高中英语——作文讲解
一、考点、热点回顾
1.写作技巧：
首先，要避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。
其次，多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或独立主格结构等较复杂的句型。
第三，注意语法句法的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误：主谓语要一致。
第四，描写人物时，要生动具体，可以选择使用下列词汇。
第五，上下文要连贯。同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节、故事发生的先后次序(时间或空间)．使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理．使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法一并列关系：and、as well、or，转折关系：but、yet、however，时间关系：when、while、after、before、th即、正er that，因果关系：so、therefore。目的：in order to、．列举：for example、such as，总结性：in general、in all、in a word、generally speaking避免病句。
2.注意事项：
（1）在整篇文章中,避免只是用一、两个句式。要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等。
（2）.使用不同长度的句子,通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
（3）.改变句子的开头方式,不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语至于句首,或用分词等。
（4）.学会使用过渡词。
递进furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition, then, etc.
转折however, but, nevertheless, afte rwards,etc.
总结finally, at last, in brief ,to conclude,etc.
强调really, indeed, ce rtainly, surely, above all,etc.
对比in the same way, just as, on the otherhand,etc.
（5）. 避免重复使用同一单词或词组。
（6）. 确定文章用第几人称写, 基本时态是什么。
3. 检查错误：
(1)看字数是否达到要求，看有无遗漏要点。
(2)看文体格式是否正确规范。
(3)看有无语法或用词上的错误。
(4)看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错．标点符号是否有无遗漏或用错等等。
(5)注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。
4.常用短语：
①给观点分组讨论类
开头模版Recently, we had a heated discussion on…..
论述观点when it comes to this hot topic ,
students' views vary from people to people ,
some people think that …,
nevertheless , just as the saying goes" every coin has two sides " ,
so others have the opposite opinion , they consider that …
结尾as far as I concerned, I think that …
②一些精彩亮点连接词in addition , what"s more , furthermore
moreover（另外）
last but not least important ,most important （最重要的是）
worst of all （最糟糕的是）,
to make matters wores（更糟的是）
as far as I concerned, personally（我个人看来）
however , nevertheless（然而）
二、典型例题
1. 英语书信的常见写作模板：
开头部分：
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
结尾部分：
With best wishes.
I’m l ooking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
例文：假设你是李华。你的外国笔友Jane打算于七月来中国，特来信了解中国的社交习俗。请你用英语回一封信，从以下几个方面做具体介绍。
1.见面时的问候方式；
2.对赞美的回答方式；
3.接受礼物时的回应方式；
4.餐晏礼节。
注意：
1.词数100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Jane,
Glad to hear from you and you’re welcome to China in July.
I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.
Yours
Sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Jane,
Glad to hear from you and you’re welcome to China in July. The following are some Chinese customs.
Firstly, we greet each other by saying “Hello” or asking such questions as “Where are you going?” or “Are you busy?” to express our care. Secondly, when praised, we reply with “Oh, no!” or “I’m over-praised”to show good manners. Next, when receiving a gift, we usually say “It’s unnecessary” besides “Thanks” to show politeness and then put it away. Finally, at dinner parties, we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone’s health or success to show that we’re warm.
