/though + 主语 +谓语 +主句