托福写作高级课

TOEFL.iBT 高分作文思路＋范文完美重排版 (3)本部分填补了目前网络iBT 备考资料的空白。

根据李笑来老师提供的作文思路与《iBT 高分作文》原书范文重排。

本部分对iBT 考试的独立写作部分与口语部分均具有重要的参考作用。

范文中加粗部分均依为原书所有。

附录一185 题库按关键词分类 (184)照录原书附录附录二李笑来作文笔记（独立部分） (185)根据本人新东方听课详尽笔记整理而成附录三句法多样性专题 (193)附录四例证表达法 (199)时间匆忙，欢迎指出错误，将在后面的版本中修正。

感谢笑来老师给我们提供了如此之好的备考材料，一切版权归笑来老师所有。

仅供广大iBT 考生备考参考，建议购买原版以更好使用。

Lost Lawyer2006 年11 月10 日Page 2 of 201TOEFL.iBT 高分作文思路＋范文完美重排版1. Why people attend college?People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个)：增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野为了实现理想(ideal; idealistic)(如，周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书)为了保证将来的就业机会父母要求子女上大学别人都上大学了，所以自己也选择读书找不到工作("无知"，总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。

上大学如是[1]，去博物馆如是[12]，从事危险运动亦如是[43]。

托福综合写作tpo56解析全文共四篇示例，供读者参考第一篇示例：TPO 56：题目：选商科专业还是选工科专业听力：男生认为应选择商科专业的原因是：1. 商科专业博士毕业后更容易找到工作；2. 商科专业有可能赚更多的钱；3. 商科专业有更多的机会在职场上获得成功；4. 商科专业的课程比较灵活，学生可以选择感兴趣的领域作为专业方向。

综合写作：在TPO 56的综合写作中，讲述了一个关于选择商科专业和工科专业之间的讨论。

男生认为应当选择商科专业的原因在于毕业后更容易找到工作、赚更多的钱以及有更多成功的机会。

而女生则认为选择工科专业更佳，因为稳定性高、薪水丰厚、实践机会多、实用性强。

个人观点：就我个人而言，我认为在选择专业时要根据自身的兴趣和职业目标来进行。

商科专业和工科专业各有各的优势和劣势，因此在做决定时应综合考虑自己的情况。

如果对商业领域充满兴趣，并且希望在企业管理、市场营销等方面发展，那么选择商科专业是一个不错的选择。

而如果对工程技术或者科学研究更加感兴趣，希望在技术领域有所突破，那么选择工科专业可能更适合自己。

总结：在选择专业时，我们应当根据自己的兴趣和职业规划来进行决定。

商科专业和工科专业各有其特点，都是可以为我们提供广阔发展空间的选择。

在做选择时要多加考虑，不要盲目跟风选择热门专业，而是要根据自身情况和发展需要来进行决策。

只有选择了适合自己的专业，才能在未来的职业生涯中取得更好的发展和成就。

【字数：401】第二篇示例：托福综合写作是托福考试中的一项重要部分，考察考生在听力和阅读的基础上对文章进行综合分析和结论的能力。

在托福综合写作中，考生需要在20分钟内阅读一篇文章和听一段相关的演讲或讨论，然后根据所提供的信息写出一篇综合性的文章。

为了帮助考生更好地准备托福综合写作，下面将对TPO56进行解析。

TPO56考察的是关于风景如画的房子是否值得保留的话题。

文章内容主要包括两个方面：一是描述了房子的历史背景和建筑风格，称其为“美如画的明信片”；二是提到了由于发展需要，房子可能会被拆除，这是否值得讨论。

《新托福》课程教学大纲课程编号：课程名称：硕士英语 ( 新托福听说读写)课程英文名称： Insights to IBT TOEFL课程学分： 3 分课内学时： 48 学时课程类别：必修课程性质：学位课授课方式：讲授考核方式：口试、笔试、闭卷一、课程的性质、任务与基本要求(一)性质与任务《新托福》课程是研究生第一学期的一门必修课程。

此课程涵盖托福听力、托福口语、托福阅读和托福写作，对考试内容、提问方式、解题方法和考试技巧进行逐一的讲解和全面的介绍，并且提供模拟试题，以帮助学习对托福考试的形式、要求、难度等有一个全面的了解，提高使用英语的能力。

(二)基本要求本课程终结时，学生应达到如下要求：1、托福听力：托福听力考试的材料类型和题目形式，听具体信息活细节，听总体内容或大意，听暗示内容，听作者观点或态度，听总体结构和其标志词的技巧；2、托福口语：托福口语考试的题目形式，口语流利技巧，产生参与和扩大谈话的愿望，阐述个人感受，如何简答，话题深入讨论；3、托福阅读：托福阅读的材料内省和题目形式，快读 /浏览获取具体信息，识别论点与论证，整体阅读段落大意，中心思想，意义重述，区分观点与事实的技巧；4、托福写作：托福学术写作的题目形式，审题、收集素材、构思、提出观点、让步、评价和反驳、定义与解释、主题句与论证、前后一致、难句写作等。

二、主要教学内容及教学要求THE LISTENING MODULEUnit 1 Introduction主要教学内容1、 General information2、 Listening Test Format3、 Questions Type教学要求要求同学们掌握托福听力的基本技巧，熟悉托福听力的基本构成与题目类型。

Unit 2 Listening Strategies and Skills主要教学内容1、Listening for specific information2、 Identifying detail3、 Identifying main ideas4、 Seeing beyond the surface meaning5、 Following signpost words6、 Being aware of stress, rhythm and intonation教学要求要求同学们掌握托福听力的基本技巧，能够掌握听力基本技能并提高英语的运用技能。

托福写作高级词汇的盘点托福写作备考过程中，高级词汇的积累也是备考的重要工作。

而且灵活的使用高级词汇，也能够为我们的写作提分带来很大的帮助。

那么具体的托福写作考试中，常用的高级词汇有哪些呢?下面小编为大家整理了详细的内容，供大家参考!托福写作高级词汇的盘点1) Come a long way 有很大的进步Human being has come a long from drinking and eating raw food to talking through cell phones.2) It is worthwhile to / it is worth doingIt is worthwhile to spend time in learning music and art, because they can benefit me for life time.3) Give credit for 归功于The convenience that commuters (通勤者)has now should give credit for the newly opened subway lines.4) Give sb. a competitive edge 给某人竞争优势Learning multiple languages give people a competitive edge in this demanding society.5) Remove the barrier for 为(发展，交流等)消除障碍Learning English is a way to remove the barrier for communicating with many foreigners./exchanging with exotic cultures.6) Be the cornerstone of 是的基石Believing in the correlation of hardworking and success is the cornerstone of American spirit.7) Be an essential ingredient of 是的条件A sound health is an essential ingredient of excellent academic performance.8) profit from/benefit from 从中获益People can profit/benefit from the advancement of modern technology, such as computers, the Internet and many digital devices.9) is an indispensable part of 是中不可或缺的一部分Advertising has become an indispensable part of our lives and it has been exerting profound influence on the way we live, work , play and learn.10) plays a pivotal role in 扮演者至关重要的角色It is universally acknowledged that education plays a pivotal role in individual success11) enable somebody to do something 是某人做某事The policy of restricting usage of plastic bags enables people to foster an awareness of environmental protection.12) get accustomed to do something 习惯于做某事People may need time to get accustomed to use less plastic bags which once brought us great convenience, but this practice will definitely benefit/better our environment.13) Someone can utilize something 使用，利用In this day and age, many individuals can utilize the Internet via computers or mobile phones.14) something is in the best interests of someone 最符合的利益Preserving the endangered animals is in the best interests of humanity.15) contribute to 促成(表原因)The restricting of private cars can contribute to the betterment of traffic condition in Beijing.16)be supposed to 应该People living in modern society are supposed to know health is more important than anything else.17)hold fast to 牢牢地把握住(fast 这里是坚实地 )This movie The Pursuit of Happiness tells people that they should hold fast to their dreams, like Chris said, When you havea dream, you should protect it.18)put a premium on/ put a high value on/cherish(vt.)/treasure(vt.) 珍视，重视Good parents always put a premium on children s education.19) bear in mind 牢记It is important to bear in mind that happiness comes from a person s inner feeling not the possession he/she has.托福写作高端词汇有助提升表达水平到目前为止相信一个好的表达能给托福作文带来高分的同学一定不是少数，必须要承认托福考试写作表达好的确有高分，但不少人对于表达水平并没有正确的认识，认为从托福写作范文中搬来一些高端词汇就是提升表达水平的方式。

学校教育Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Colleges or universitiesshould offer students a better job preparation before they can start working. With the competition in the job market increasingly intense these days （随着就业市场的竞争越来越紧张）, college students are under great pressure even before they set out to hunt for jobs.Since it is in universities that students come to learn about and choose their future professions, it is of great significance for colleges or universities to prepare students in areas like making career plans, professional skills and cooperation with others（因为学生是在学校了解和选择未来的职业，所以学院或学校为学生做职业规划，工作技能或与人合作这样的领域的准备至关重要）..Colleges should offer students career planning courses which provide them with direction on how to set their goals and formulate a specific plan to achieve the goals. Many college students do not have a definite idea what they want to do in the future.A survey conducted in many universities over a period of ten years, however, suggests that those with clear goals are more likely to enjoy a successful career. Therefore it will be of considerable use for students to explore their interest and capabilities, as well as to set sensible targets for themselves.In addition, professional skills are a must at work in the future. Man universities focus on the impartation of specialized knowledge, overlooking the fact that professional skills are just as important and should be mastered by undergraduates. There should therefore be more courses that train students in skills which will be applied to their specialized fields. A biology major, for instance, should be capable of carrying out microbial experiments.Furthermore, courses on how to cooperate with colleagues are also needed for the reason that good cooperation is the prerequisite for satisfactory performance at work. Students should be instructed in methods for building good relationship with co-workers, for reaching a consensus on plans, and for distributing tasks appropriately. Not only will this kind of training benefit students’ efficiency at work, but it will exert a profound influence on their everyday life.Therefore, colleges should provide students with a better job preparation with the aim of helping them to achieve what they desire at work. Students, on the other hand, should seize the precious time in universities and try their utmost to get themselves prepared for the career after graduation.The friends that you can have fun with are more important than the friends that you can get help from?Friendship is regarded an indispensable part of life by most people. We cherish friends for a variety of reasons, ranging from the happiness they bring to the favor they do us. Some people maintain that the friends that you can have fun with are more important than the friends you can get help from. But in my view, both kinds of friends are of great importance and we cannot live with either of them absent from our lives.Elevate the learning efficiencyFriends we can have fun with, in some senses, are those who brighten our lives. People all need someone who can share their happiness. We can get a lot of pleasure out of time spent with friends, doing something we all take an interest in. I have some good friends at college, with whom I often go to movies, play sports and enjoy some delicious food that I’ve never tasted. Sometimes we even take a train and travel somewhere far away from our city. We can always enjoy ourselves together. When I am in low spirits, being with them never fails to cheer me up. Their friendship is what I will always treasure.Friends we can get help from, on the other hand, are just as precious to us. They may not necessarily be with us all the time, but they are those to whom we can always turn in our hour of need. Since we cannot manage to handle everything we are faced with, friends who are willing to help us are people we cannot live without. The encouragement they give us in gloomy days, the support they offer when we are in trouble, and the warmth they bring when we are dismayed, are what help us conquer our fear, face difficulties and keep endeavoring regardless of the hardships. As an old saying goes, ‘a friend in need is a friend indeed’. Rather than expect to obtain something, these friends are ready to give us a hand at any time.In conclusion, friends we can have fun with and friends that will help us are of the same significance and neither can be ignored by us. Actually, there are friends that can help us and have fun with us at the same time. And they are friends that deserve to be cherished by us all our life.Compared with people who live in cities, people who live in rural areas can take better care of their families.I agree with the statement that people living in the countryside are able to take better care of their families than those urban residents. People who reside in cities have access to better education resources and health services, admittedly, but there are also many drawbacks that keep them from enjoying leisure time with families and paying close attention to family members’ physical or mental condition. People living in rural areas, on the contrary, are not confronted with these problems.People living in cities are eternally afflicted with stress imposed on them by competition, long working hours, congestion and so on. It is never a piece of cake to keep up with the fast pace of city life. As a result, it is really hard for them to spare some time to be with their families and enjoy the leisure hours. My father is a really diligent engineer who often works overtime. So it is not surprising that my mother keeps complaining about his coming home late. My father, in turn, is getting tired of these complaints. So stress of urban residents can have a negative influence on relationship between family members.In addition, in rural areas it is common to see people live with their parents, while in cities, sons and daughters usually have their own homes after they get married. Living with parents allows people to care for their parents, whose delicate health may be threatened in the aging process. Furthermore, it is always parents’ wish that their sons or daughters can spend more time with them, so living together is a real comfort for parents. There are thousands of empty-nest seniors in cities of China, while the elders in rural areas usually have at least one son or daughter living with them.Besides, the environment in the countryside is much better than that in cities. Children are exposed to the nature, having opportunities to enjoy the beauty of the wild. Kids growing up in cities, however, have to jump from one extra class to another arranged by their parents. When they are not doing their homework, what they do is just watching TV or surfing the Internet. Better education as they may receive, they are deprived of the happiness gained from the nature. Consequently, parents in rural areas can provide their children with more chances to embrace the nature and grow up in more agreeable surroundings.Admittedly, living in urban areas does have its positive facets, but there is no denying that people living in the countryside can take better care of their families. Many people move to cities in pursuit of their fortune, but what they have sacrificed may never be regained.The advice from grandparents has no use for their grandchildren because the world changed a lot during the past 50 years.Should we follow our grandparents’advice or not in today’s rapidly developing society? Positive. Although many people believe that experience of grandparents is obsolete with the society progressing at such a high speed, their advice is still of great value to us.To begin with, change as the society may, the basic criteria have been the same over the past 50 to 100 years. Grandparents’ opinion about what is right and what is wrong can still apply to today’s circumstances. Take my grandmother for example. When I lived with her as a kid, she would tell me stories about the virtues of ancient people, like the modesty of Confucius, the diligent of Kong Rong, and the intelligence of Zhuge Liang. I was fascinated with the characters and determined to be a person like them. Thus my grandmother’s advice helped to shape my personality.In addition, some traditional knowledge grandparents retain is still of great use today. Having been utilized by people throughout the history for thousands of years, the knowledge has been proved right and efficient, which is not going to change just because science and technology has developed. For instance, traditional Chinese medicine is known to many old people. In treating some diseases, the effect of Chinese medicine is amazing. Therefore the knowledge grandparents have may be still useful.Last but not least, our grandparents are aged, admittedly, but that does not mean that they do not change with the society. They may also have new ideas as we do. My grandfather is a good example. He pay close attention to political and economical events happening around the world. So it is unfair to assume that all the elderly people are old fossils. Grandparents’ advice can also keep pace with the society.OutdatedObsoleteIn conclusion, it is unfair to say that the advice from grandparents are of no use for their grandchildren. Instead of just ignoring what they say, we should listen to their advice and decide for ourselves whether we should follow it.Parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes.It is never easy to educate a child. Some people believe it is parents’ responsibility to tell their children what is wrong and prevent them from making mistakes. But it seems a wiser choice to allow children to make mistakes and let them learn from what they do themselves.The impression a mistake leaves on a child is considerably deep. It is right to say that making mistakes and correcting them is one of the best ways for children to become mature. When they make mistakes, they are supposed to take on the responsibility and make up for the loss they cause, which will not only make them remember the consequence of mistakes and try not to do the same thing again, but will help build up their sense of responsibility as well. If parents just tell their children what is right, they may never actually understand it.Another reason why making mistakes is important is that those who do not fear mistakes tend to be more creative. Only by attempting over and over again can people learn what is the best way to solve a problem. Children should be encouraged to try different methods and not to fear mistakes. Edison made thousands of mistakes before he eventually invented the light bulb. If he had been afraid of failure and had not tried so many times, we could still be using candles today.Admittedly, however, there are some mistakes that children had better not make. If the consequence of a mistake is severe and may not be compensated, it is not a good idea to allow children to make it. For instance, when the behavior of a child may offend the moral or law, the child’s parents should prevent the behavior without hesitation, otherwise they may regret not protecting their child later.In conclusion, parents should allow their children to make some mistakes because mistakes help children to grow up and come up with creative ideas. But some mistakes, on the other hand, should never be allowed to occur.。

华东师范大学大学英语高级课程班课程介绍一．课程目的，任务：大学英语高级课程班（A类课程）作为华师大的特色英语班，以培养华师大精英人才为目标，其目的是使学生具备除基本语言知识和技能以外的英语逻辑思辨能力和跨文化交际能力，能够胜任国际化背景下的英语环境中的工作。

此课程不仅是一门语言基础课程，也是拓宽知识、了解世界文化的素质教育课程，兼有工具性和人文性，既培养学生的阅读技巧和能力，也培养学生的文化素质，传授国际文化知识。

通过本课程的学习，学生能够对学术英语和日常通用英语的差异有更多的了解，一方面提高学生运用日常英语的信心和熟练程度，另一方面培养学生的学术英语意识,为其今后参加学校985各项国际交流项目打好扎实的语言基础和学术技能。

二.课程特色：大学英语高级课程序列由大学英语部独立的团队负责课程开发，提供的课程与学校其余类别的英语课程都有所不同。

因为入学起点不一样，高级课程班学生所获得的教学资源将优于其它类别的英语课程，如选派优质教师和使用原版教材授课、由英孚教育集团派出的外籍教师教授听说口语课程以及安排海外研修系列讲座等。

与此同时，对学生的考核要求也明显高于其它类别的英语课程,即在完成各类英语课程考试和学校英语水平考试之外，将要求学生积极参加雅思或托福等国际性考试。

三. 课程设置安排：大学英语高级课程班的学生要求修读11学分的大学英语课程，由通用学术英语必修课程（高级）、英语指定选修课程（高级）、英语任意选修课程（高级）和学术英语系列讲座等四大模块构成。

其中高级学术英语必修课程（高级）8学分，英语指定及任意选修课程（高级）2学分，学术英语考试及海外研修技能系列讲座1学分。

具体课程设置如下：通用学术英语必修课程（高级）（8学分）a) 学术英语视听说（高级）I、II，各36学时/2学分，第一学年的第一学期和第二学期开课；b) 学术英语阅读（高级），36学时/2学分，第一学年的第一学期开课；c) 学术英语写作（高级），36学时/2学分，第一学年的第二学期开课。

托福模拟考试写作-概述说明以及解释1.引言1.1 概述概述部分是文章引言的一部分，用于对即将讨论的主题进行简要介绍和概括。

在本文的概述部分，我们将对托福模拟考试写作进行概述。

托福（Test of English as a Foreign Language）是一个广泛接受的英语语言考试，用于评估非英语为母语的人士的英语水平。

这是一个国际化的考试，每年有成千上万的人参加。

托福考试的写作部分是其中一个重要组成部分，对考生的写作能力和逻辑思维进行考察。

在托福模拟考试写作中，考生需要根据所给的题目，展开逻辑思维，组织论点，并用恰当的语言表达自己的观点。

写作过程中，考生要注意清晰的论述结构、准确的用词和表达，以及恰当的语法和拼写。

因此，托福模拟考试写作不仅考察了考生的英语水平，也考察了考生的思辨能力和表达能力。

通过托福模拟考试写作，考生可以提前了解考试的形式和要求，熟悉各种常见的考题类型，并且通过练习，逐渐改善写作技巧和提高表达能力。

因此，托福模拟考试写作对于准备参加正式考试的考生来说，具有重要的意义和参考价值。

在接下来的文章部分，我们将对托福模拟考试写作的要点进行详细探讨，并总结对于参加模拟考试以及正式考试的考生来说，它们的重要性和启示。

同时，我们也将提出需要进一步研究的方向，以不断完善和优化托福模拟考试写作的教学方法和评估体系。

综上所述，托福模拟考试写作是一项重要的英语考试内容，它可以帮助考生提前准备和适应考试的要求，并为他们的正式考试打下坚实的基础。

在下文中，我们将深入探讨托福模拟考试写作的要点和重要性，希望读者能够从中获得启发和帮助。

1.2 文章结构2. 正文2.1 要点1: 托福模拟考试的意义在进行托福模拟考试写作之前，我们需要明确模拟考试的意义所在。

托福模拟考试可以帮助我们熟悉真实的考试环境和要求，提前感受考试压力，从而更好地应对真实考试。

它是一种训练和准备工具，使我们能够熟悉托福写作题型、提高写作技巧和书写效率。

新东方托福强化写作讲义一、托福作文概述独立写作•A or B型%) Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students.Which point of view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.•agree or disagree型(33%) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study thecourses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.•发散型%)What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.综合写作二、写作分数的明白得530%29%28%27%425%24%22%21%320%18%17%15%三、评分标准详解ADDRESSES THE TOPIC AND TASK5 Effectively addresses the topic and task4 Addresses the topic and task well, though some points may not be fully elaborated3 Addresses the topic and task2 Limited development in response to the topic and taskORGANIZATION AND DEVELOPMENT5 Is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplification, and/or details4 Is well generally organized and well developed, using appropriate and sufficient explanations, exemplification, and/or details3 Using somewhat developed explanations, exemplification, and/or details2 Limited development in response to the topic and task. Inadequate organization or connection of ideas. Inappropriate or insufficientexemplifications, explanations, or details to support or illustrate generalizations in response to the taskUNITY, PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE5 Displays unity, progression, and coherence4 Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though it may contain occasional redundancy, digression or unclear connections3 Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though connections of ideas may be occasionally obscuredGRAMMAR AND VOCABULARY5 Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammaticalerrors4 Displays facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and range of vocabulary, though it may have occasional noticeable minor errors in structure, word form, or use of idiomatic language that do not interfere with meaning.3 May demonstrate inconsistent facility in sentence formation and word choice that may result in lack of clarity and occasionally obscure meaning.May display accurate but limited range of syntactic structures and vocabulary2 A noticeably inappropriate choice of words or word forms; an accumulation of errors in sentence structure and/or usageADDRESSES THE TOPIC AND TASK1.Rephrase the topic – raise the issue2.answer the question – give your conclusion opinion = unsupported conclusion conclusion = supported opinionEg. 1 Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Do you agree or disagree: this change has improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.(1) I agree with this point.(2) I agree that having food that is easy toprepare has improved our lives.At present, various foods are available in markets so that people can easily access them and prepare a happy dinner. I think such a phenomenon is desirable.Eg. 2 Agree or Disagree: Government should spend the large amount of money that is channeling into artistic and cultural projects on basic infrastructure projects instead.Some people are critical of the government using taxpayers’ money to set up statues in the streets or other public places, complaining that this money should be spent more wisely, say, for helping needy people. I beg to differ.Eg. 3 Agree or Disagree: It is inevitable that as technology develops traditional cultures must be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible and you cannot have both together.(1)It is a fact of life that the development of science and technology has been accompanied by a decline in traditional culture. In my opinion, this is not necessarily a bad thing, because some aspects of traditional culture hamper progress andshould be abandoned.(2)It is an undeniable fact that scientific and technological developments bring great benefits to people. Especially since the Industrial Revolution took place, our lives have been made much more convenient by inventions such as trains, planes and computers. But I think that the loss of our traditional culture is too high a price to pay for this.With the fast development of science and technology, …Every coin has two sides. … are a double-edge sword. … have both advantages and disadvantages.Eg. 4 Today, people can work and live in anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?As my personal experience, I can really clearly to feel about these improvement, such as communication technologies andtransportations.Eg. 5 Agree or Disagree: Universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training. Nowadays, recruiting exhibitions holds frequently in many cities. Students graduating from universities and colleges lately are usually worried to take part in because quite a lot of them could not find a satisfying job. What makes it so serious?Eg. 6 Supporters of technology say that it solves problems and makes life better. Opponents argue that technology creates new problems that may threaten or damage the quality of life. Which side do you support? Why?Technology is used in everyday life. People use it in different ways. It can make our lives better, but I think it can be cruel if it’s used for bad purpose.小结：Address the topic and task要幸免：•把题目狭义（举例不妥、说明过度）•把题目中的conclusion当做opinion•把题目中的opinion当做conclusion•表态含糊，没有直接、明确地回答下列问题I partly agree.I prefer the former with some conservation.1. 语序倒置some people ...1 others (2)Make life convenient and easy →easy and convenientLoss of respect and discipline →indiscipline and disrespect3.词性转变Is difficult to …→ has difficulty toHarm sth. → do harm to sth.Make life convenient →bring convenience to life → facilitate/ease life4.换一下主语Sports benefit people. →people benefit from sports.Food is easy to prepare. → People prepare food easily.主动语态<-> 被动语态5.同义词替换6.代词<->名词This → such a practicePhenomenon, behavior, idea, opinion, approach, methodactivity, attitude7.加减修饰语Others believe …→ Other people deem …Some people think → Some believeIt provokes widespread discussion about …It provokes widespread discussion that / whether …… be faced with such a dilemma: whether …There is a growing tendency for sb. to sth.A criticism often heard today is that …I am always amazed when I hear people saying that …When it comes to the issue that …, I/some people believe that …Some deem that …, while others believe that …Deem, think, believe, considerClaim, hold, maintainSupport, advocate, bolster, buttress, sustain, championArgue, contend, dispute, opposeSome claim that …, while others differ. I side with/support the former/ the latter.I deem that schools should require students to attend classes.Schools, I deem / as for me / as I see it / from my perspective, should require students to attend classes.Schools are considered by many should require …Formulated writingI think sports benefit people.ORGANIZATION AND DEVELOPMENT•Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.•Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important. •Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.•Using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplification, and/or detailsThink: specific, detailExplanation = reason + exampleI think I deem, believe, maintain Something, someone, somebody, sometimes, often, used to, in the future, somewhere, a place, an area, many, someKnowledgeIf I am a good person, she will marry me.If I were a good person, she would marry me. Ads make many mass media inexpensive. The media like newspapers and TV receive their major income from the ads, so they do not have to charge much of the buyers. For example, GZ Daily costs only one yuan. We can watch a large number of TV programs by paying only some twenty yuan per month. Otherwise / In contrast / On the contrary / However, if there were no ads, these media would not be the extent that they are today. They might be more expensive, …Enable me to make friends.Help extend my social network.If 一样此刻时，一样以后时。

阅读材料： Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters. However, there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him. One such painting is known as attributed to Rembrandt because of its style, and indeed the representation of the woman’s face is very much like that of portraits known to be by Rembrandt. But there are problems with the painting that suggest it could not be a work by Rembrandt. 伦勃朗是⼗七世纪荷兰最富盛名的画家。

然后，对于有些画作是否确实出⾃他⼿却是颇有争议的。

有⼀副有争议的画归于伦勃朗名下是因为其风格属于伦勃朗，同时画上⼥⼦的⾯庞也同伦勃朗其他画作中的⼈物⾮常类似的。

然⽽，这幅画中存在的⼀些问题却表明这幅画不是伦勃朗的作品。

First, there is something inconsistent about the way the woman in the portrait is dressed. She is wearing a white linen cap of a kind that only servants would wear-yet the coat she is wearing has a luxurious fur collar that no servant could afford. Rembrandt, who was known for his attention to the details of his subjects’ clothing, would not have been guilty of such an inconsistency. ⾸先，这幅画上的⼀个问题就是画中⼥⼦的⾐着有些不协调。

托福听力对话中的“选课”场景“选课”场景是托福听力对话中经常见到的一类场景，下面小编给大家分享这类场景的规律和技巧，帮助考生了解相关的背景知识。

托福听力对话中的“选课”场景是怎样的?选课类的段子在托福听力中经常作为对话段子出现，一般分为两类：一是师生之间谈论选课;一是学生之间谈论选课。

下面分别介绍。

第一类师生谈论选课在这类段子中，老师正是任课老师，学生选的课正是这个老师的课。

这类段子的技巧在于听到开场白部分即可确定段子的类型，确定类型后则题目会做得很顺利，因为整个段子的结构、内容、题目和答案都有相当固定的规律。

具体特征如下：开场白：S：我可以跟您说句话吗?(Can I have a word with you? / Can you spare me a few minutes? / Can I talk to you?等固定句型) T：说吧，但快点儿，我还有事。

/ 说吧，进来坐下说。

以上是开场白部分的基本格局，无具体内容，仅起一个布景作用，因此这部分的题只能是场景题。

中间部分：S：老师，我要选你的……课。

(学生点题，说明来意，此意思点为Topic所考)T：(老师必然首先表示疑问，然后提出具体的疑问和担心)你能行吗?你有这方面的经历吗?这课对你太难了吧?等等。

S：(学生对老师的具体问题必然是否定的回答，但又提出自己的理由)No, but…我并没有达到您说的要求，但我很聪明，不觉得难。

我很感兴趣，很喜欢……。

以上是中间部分的基本格局，主要意思点有：(1)点题，说明选课这个主题内容;(2)老师的疑问，其具体问题;(3)学生的具体情况和说明。

结尾部分：T：好吧，也许我可以答应你，但我要先考虑一下/征求一下其他老师的意见/先看一下你平时的成绩或以前的作品等等。

以上是结尾部分的基本格局，常考的主要意思点有：(1)老师在答复以前要干什么;(2)确定答复的时间;(3)学生的反应。

总之考的是谈话的最后结果。

托福听力场景词汇之选课篇选课(见选课作业和注册办公室) ： credit course ['s??ri?z 学分课程required writing course 必修写作课 ?:s].n.导论课程optional class ['ɑp?? nl]选修课 foundation course [faun dei? ?? n] [k?:s]n.基础课程preparatory course [pri p?r? ?t?ri] [k?:s]n.预备课程：intermediate course [?int??mi:di?t] [k?:s]n.中级课程intro/introduction course [??ntr??]/ [?intr??d?k?? n] [k advanced course [?d v? ɑ:nst] [k?:s]n.高级课程B ：Service Encounter 服务咨询-- Student & Officer备考托福听力需要注意的七点1.已真题为本没有完全了解和熟悉托福听力真题前，不要去听friends，voa，空中美语，等，特别是不要听疯狂英语。

英语高级课程I believe that taking an advanced English course is crucial for those who want to deepen their understanding and mastery of the language. 高级英语课程对于那些希望加深对语言理解和掌握的人来说至关重要。

By delving into more complex grammatical structures, vocabulary, and literary works, students can enhance their communication skills and broaden their cultural awareness. 通过深入研究更复杂的语法结构、词汇和文学作品，学生可以提高他们的沟通技能，拓宽他们的文化意识。

Furthermore, an advanced English course can also help students prepare for international examinations such as the TOEFL or IELTS, which are essential for studying or working abroad. 此外，高级英语课程还可以帮助学生为托福或雅思等国际考试做准备，这对于出国留学或工作至关重要。

In addition to academic benefits, an advanced English course can also provide students with valuable life skills. 除了学术上的好处，高级英语课程还可以为学生提供宝贵的生活技能。

Effective communication is a fundamental skill that is essential in all aspects of life, whether it be in personal relationships, professional settings, or social interactions. 有效沟通是一项基本技能，在生活的各个方面都是必不可少的，无论是在个人关系、职场环境还是社交互动中。